Date: Oct 08, 2016 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13
Valentino knows of his appointment whit Steel because he has followed. Steel he left because he understood Lindsey loves Valentino
Author's Response:
you are correct.. though V didnt follow them as you will see in the next chapter... thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow, this is so overwhelmingly sweet. I loved it. Please give us more!!!
Author's Response:
working on it. will update soon. thanks for reading
Author's Response:
working on it. will update soon. thanks for reading
Date: Oct 07, 2016 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
Omg! My prediction came true. He showed up,even though its three days later. Lindsey better open the door and listen. Michael/Valentino's explanation better clear on what needs to be said.
I see he been talking to Steele about his bluebird. It shows his true feelings for her based on what Steele said and how he reacted when he saw the note. I also like how Valentino is going by his real name with Lindsey.
I hope all goes well in the next chapter. I love this story.
Author's Response:
There was a reason why it took so long. it will be revealed in the next chapter. glad you love it. thanks for reading
Date: Oct 07, 2016 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
3 whole days? Really Michael/Valentino? Really? He took his damn time he better have one hell of a explanation
That cliff, I can't wait for more
Author's Response:
theres a reason why he waited so long but you will have to find out in the next chapter. all will be revealed. thanks for reading
Date: Oct 07, 2016 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your build up is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter...hope it's soon...thanks!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 11:08 am Title: Chapter 13
Poor Lindsey first a feral cat on a tin roof, piggy wiggy, a muskrat, at least now she's back to bluebird LOL. Jess is such a good friend. Her character reminds me of Deb from Dexter with her mouth and her fearless say it as it is attitude. So excited for the next update to know the big secret! This was a great update tho, I loved how Steele talked about Valentino without him knowing she knew...tongue twister. And I wonder how Valentino will feel about Lindsey's attempted date lol not that he has any say say say.
Author's Response:
I'm not familiar with dexter. i have to admit, I kind of have funn when it comes to Jess's charecter. shes that no holds bar friend who tells it like it is kind of friend. thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:17 am Title: Chapter 13
Yes! She booked a date! But her heart is with Valentino!
So Valentino told his friend Stelle about Bluebird? He really does care for her...
Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job Tink!
Author's Response:
yes she did but it was a dud no fault of Steeles but because of her feelings for V. thanks for your help and for reading.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 09:51 am Title: Chapter 13
Grrrr!! I have to wait another chapter?! You're killin' me here, girl!! lol! This chapter was cute; poor Lindsay is so hung up on Valentino that she couldn't even enjoy a date with a hunk like Steele. Valentino has gotten her all twisted up inside. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
yes sorry..i have to give you reason to come back. no worries though all will be revealed in next chapter. poor lindsey..poor steele...he really took the brunt of the messed up relatioship. thansk for reading.
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2016 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm so happy just for the fact you updated! The chapter was sooo well written. Gosh! She's struggling so hard the battle of the heart, I can feel her rage and silent hope deep inside her. Next time, Valentino must reveal his secrets and don't act like a flirty boy (I love him though). And... I just want to say he is the only man in whole HIStory who looks sexy as hell with jewels, a braid and red leather pants, thanks God!!
Author's Response:
you are so correct. who else could pull off the french braid and red leathers. certainly is a fav look of mine...like lindsey, maybe thats why that photo is really nice too. thanks for the review
Date: Oct 04, 2016 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh my fucking God!!!!! HOW could you leave it there???? I'm practically jumping through my laptop screen right now (you owe me a new laptop by the way hahaha) screaming at Lindsey to hear him out. The whole Lizzie thing has more to it than meets the eye, and I'm DYING to know more!!! Jesus Christ on a skateboard - I need the next update!!!!!!!!
The BOTD video was an amazing shoot, great stuff using it for this chapter. I don't know any MJ fan who didn't collapse at the sight of him in his red leather. His hair was remarkable too, I don't know many guys who could pull off a french braid and still look that hot <3
Come on come on come on - next chapter PLEASE!!!!! xx
Author's Response:
LOL..you are crazy and I love it. BOTDF is one of the best and that's why I decided to use it. he looked good for sure. thanks for reviewing
Date: Oct 04, 2016 05:28 am Title: Chapter 12
I do understand Lindsey's anger/disappointment in Michael in this last chapter because he IS flirting with her constantly and Michael could have explained to her MULTIPLE times his relationship with Lizzy. I know in the beginning he felt it was off limits, but now they have gotten closer, he keeps flirting with her, calling her, bringing and picking her up from airport... he could have easly explained to her what the situation is. So Michael loses major points for that! As for Lindsey seeing who the real Michael is (as someone else mentionned in the reviews) I feel like Michael has shown her a side to him that others may not see. He has shown her how caring he is, has spoken to her about his family, how important his daughter is to him.. Of course he still has to show a lot of the real him to Lindsey but to seek comfort in Lindsey when things bother him should give her signs that there is definitely something more than just flirting/gigolo'ing between them. And of course he has to show his gigolo side to her, she is interviewing him for that. I feel like they wont be able to stay apart for very long, but their reunion should be all about him explaining who the hell Lizzy is.. and then she can disappear =)
Cant wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
why do i get the sense you dont like Lizzy? lol...you are not alone. thank you for the very thought provolking review you have made alot of excellent points. Hopefully I wont disappoint when the truth comes out. thanks for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
She will go back to her lousy appartment, edit the interview, hand it in and when it's published, she will quit the job and get another... But what will Valentino do? Will he go visit her at her appartment? He should do that and they should talk openly , if he really cares about her
Author's Response:
you shall see real soon. hopefully i can wrap it all up in a pretty little package next chapter. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 12
"Maybe I liked it so much because you could see the bulge in his tight leather pants." - that cracked me up so hard :)). After having read this chapter, I had to watch Blood on the dance floor immediately. And boy, Michael is so hot and sexy! :)).
Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
he does look mighty fine in BOTDF video. I think that's why I choose it for my photo shoot. it was the perfect setting in my opinion. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Oct 03, 2016 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hey hon! Sorry for the late reply, got a bad cold and though I did read your new chapters while sick, I wasn't much into responding quite yet! Now onto the new chapter, loved it as always! ;) and reading this makes it obvious that Michael does care about Lindsey, maybe even love her as I felt the person he mentioned that he loved was her. He was making it very obvious in how he stared at her and he also likes how Lindsey looks, finds her attractive, to bad she don't find herself pretty, but alot of us women go through this. I am happy she is finally speaking up for herself and being stronger, but she should of listened to what Michael had to say, but of course you gonna make us wait til chapter 50 to find out! Heheh ;) Michael's issue with his child and this woman makes me think Jane Eyre, where maybe he was tricked into marrying this woman? Or cause of her being pregnant with his child, he chose to do the honorable thing? Maybe he figured he would never find anyone to love anyway. And then Lindsey came along! But we don't even know if he is truly married. So who knows except you. I loved the arousing dance shoot....wow...hard for Lindsey not to jump him I am sure. I wonder if she is really gonna try and find a bf just to get laid? lol
Author's Response:
sorry you were sick. I missed you. i have been sick too so I get it. he certainly does appear to have feelings for her. Maybe Mr suave is less confident once he's himself? I tried to make her like most of us feel on a day to day basis with doubts of our self or at least I like to think most of us have insecurities. She's not as weak as once thought though she just has alot banking on the relationship prior to it becoming personal. Thanks for coming back :) oh and it wont be 50 chapters...1-2 max
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2016 10:47 am Title: Chapter 12
Lindsey should book an escort through his escort service so she can get laid, but not Valentino someone else and then have Valentino find out about it. See how much he likes hearing about her sexscapades with other people.
Author's Response:
Well than you will like the next chapter then. Wink wink