Date: Jun 15, 2016 01:24 am Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the new chapter. In my opinion, there is a high possibility that Michael will show at Nadine's room with lukewarm water in a balloon :)). But who knows? After all, he is a gentleman. Well, a naughty one :))
Date: Jun 03, 2016 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 18
Nadine and Michael's relationship is adorable and sweet. Such a good story. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Date: May 02, 2016 11:59 am Title: Chapter 18
Awwwwww this chapter is really sweet. Thank you for having updated. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Mar 03, 2016 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awwwww Michael is so cute in his clumsy way :)). Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Jan 16, 2016 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael is so adorable although he is clumsy :)).
I think this story is really beautiful and sweet. You've always came up with interesting ideas. And your writing skills is also very good.
I am looking forward to reading more. Thank you :).
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg!! I love it been waiting 4 ever 4 this story 2 b updated since the 1st time I read it!! Been hooked since!! Keep writing I love it!!😀😁
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2015 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
It's about time!
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2015 08:35 am Title: Chapter 12
OH my. This was a great chapter.
Please up date soon.
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2015 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awesome so far... I like it. :)
However, I do have a feeling that Michael is right - the trip to New York will change not only the course of his life, but also that of the entire world, too...
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2015 11:22 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow... this chapter is really good, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... especially this part:
“You really are naive, Nadine. And I can’t just stand aside and watch that rich and famous bastard mess with you then toss you aside.”
“Keith, stop calling Michael bad names. Please. Look, you aren’t a saint either. Fooling around with a married guy! Can you imagine what happens when his wife finds out? Have you no compassion for that woman? If you want to preach morality, then start with yourself. And once you’re pure white like the snow, then start picking on others!”
Keith grew very pale in the face. He let go of my shoulder and walked out of my house without a word. Truth is, it was for the best for now.
Wow. She sure showed him a thing or two when it came to being a hypocrite right there. I hope Keith takes her words to heart and realizes that she was right and that he said what he did out of jealousy, too.
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Date: Apr 14, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
excellent chapter, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2015 12:55 am Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for chapter, I really like this story.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2015 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lemme guess Keith wants Michael for himself?
Author's Response:
You're baiting me...but it ain't working :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2015 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
Keith's thinking is really skewed. Sometimes when two people are drunk they do things they later regret. It doesn't have to mean that one took advantage of the other.
For a gay man, he is awfully sexist against men in his thinking.
Author's Response:
Keith feels threatened in his friendship with Nadine. He may have other hidden intentions...but I'm not giving anything away....