Date: Oct 15, 2016 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Continue! You are so good with characters...this would be a really interesting turn..thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
thank you.. I try to be original. thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Oct 15, 2016 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
Michael has left behind Lizzy and her old identity Valentino so good to know Lindsey will later star a true love story and the same for Lindsey.
Author's Response:
you are correct. it's time for a new beginning with his new identiy thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Oct 15, 2016 12:26 am Title: Chapter 14
JESUS CHRIST IN A SHOPPING CART!!!!!!!!!!! You CAN'T leave it here...you have to keep going!!! I dunno about anyone else, but I've been waiting WEEKS for this!!!! They need to have lots of steamy,. passionate sex where all the repressed feelings come out, the desire for each other holy fuck I'm making so many typos here because I'm typing so fast!!!! Lmao don't even THINK about quitting here - this can go SO much further. I'm yelling at the screen for christ's sake...hubby's taken refuge up the stairs and the cats have run for their lives hahaha :) I almost jumped over the kitchen table when I checked and found you'd updated wee-heeeeee I can only imagine the wallpaper's gonna peel off Lindsey's bedroom wall...please do another chapter, followed by another ninety seven!!!
Amazing story, and such a great feeling to come home from nightshift and find an update :) Love this so much - please continue xxx
Author's Response:
you crack me up with your crazy sayings. your poor husband and cats. they are going to move out the next time i update..lol thanks for your humor I love it
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wow even if you end the story with this chapter i have to say it was an amazing story...thanks for sharing it with us...i loved it! ^^
Author's Response:
thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. it has been fun writing it
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 14
Miss! This story must continue, I'm sure is just the beginning. I'd like to know what will be the path they will follow to persuade happyness. Not a prologue yet, not even a last chapter. A Masterpiece must keep going 'till it asks for it, but not yet. You're a great writer and I'm sure inspiration will reach your mind. As I was saying you did a great plot, for next step you should develop elements which are missing. Great update!
Author's Response:
thanks for the vote of support. I am mulling over my options
Date: Oct 14, 2016 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG I absolutely loved this chapter! You don't understand how much I look forward to updates with this story so please dont end it! its just the beginning for them. Glad the Lizzy explanation is finally out there, everything definitely makes sense now.
Id like to read about them actually enjoying eachothers company and not being conflicted about mixed signals and Lizzys interrupting them and see where Michael getting back into music will lead him, and also Lindsey's new job since she promised him she would quit. I'd also like to see Lindsey get out of that hellhole apartment and move in with Michael which means Lizzy might get kicked out so there should be drama at that point... lol
but most importantly, we need to know if Michael lives up to her expectations in bed in the next chapter! but pls dont end it, the characters and storyline are so refreshing. =)
Author's Response:
lol about the bed expectations. we shall see. i'm still mulling over the possibilities and directions to take. thanks for the support
Date: Oct 14, 2016 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
Almost feel like they're rushing things? Well that makes a lot more sense glad to see hes opening up and being honest. How is she going to know if she's seing valentino the casanova or michael the person? She hasnt seen much of michael the person yet. Anyways this was lovely thanks
Author's Response:
considering they have known each other for 2 1/2 months I would beg to differ. do they know eachother fully no but they have a start. thanks for reading and the support
Date: Oct 14, 2016 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
I was going to review on this earlier but forgot to come back to it. This was extremely well written loved the incorporation of blood on the dance floor as a means to make lindsay realize her feelings towards him even if it was unintentional that he made her jealous or was it? Hes been leading her on for long enough im glad she stook up for herself. I saw that you used my idea i suggested of him doing sexual assault therapy in his services that was really profound and powerful and really speaks to his character. Also would you be so kind as to credit me as i did give you that idea i meant to ask earlier but i got caught up with school and life commitments. Thank you for this awesome chapter can't wait to read more:)
Date: Oct 14, 2016 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes!! What I wished for happened. Please continue it, I don't want it to end. I would like to see their relationship grow even more, if possible.
Author's Response:
I will be consider all of my options before I decide. I only want to give you my best work so I have to have a direction to continue. stick with me. thanks for the support.
Date: Oct 14, 2016 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 14
Continue it please!!
Author's Response:
we shall see where the inspiration takes me. be patient with me. thanks for all of your support
Date: Oct 14, 2016 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
It was worth the wait
Yes continue, maybe a little of a time skip or so? And how their relationship is? Maybe a sequel?
Author's Response:
thanks, im glad you like it. it will be considering my options so please be patient with me. thanks for all of your support so far.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg what a complicated situation with Lizzy. I never saw that one coming. I still don't get why they have to live in the same house if all they are doing is coparenting. It's weird and will only confuse Katie as she grows up. I think it would be better for her if they were friendly but lived separately and she never knew any different, so she doesn't get hurt when they move on to other people and 'split up'
I want to see how Lindsey's family reacts to her new boyfriend. I don't know any parent who would be happy their child is dating someone who is a gigolo. I think a lot of people in Lindsey's life will have a hard time seeing beyond Michael's very recent past.
And I still think Lizzy is a psycho.
Author's Response:
they live together because neither wanted to be away from katie and sharing custody wouldnt work for them at the time. obviously that will change if i continue. thanks for all of your support through the story
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
Finally!! I've been waiting for this! I am so glad that Lizzy was just a friend of his who was worried about people finding out about her secret life. I was about to say that there was no need for her to act like such a bitch, but then again, if she was trying to protect her secret with Michael she would have done whatever she had to do to drive her away. I'm so happy for Lindsey and Michael. I'd like to at least maybe see an epilogue. Like, a few years later and Michael and Lindsey are married and have a child. I think that would be a nice finish to the story.
Author's Response:
hopefully Lizzy's story made sense enough. time will tell where i go with this. be patient with me as I only want to commit to more if I can continue to give you something great thanks for all of your support
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2016 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
What a great chapter!
Michael has revealed who he is and his feelings for Lindsey!
I could only imagine the sparks that are going to fly in Lindsey small bedroom.
Hmmm.. I know we talked about this... I'd like to see a prologue to this story! A where are we now sort of a thing..
As far as a spin off! I guess it depends on where you would want to take these two!
Either way I am in for the count!
Author's Response:
time will tell where I go. I want to make it great so have alot of mulling to do. thanks for all of your help and support.
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2016 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
that was a great chapter Tinker, i wanted it to go on and on, lol! its like a tractor beam, always pulls me in, can't wait to read more. i'm so glad that Michael has went to her place, as always keeping us on a cliffhanger, naughty! made me wonder what michael has been sharing with steele about miss bluebird? hmm update soon still loving it!
Author's Response:
actually the chapter would have been too long if i continued so I had to end it where I did.. thanks for reviewing