[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 70
Oh, God! The moment of truth! I hope Jo forgives him, but not right away. He needs to work for it. I can't wait to see what his reaction is gonna be when he sees that she's pregnant.
Author's Response:
it should be interesting for sure. stay tuned. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 70
Getting intense...I think the next installment will be exciting
Author's Response:
guarantteed for sure. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 70
This cliffhanger tho?!?!?! Michael is found be in for a shock himself when he sees her. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
i know i know..but if i continued it would have taken away from the chapter. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 10:24 am Title: Chapter 70
Okay you're right, its just fanfic and they are not real, well Michael's real, but you know what I meant, but this just shows how damn good of a writer you are! If you have me truly upset and hurting for a fictional character, you are doing something right! I read romance novels and they have angst in their stories but its never affected me like yours has, so forgive me for sounding mean, I am just so into Jo and Michael's relationship, I want it so badly to continue. And yes you need to get yourself published and write a romance novel, you would be wonderful at it. And I did read the new chapter, despite what I said and loved it of course. Love that Michael's gotten better...I hope. And another cliff hanger! :p Curious how Michael will respond when he sees her pregnant! lol I wondered if he would think the baby is someone elses? That kept going through my mind since he has been gone for awhile. Well if Michael does get Jo Jo back, he needs to be the one taking care of her!
Author's Response:
sorry if i seem a little touchy its just i've had a bad experience with people reading a story once. in fear of flying when I killed the lead people got really nasty with me telling me they hated me and how could i do that.
thanks for the compliment though. you arent the first person to tell me i should publish. that would be a hoot...
thanks for sticking with it. :)
Date: Aug 23, 2016 07:36 am Title: Chapter 70
Noooooo! I hate cliffhangers. But yay! Michael got help. Hopefully Jojo will sit down and listen. I wonder what michaelnis going to say when he sees that Jo is pregnan . They have a lot to talk about. Great chapter. Please update soon. I'm anxious for them to talk.
Author's Response:
i know but if i didnt stop where i did it would take away from the chapter and it would be too long. I promise it will be worth the wait. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 06:08 am Title: Chapter 70
Aaaah how can you leave it there? Too much suspense.....it's killing me. P!ease update again soon.
Author's Response:
i had to the chapter would be too long otherwise and it would have taken away from it if I didnt end where i did. patience is a virtue..lol thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 02:11 am Title: Chapter 70
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! How could you leave us like that? :'(. I want to read more so badly :'(.
Anyway, I was very happy to see a new chapter. Thank you.
Author's Response:
you will just have to be patient. i promise it will be worth the wait. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:29 am Title: Chapter 70
There has to be bad times for the good times to really hit ya in the feels. I trust you you're a great writer :)
I don't think Jo will be so forgiving, at first lol. Or maybe Michael will see her showing and think it's someone else's baby and freak out xD oh geez this cliffhanger is killin me!
Author's Response:
amen sistah...people have such a hard time understanding its not always daiseys and watter balloons...you need drama to get keep it interesting. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:16 am Title: Chapter 70
She'll be surprised for sure maybe even mad or that surprised she's unable to speak and Michael is probably even more shocked when he sees she's obviously pregnant
Author's Response:
it promises to be an interesting next few chapters...thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 22, 2016 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 49
I have been reading your story in the past few days and I absolutely love it. It's nice to think about Michael leading a somewhat normal life. I hope he got to enjoy moments lke these in his real life. On to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I've been meaning to read this for a while, I finally had some spare time and now I'm hooked!
Michael is a hot mess. He needs LOTS of help. Months of rehab. I really hope he sticks with it and cleans himself up.
I feel really bad for Jo she is devastated. But she sure isn't thinking straight cuddling up with her best friend's boyfriend in bed like that. Just because your man left you does not give you permission to steal someone else's least of all your best friends. Not appropriate on many levels. Adam seems to always want to rescue her it makes me wonder if he has romantic feelings for her. Poor Jules. Jo is being just as selfish as Michael can be right now, even if that isn't her intention. If she doesn't watch herself she is going to lose her friends. I'm glad she's moving home, with the support from her family and friends provided Jules doesn't kick her ass she and the baby will be just fine with or without Michael.
I totally get why she didn't want to hear Michaels message but even if she is completely done with him she needs to tell him about the baby. Maybe it will be the extra motivation he needs.
I'm rooting for these two to work it out since they both love each other so much. It's really sad what has happened to their relationship.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 69
Oh no! Jo don't give up on Michael! He loves you! Hopefully he will get help he needs and come back and be the man she deserves!
Date: Aug 15, 2016 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 69
I wish she had listened to the message, but I don't blame her one bit. Michael needs to get his life together; he barely has a chance left.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 69
Aww man, I wish Jo had listened to the message. Michael really needs to know about the baby. I can't wait to see how his meeting with Jonathan goes.
Author's Response:
she should have but she's had enough. She's really hurt that he wouldnt tell her where he is. thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 15, 2016 03:43 am Title: Chapter 69
WOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
What a catch-up! I've had about 8 chapters to read through (RL has been crap lately, just work, sleep, work, sleep) and so much has happened! I KNEW Jo was pregnant hee hee...call it a mother's instinct :) And poor Michael...if only he knew maybe that would give him the strength and the kick up the ass he needs to get his life back on track. God bless Adam for being there and supporting Jo, especially in this installment. Hoping baby is ok!! you'd think this was RL the way I'm yelling at the screen and shaking my head lmaooooo.
Fantastic work here honey, you deserve an award for what you've put into this. I also jumped on to read Gigolo - woah that's gonna be a HOT one when those two get together! Seriously thinking about getting a new laptop, as my screen has already showed signs of melting with what's going to happen in that story.
Keep up the AMAZING work, both stories are top-notch and deserve to be printed and sold...you're THAT good xxx
Author's Response:
I was wondering where you've been. Ive missed your reviews. Jo is lucky to have Adam for sure. LOL you are too funny about your computer. Glad you read Gigolo. I have to admit I'm quite fond of it. Thanks for the compliments and for reviewing.