Penname: ellie1958 [Contact] Real name: Della
Member Since: Mar 05, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am 16 years old, I'm going to be in 11th grade ( even though I don't look like it). I was born in New Orleans, but I moved to California ( I wasn't there when the hurricane hit) I loved Michael ever since I could remember. But I became obessed/addicted on March of 2009 (I have OMD: obessive Michael disorder).  


I started reading fan fiction earlier this year, and I love it and am a bit addicted. So I started writing. I have a twin and she is the one who is really pressuring me to write this story.


 


Beta-reader: No
Gender: female
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Summary:

This story takes place in the eighties. Starting in 1981.

Tinsley Jones is a beautiful, young make-up artist who has always been a huge Michael Jackson fan and she lives a lonely life in New York, until she becomes friends with the famous Diana Ross. Despite all the luxury, being friends with a beautiful, charming superstar isn't always easy.

Michael Jackson is aware of that since he is friends with Diana as well, but he is actually helplessly in love with her. And Diana's manipulation isn't making it easy to get over her and go on with his lonely life.

But maybe Diana could bring their two lonely hearts together unexpectedly. And even if so; will they both ever be free from Diana's manipulations and realize that they might make each other happy, without her?


Categories: Romance, Suspense, Adult
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196162 Read Count: 31420
[Report This] Published: Aug 08, 2010 Updated: Jul 29, 2011
Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Keep writing I've been waiting for an update! I just can't wait what will happen next.

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Aimee Douglas is in for one heck of an assignment when her employer offers her a job to work for the one and only Michael Jackson! She’s in charge of dressing and decorating the man for photo shoots and all kinds of public appearances… It soon becomes crystal clear to Aimee that the world of ‘Michael Jackson; the Superstar’ is a world filled with secrets, jealousy, manipulation and other such drama… and that remaining strictly professional will be absolutely required if she wants to keep working for the man of her dreams, as it is the only possible way for her to stay close to him. Will Aimee succeed at that once she gets to know the man behind the mask? Sunglasses, solitary sequin glove and fancy outfits aside? Or will her secret, not-so-innocent or pure thoughts and fantasies about him really get her in trouble?
Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106214 Read Count: 41516
[Report This] Published: Dec 23, 2010 Updated: Sep 12, 2013
Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Michael Mania

Keep writing this is getting so senspensful. I really like your writing. Update quickly! I LOVE it!

Summary:

While his squeaky clean brother Jackie is fair and the talk of the city, Michael Joseph Jackson is dark and brooding. With penetrating eyes the colour of ebony and badly scarred body, Michael had always left Down-town Chicago deeply un-comfortable.

 

Professionaly Michael has managed to achieve a level of weallth and power that no one could ever have forseen back when he was the owner of his own shop. Now, he has no other life than the one he's forged from the remains of the man he once was - A gangster, and thats just how he likes it. His merry life as a feared gangster however is just about to spiral way out of his comfort zone, because once upon a time, Michael did have a life-before he made a grave mistake.

Her name was Arielle

And even if he is ever able to forget her, it takes nothing other than one, simple glance into the mirror to see the scars she left behind to make the bittersweet memory of her coming rushing back.

Michael:

Arielle:


Categories: Romance, Adventure, Song Fics, Angst, Adult
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12051 Read Count: 934
[Report This] Published: Jun 29, 2011 Updated: Jul 07, 2011
Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

You are an amazing writer, you have a very broad vocabulary. This story is so wonderful and different which I like different MJ fictions. Continue, Never stop!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three:-

Please Update, I love detailing, you can picture the scenes real well. Michael seems like their split really affected him.



Author's Response:

Horseback by nikki713 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Michael is a sweet guy working on the Bailey Ranch. He and the ranch owner's daughter, Hannah Bailey, fall in love. There's just one problem. Michael is 17 and Hannah is 13. Will they be able to hide their love for each other?


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3198 Read Count: 150414
[Report This] Published: Jul 23, 2011 Updated: Jul 24, 2011
Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Summary

I'm so sorry I didn't mean to snap at you. (My sister thought I was a little harsh in my response)  You could post your story I would like to see it, and see your take on the stories set back then.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I in no way ever meant to copy anyone and I certainly didn't want to imply that anyone else was coping off of me. I know that my stories go fast, but I have been trying to find ways to make my stories longer while keeping then entertaining. I just go fast in the beginning so that I can get to the good parts which are normally in the middle. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hallie Barker is starting her freshman year at Indiana University with much eagerness and incitement, but what happens when she comes face to face with the unexpected? Can she handle it? Will she break down or keep herself together? Hallie is a strong-willed, independent girl but what if the unexpected exceeds her and belittles her pride to nothing? However the most important question is, what happens if she falls hard for the unexpected, to the point of no return? 

-Reviews and ratings are much appreciated, I love to hear what you guys think!

-Updates vary from time to time. So sorry if some take longer than others!

-Michael is not famous in this story.

*Thank you so much, mikespyt & Leahluv21, for the banners! I love them with a burning passion!<3


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69602 Read Count: 20556
[Report This] Published: Aug 21, 2011 Updated: May 29, 2012
Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I decided to postpone studying for my 4 tests tomorrow  just to read your story. I love your detailing. I admire you because you make time to balance out your storymaking (which I love) and your school work. Well anyways, I can't believe that Michael can't remember or maybe it's just a mask. I'm guessing. Continue with your story because it's obvious that everyone loves it! Update soon so I can skip the (3) chapters I have to read.



Author's Response:

You did? Aw, that means so much to me! Really, that makes me feel a lot more confident in my writing.<3 Thank you so much, I do try to please every reader.(: I'm working on TWO right now so check in later if you'd like! Again, thank you very much<33

Reviewer: ellie1958 Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2011 Title: The Roommate

I totally get you perfectly, the same thing happened to me with my story (I haven't reached my 11th chapter). I took on 3 AP courses, Pre-Calculus and an advance spanish course. My schedule is like always full. I'm a junior too!

I hope that you could be able to find the time to write, I'm still stuck after 3 weeks. I love your story. It is so well written, and researched. I'll be looking foward to your update.



Author's Response:

Ugh, junior years suck, don't they? I hope you get the time to update because I've read your story before and it's really good. I should review that right now.........

Thank you so much, I try my best to please my readers!<3 I hope things go good with your story as well!