Penname: ksimm81 [Contact] Real name: Katrina
Member Since: Sep 03, 2010
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Been a Jackson fan since 1988.


 


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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

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Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Lose Lose

Augghh Peter is disgusting! How could he do Marley lol that! He was banging her best friend in THEIR bed no less. And now nastily he revealed her issue in front of Mike??? I felt for her smh. I wonder how MJ is going to react when she finally tells him that she can't have kids.

 

I hope Kenny never finds out where Mike and Marley went! He probably has something particularly sinister planned smh

 

Great add as usual!



Author's Response:

Peter is an asshole. He had the nerve to cheat on Mar and step way out of bounds by telling Michael something Marely would have told him in time. We will have to see how Michael takes that news when Mar finally tells him everything. 

Kenny is a beguiling snake he just might coax something out of Teddy but maybe she's not so gullible. Thanks for reading bb!! <333

Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Real Eyes

Beautiful start to this chapter! The love these two share is so sweet! I love them together!

 

Glad everything went well with Mike meeting Marley's parents. I can literally see them in my mind's eye with the way you describe them! The fact that the father brought the ingredients fresh from a farmer's market first thing in the morning makes me wish I can eat at 'Of Rice and Men' LOLLL

 

AND YASSSSSS! Things are starting to come together. They are about to realize that Mr. Canton is not who he says he is!! I just hope the mystery is solved before he finds him and causes even more heartache and pain. 

 

EXCELLENT update as usual!!



Author's Response:

Thank you bb!!! 😘 Yes.  And you know I'm vegan. If only we had a Of Rice And Men to go to after watching BAD25 lmaooooo. That would have been dope. Yes things are falling into place now and soon it will come but as you know there's drama afoot!! <333

Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...

I'm here menen!! Can't wait to continue this wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Tree!!!!! Yay welcome to the story!!! Lol ;) it's going down!!! <333

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Date: Apr 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Divinity In Motion

Ahhh finally Mar and Mike have consummated their relationship!! Mike went ALL OUT for his boo and I was up in HERE reading it. Aughh I love it! No Baylee, no interruptions-- no nothing!! 

I'm kinda ready for Kenny to start trouble though... is that bad? I'm ready for the drama LOLLLL

 

Great read as always!!



Author's Response:

Yassss!! The loving has been had and damn if he didn't lay it down nice and proper. Don't worry my dear the drama is coming!!!<333

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Date: May 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Boxed In

Officer Canton is a mess. He is so unprofessional and I'm mad Hicks didn't rein him in. He really doesn't like Michael over something petty and he's letting it show professionally.

Michael should ask for his case to be reassigned smh.

Newsflash Canton!! If Markey wanted you, she would have been with you! GET OVER IT!



Author's Response:

Canton is an unprofessional mess. He's salty Marley nipped anything they might have had in the bud. She was in love with Michael and that's who she's with so he needs to build a bridge. <333

Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Passion Overshadowed

What an awesome chaper!

 

What a romantic date Marley and Michael had. You could cut the sensuality with a knife!! And later that night!! LAWWWWD I love Baylee but she picked the most INOPPORTUNE time to knock on that door!!

 

Those earrings though... I could feel Michael's hurt and pain when she saw Marley with the same earrings his late wife wore when she passed away. Who in the WORLD sent those to Marley??? This story is getting better and better and I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. 

 

Don't make us wait too long!



Author's Response:

Thank you Bb!!!!

Baylee is always popping up when they least expect her to.  Lol. Notice how she just skipped out the room.  I'm glad you liked the date. I was hoping it didn't come off corny. 

Yup those earrings tho. The Mystery increases!! I'll update as soon as I can. We have another supposed storm brewing!! Lol. We'll see. Love Ya much!! <333

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Date: Jan 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make

Poor Ria smh.

 

Kenny is a miserable person who is jealous of a man that isn't even in the same town. This was such a well-written chapter. I hate what to Ria s going through. I hope she gets the courage to leave his behind. She is not financially-tied to him amd he can very well kill her.

And Rhoda.... I don't like her for some reason but I don't understand why Michael decided to shack up with her if he has no real feelings for her. He needs to drop her and let her find a simp man that actually WANTS to be USED by her lol



Author's Response:

Kenny has serious issues stemming from his family life and deep seated insecurities. It's an awful unstable mix. As for Why Michael is even bothering with Rhoda iys a case of holding on to nostalgia for way too long. He does have feelings for her there just not love feelings lol. It's wrong of him to use her like that but she's using him too for other reasons. <333

Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question

YASSSSS Mike and Ria are going to try this relationship thing out! So happy for them! I feel bad for the officer but hey.. He's handsome. He'll find someone else.



Author's Response:

Yup!!! Michael and Marley are stepping out on a date finally. Let's see where it takes them. The night will be filled with romance for sure. How far will it go? Lol.  Thanks for joining me over here tree!! Love you!! <333 

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Date: Jan 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: The Officer Or The Gentleman?

YASSSS Michael name and claim that girl!!! I knew it would be dangerous for them two to live together. Way too much sexual tension. I like Officer Canton and so but Marley does indeed deserve the best and the best is Michael!



Author's Response:

He's not making no mistakes and pussyfooting around with Marley. He learned his lesson with Ria so he's staking that claim!!Living together set it off nicely!!! <333

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Date: Apr 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Finally Found Out

I love the insight we got into Kenny! He is deranged!!! And delusional. He really truly thinks he can get with Ria simply becasue he wants to O___O

Chile, he is scary and I'm mad that he ran into Rhoda at that party. She unknowingly let this fool know where poor Ria is staying. 

I read with eyes wide open the way you wrote about what rich kids like Rhoda and Kenny had to go through in their childhoods and even in their adult lives. I was just shaking my head in disgust. Sure, this is just a fictional story but this actually happens in real life to young innocent kids everyday. Man,  I felt bad for both Rhoda and Kenny at that moment.

Last but not least, I'm glad Ria finally told Michael about the abuse she suffered at the hands of Kenny. I am glad he is going to do everything that he could to protect her and love her the way she deserves to be loved.

But unfortunately that protection won't be enough....



Author's Response:

This kind of thing does happen in reality and it's sad and sick and so soul snatching. Now you guys have sort of an idea of what made Kenny the way he is. He lost all trust and a part of his humanity to the lifestyle inflicted on the kids that grew up in his circle. That's why he clever to Michael and Ria but couldn't really connect. Rhoda opened a can of beans she didn't even realize she had smh. Michael didn't know what he was in for with Kenny coming back. <333

Summary:

 

Michael is fed up with his PR marriage with Lisa and wants out. One day Michael's business partner introduces him to his strip club in hopes that Michael will be a co-owner. However, something else catches Michael's attention. Michael is blown away when he meets the most gorgeous woman he has ever seen.  Does a one night of flirting turn into obsession, love or a chase? See what happens when lies, lust, and temptation get the best of us.

 


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 215737 Read Count: 30815
[Report This] Published: Jan 29, 2015 Updated: Feb 16, 2018
Reviewer: ksimm81 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Temptation

Man this chemistry between these two is AMAZING!! Let them girls hate, Aissa... they'll survive!!!

 

Michael has taken an interest in YOU and that's all that matters. And I love that he sees her as more than just a stripper. 



Author's Response:

Yes there chemistry is amazing! That is why I am rooting so badly for them lol Them girls are some hating heffa's especially Nikki.

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Date: Feb 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: An Alluring Enticing Desire

Ughhhh Lisa is a nuisance. So immature... she really locked the bedroom door so that her husband couldn't come in???? Wow.

 

He needs to get rid of her. I know it has to be draining being married to someone like that.



Author's Response:

Yea Lisa is something. I hope Michael gets rid of her as well.  She is so childish.

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Date: Feb 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Addicted Lust Miscarriage of Trust

Dang Mike!! First he gave some to Aissa and now he's more than happy to give some to his wife LOLLLLL!!

 

Mike needs to go ahead and separatee. Cheating and homewrecking won't lead to nothing positive and I do NOT want to see Aissa get hurt.

 



Author's Response:

I really don't want to see Aissa hurt either because her feelings seem geniune. Michael's feelings seem geniune as well but he needs to make up his mind!

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Date: Feb 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Introducing...Tempting Flower

Love it. Love it... Love it!!!

 

Lisa is such a brat. Her character annoys me but i love the chemistry between Mike and Aissa... Good that she was reminded that he was married though.

 

I like the way you wrote Michael... the way he was being himself around Aissa and not at all the way the media portrayed him. I am looking forward to reading these other chapters!!



Author's Response:

Hey love!! I am glad you enjoyed it!  Lisa is a immature brat!! Thanks for the review!!

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Date: Feb 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Fallen

Thank the lawd for Bria and her common sense talk. She is absolutely right. Aisssa should leave Mike alone until he files those divorce papers or Lisa Marie does... and she was right about the lack of condom usage. Very irresponsible on her and Mike's part... chile if she winds up pregnant I will be HERE for it!!!!

 

And what is up with this Nikki chick? She is such a hater and she's obviously jealous of Aissa.



Author's Response:

Nikki is hater. She seems to have a personal issue with Aissa and yes she is clearly jealous. Yea Bria is a real friend she can be harsh at times but she keeps it real! We all need a Bria type friend! Mike and Aissa getting it in raw!? Chile the drama ahead!!