[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 07:56 pm Title: CHAPTER II - Beginning
Ok, I am loving this story!!! She is too funny! Ana needs to correct herself with that newbie shit though. Hopefully it'll change.
Date: May 30, 2016 02:15 am Title: CHAPTER LV - End
So great !!!! Amazing story !!!!
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2016 04:07 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
So late seeing that this story is over based on other reviews but I am only on chapter 31 and I'm in love with this story from top to bottom. Love how you portray Michael and how realistic you make Ava/Jean out to be with her first person!
Date: Mar 18, 2014 10:09 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
wow that was a great story <3 i cried so much..... U R a wonderful writer so go on please with new stories <3
Author's Response:
Thank youuu!! I will :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2014 08:55 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
"Is it true that you are pregnant? Are you already married to him? Is Michael Jackson a virgin?”
Bwahahahahaha. I literally had to stop reading and write this comment before finishing the chapter. Those two options in the same line. Too. Funny.
Mike's texts melted my heart. Seriously. I think I may need to see a doctor. How she could go to the press before going to him is just....*melodramatic sigh*
And, hey! No dissing on SF. There are some nice beaches (mind the syringes and stoners), sun, waves, and killer shopping.
((pouts))
Okay, over it. It was hard, but as soon as Ava started freaking out about the man dressed in black with white trainers, I couldn't stay mad. Heck, by the time I reached "'forever be Lisa’s lover' he cringes", I was positively enamored.
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Le sigh. Such a fitting ending. I didn't see it going out like that, and yet I wouldn't want to change the end one bit. I'm going to miss this story. It was so fun that I'll probably end up rereading it soon.
Shall I start nudging for a sequel, now?
Author's Response:
Hey Redone! LMAOOO, thank you so much for this funny review haha! I honestly didn't think it would end like this! But hey, it's a happy ending, right ;)
A sequel?! Oh IDK lol! I honestly don't know what to write about. I like my readers to imagine how happy Michael and Ava are lol! No need more drama!
Date: Mar 13, 2014 11:56 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Aww such a happy ending! Great story! I enjoyed every minute of it!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing it too :D
Date: Mar 12, 2014 05:48 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Aww that was a great story, I'm gonna miss it
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2014 10:11 am Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Oh my...this has been such an amazing story! I'm just so sad that it's finally come to an end, although they say all good things do eventually. I love your writing, your style, your imagination. All I can do is hope that you continue to write, and that I can track in on any stories you do in the future.
You've crossed oceans with this story, so well done, big hugs and much love to you for showing Michael in the way you did. I'm going to miss you!!
Author's Response:
Hey Tiger! Awwww, thank you very much for this lovely review! I will definitely continue to write, I have so many idea for new stories!!!
"You've crossed oceans with this story, so well done, big hugs and much love to you for showing Michael in the way you did. I'm going to miss you!!"
You're so sweet,t hank you again :')
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2014 09:44 am Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Awwwwwww that ending was beautiful! I'm smiling so hard right now, you just made my afternoon :)
I would love to see a sequel with lots of cute babies. Not that you don't have enough stories going to keep you busy or anything.........
Author's Response:
HEY CAMILLE :D Aww, I'm glad you liked the ending :D A sequel? Oh I'll think about it :)))
"Not that you don't have enough stories going to keep you busy or anything........." LMAOOOO! I swear I have so many stories I have to finish first. But I'll keep th sequel idea in mind :)
Date: Mar 12, 2014 05:27 am Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Such a perfect ending. I loved this story!! Sorry I couldn't comment on each chapter like I wanted to, the story deserved it! But life has been so busy lately, lol. Anyways, well done, love. I loved it!! ;,)
Author's Response:
Hey you :) Thank you :))) It's ok, the most important is that you liked the story :D
Date: Mar 11, 2014 10:29 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
Awwww, it's over all ready? I loved this! Pretty please, could you consider doing a sequal. I really would appreciate it. Thanks for sharing your stories with us. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, it's already over :( You're welcome, I really loved writing this story :D And this Mariah Carey gif lool >>>
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 08:45 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
Awwwww! A disney ending lol! WOOOOO!! XD thank you for the shoot out Annie! I am more than happy to review your awesome stories! Now! Time for the internet dating story lol. You got me hooked on that one now. :) BRAVO BRAVO ENCORE ENCORE! *wolf whistles*
Author's Response:
Yes, a disney ending LMAO! Now they just need to get married and have tons of babies :) Aww,you're welcome. Thank YOU for always reviewing :DD Thank you for this lovely review and the rate :))
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 08:39 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
omg i totally didnt know the end was this close. please tell me this isnt the end of ava nd michael
Author's Response:
Yeah it was a very eventful story but they end up together and it's great! Aww, IDK about a sequel. I'll think about it :)
Date: Mar 11, 2014 07:38 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
AAAAWWWWWW!!!! *wipes tears* That was beautiful. What am I suppose to do with my life now? lol I really enjoyed this story, everything was amazing. Thank you for the shoutout, that was really sweet of you. If only there were more people like Ava, this world would be a better place. She put all those paprazzi and journalist in place. MHMM *snaps fingers*
Author's Response:
Hey Neece :D Aww, you're so adorable lol! Thank you for reviewing often girl! Well, if you don't know what to do with your life, you can still read my other stories lmao!
"If only there were more people like Ava, this world would be a better place."
Date: Mar 11, 2014 07:18 pm Title: CHAPTER LV - End
A happy ending? Thank goodness. I'm glad Janet hit Michael upside that apple shaped head of his, and all the others who told him to get his shit together. Ava looks amazing in that outfit too! Mike would be a fool to let her fine self go chile. Lol. I hope they live happily and make lots of cute babies now. He needed to see that he would never find a woman like her. Ever.
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! Yes, they are finally happy and together! Thank God for Janet :) Like you said, Michael's entourage was mad at Michael because he was mad at Ava. But they finally all understood Michael needed her in his life and they let him know!
Yes, Ava is FINE! and they will be happy now :D
Thank you for your review girl! I always love them :))