Penname: Redone [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Nov 08, 2013
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MJ Fan ~ Music Lover ~ Constant Reader


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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Reviews by Redone
Summary:

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Shonda is beautiful, sexy, and smart. And she knows it. She's preparing to embark on her Senior year at UCLA and on to real adulthood. But a recent heartbreak smashes her plans, sending her to the safe haven of her Godbrother, Michael Jackson. Holding everything inside and protecting herself by projecting a tough exterior, a bored Shonda decides to stir up some trouble at Neverland. The question is, how much trouble will she end up brewing for herself? Summer just got a whole lot hotter in Santa Ynez.


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35907 Read Count: 5519
[Report This] Published: Jan 31, 2012 Updated: Feb 07, 2012
Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Walls Come Tumbling Down

Dude got some action in this story! I enjoy your novel plotlines and this is definitely one of your best. Any chance of a sequel? Starting up, say, after Michael got divorced from Debbie?

Summary:

Notice To All My Readers:

The Altered Version of Chapter 47

is now uploaded.

 

I’m sorry to tell you that I decided to alter the course of this story starting from Chapter 45.

The chapters are currently being edited and I would upload them as soon as I can.

Don’t be disappointed. I simply felt like I could have done this better.

Take the time to read and tell me what you think.

Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

 

Sincerely,

TheJollyRoger

 

 

All this on the first time she got to see him in flesh and blood.

 

For years she had fantasized him as her Prince Charming,

 

But he discriminated her like a piece of junk he was willing to discard and replace.

 

Her cheeks started burning from embarrassment. Tears pooled up within her eyes making her vision all blurred and hazy.

 

All she could see were their silhouettes now. Her tears were about to get jerked out any second.

 

And she had no intention of crying in front him.

 

 

 

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

 

 

 

“You’re a remarkable person, Wendy,” Michael said,

 

“What I find in you is something unconditional. I don’t want to lose you.

 

And I don’t want to compromise what we have for anything in this world.

 

No matter how many times you say you can’t fit me in with your life, I know you can.

 

Because I know you let me in simply because you wanted.”

 

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What if all that you've always run away from happens to be everything you've ever needed?

What if every step you took towards it takes you even farther away from it?

Would you embark on a journey that has no destination?

 

 


Categories: Romance, Family, Angst, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 181365 Read Count: 19882
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2012 Updated: May 30, 2013
Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: She Got It

Re: writing again.... Yay!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I hope med school is going well. Doing extra writing during grad school is HARD!

I just wanted to let you know that I loved this story and hope that you intend on updating it when you do finally get the time. Even if the chapters remain unaltered :)



Author's Response:

I am writing again! Hee hee hee.

Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

*waves*

Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: She Got It

Re-reading this story because it is so good :)

Summary:

Olivia Sultan started out as a small time girl desperately trying to make it. She got into the papparazzi business when her bills were rinning high and her pockets were running low. Once she's desperate enough she finds herself in the business full time. But what happenes when her next assignment is Michael Jackson? 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30959 Read Count: 8869
[Report This] Published: Feb 22, 2012 Updated: Dec 18, 2014
Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Any chance that this will get updated?



Author's Response: Ok lol yea I miss this one.

Summary:

Melissa Clark has grown up in DC all her life. That is the nice part of DC, where the wealth s to be exact. She’s very dainty and has class. A hard worker and a daddy’s girl. In the past she has dated lawyers and doctors. Nothing lower than Middle class. Michael Jackson has grown up in DC all of his life. But in the rough areas of DC. Areas that label the District for having one of the highest crime rates in the nation. Michael is a drug dealing, weed smoking, molt liquor drinking bad ass. The two end up meeting and from there a love blossoms that neither expected. A love that no one likes nor understand.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 112430 Read Count: 66561
[Report This] Published: Mar 30, 2012 Updated: Mar 16, 2014
Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just reread this story and realized that I never commented before :(. I really hope you complete it when you find the time. You have some of the best stories on this site and this (IMO) is your best. If/when you add on to it, I promise to stop being a silent reader and comment more!



Author's Response: Wow thank you very much I'm glad you enjoy this story and I will update when I find the time.

Summary:

Michael Jackson, a local vampire who believes that he can take down any slayers without any hesitation. But when he meets Alexis, he decides that he wants her all to herself. Will Alexis fall for him or will she abide by her father's rules and slay him?


Categories: Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45006 Read Count: 9760
[Report This] Published: Apr 25, 2012 Updated: Dec 04, 2017
Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Aug 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please keep your character list to your prologue/first chapter. The summary is for a summary of your story ;) Thanks!

Summary:

Rochelle Gonzales is a single mother with a 7 year old boy named Tyler. About 10 years ago was when she got involved with Michael Jackson. What they had was magical and they both truly loved each other. However, after 3 years of being with Michael, she left him. She felt she was holding him back from his career and knowing he was capable of great things, she left him. That same night, Michael had planned to propose to her. Both heart broken and hurting they went on with their lives. Tyler is what came out of their amazing 3 year relationship and she never told Michael about him. She never dreamed of seeing Michael again. Will one night change all that?

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17829 Read Count: 25268
[Report This] Published: Apr 26, 2012 Updated: Aug 11, 2015
Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Aug 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Life As They Know It

Hi :)

Please check out the home page and rules around summaries (e.g. no image larger than 600x500pxls; multiple images only allowed side by side) and make the appropriate changes within three days to avoid the image being deleted. Let myself or skywriter know if you have any problems or questions.

Thanks!

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134102
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very creative story! I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story. I'm glad you two are still writing it!



Author's Response:

Thank u

Summary:

Nicole was a normal 16 year old teenager. She goes to a normal High school but her life is not as normal as it seems she has a very dark past. Nicole and her mom,Mary, was physically,verbally,and mentally abused buy a guy (His name will be seen in the story later on). Now Nicole has reoccuring flashbacks from all the abuse she has went through. She also has visions. Now her heart is broken and beyond fixing and she has little trust left. One summer her mom suprizes her with a trip to California and their she meets Michael Jackson and for her that is the greatest thing that has ever happend to her. What will happen between Michael and Nicole? Will they be just friends or will they be more than friends? That is where you the readers come in and find out for yourself.Michael is famous in this story and it takes place in 2006 through The This Is It Era untill his sad passing and beyond that. This story is rated *R* for bad lanuage sexual content and refferences and vived explanation

Michael

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Nicole

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Mary

MarySamSam

Paris,Prince & Blanket

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^^Quick Note: I Know That This Picture Is New But I Couldnt Find Any Good Pictures With Paris,Prince And Blanket Together. So Yeah....


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 129 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26263 Read Count: 9421
[Report This] Published: Jun 17, 2012 Updated: Nov 17, 2015
Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Begining

Please review the updated rules regarding image size on the home page. Due to the ever growing banners, the limits are now one 600x500pxl image or multiple smaller images placed side by side.

Please make the appropriate changes within the next three days to avoid your images being deleted by an admin.

Let us know if you have any problems or question :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

TRD

Love stoned with Diana Ross, Michael Jackson faces bad break-up with the only woman he trusted most, all his life. He paces the next stages of his life, walking wounded with a chip on his shoulder; grieving over his past and heedless about his future. Appalled by the pain of love, he vows to himself that he would not ever fall in love again as he continues to be a player since he became a pleasure seeker for his needs. At this time of dried and withered, an young doctor passes his path like a breath of fresh air... He wants her, he gets her and before they knew a steamy sordid affair begins as he lays out ground rules that their clandestine relationship will be based only on sex. But without his realizing it, it poses a threat when he finds himself falling for her. When love hit him like a freight train for the second time, he fell hard.

"Sex is the only consolation you have when you can't have love"

NOTE: All of the above are discussed in this story. I do realize that this is a very senstive and controversial subject but I want to let you know that I'm in no way trying to portray or paint Michael in a bad light or executing an over exposition of his private things or embarrassing him. My sole intention of this is just trying to vindicate Michael by learning as much as possible to at least get and give a slight view of why he made the choices the way he did and a little spotlight on the troubled life he lived behind the curtains.

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 318445 Read Count: 42863
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2012 Updated: Sep 13, 2017
Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 32: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥

Happy Birthday and Merry Christmas! Thank you for a heartwarming chapter <3



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) God, Thank you!! *hugs* Merry Christmas to you too!!! Aw, Thanks a lot again!!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 31: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

What?!?! NOOO! Let her live. You've got me on the edge of my seat, this story is so good. Please don't let her die



Author's Response:

HEY girl!!! :) I'm so sorry, hun, we'll see ;) Lol I really am sorry to leave you like that! I have an awful liking for leaving you guys in cliffhanger though :P Thanks for the review! Aw, you will see hun! :) Lots of love your way! <3 xx

Reviewer: Redone Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 30: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥

I am :)



Author's Response:

Hi Redone :) Thank you girl!!! Lots of love <3 xx