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Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave. Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life. He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart. When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet. Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day. How will Michael cope. Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.
This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story. No copyright infringment intended.
Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15332
Date: Jan 31, 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Out In The Open
I loved the way Michael reacted to Marley's revelation. Even though that scumbag Peter revealed her devastating secret, I'm glad Marley could count on Michael's love and affection for her to see her through. He is a sweetheart! And I appreciate his honesty. I'm glad he told her he was a bit disapppointed in the news but that he knows that their love is bigger than her inability to have a child!!
Steven is a mess. I can almost feel how dirty, shamed and guilty Amy felt for sexing a man that would soon treat her like trash. She almost lost her life too!!! She is very fortunate that Steven is 'abstaining' from torturing and killing folks smh
What's with the captain telling Steven 'Jackson knows who you are?' Is the CAPTAIN in on it too??? Lawwwddd, the twists and turns!!!
Author's Response:
Peter was real trash for doing that to her. But Michael being understanding and truthful wouldn't let things out of control destroy what they have. They can build their family in other ways. Hey there might be miracles. Who knows.
Steven will always be appalling. You'll see how the Captain factors in next chapter!! <333
Date: Oct 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Unmasked
Lawd Kenneth is a deranged man smh
I appreciate the flashback of when Kenny told Hicks the full truth. I thought he had killed Hicks right then and there!!
And I'm sure Marla is racked with sorrow AND guilt...
great chapter as usual!
Author's Response:
Deranged lunatic is right. Yup he's a classic villain so you know he had to take his moment to monologue. Lmaoo. Marla now has to live with what she's done. Well since it happened really but now she has to focus on raising her children. <333
Date: Sep 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Assurances, All On The Table
Awww I'm so glad that they are releasing whatever is holding them back and sincerely lovng each other. The way they laid together-- totally naked but indulging in each other spiritually and emotionally rather than sexually was one of the sweetest things I have EVER read!
I'm glad they finally told Baylee about their relationship but it didn't even surprise me that she knew about it. Kids are smarter than we give them credit for and they know how to put two and two tgether.
That being said, maybe it's the old-fashioned part of me, but I don't think Baylee should be calling Marley 'mommy' until Michael actually makes Marley his wife. I'm really hoping that comes to fruition!! *hint, hint*
(If you love me, K, you'll make them get married LOLLLL)
I love this story so much and I look forward to happier times with Marlee, Michael, Baylee and Mr. Bear! Keep it coming!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah I think it was time they let go of their past. Just enough that they can revel in the love they have together now. Isn't Bay a clever little thing?!? Lol. She's so sweet. As for her calling Mar mommy out of wedlock, I think that's on the horizon at least in Michael's mind it's only a matter of time till that become official. They still have this huge battle to fight with Kenny still on the loose. One step at a time and they'll get there. <333
Date: Aug 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Bye Bye Love Hello
Auughh I had to take my time and read this chapter and I was on pins and needles after every sentence!! I am so DISGUSTED with Kenny! What a sicko! So awful!!
Poor Michael! Left with sweet little Baylee to raise... I keep re-reading the flashback of that knock coming on his door to tell him that he would never be seeing his wife again. How DEVASTATING!! And the fact that Kenny snuffed her life out near her birthday??? Augghhh K, this chapter was so sad :(
I'm glad he has Marley now and I was always #team Mike and Marley but still...
I really do hate Kenny now.
I hate a fictional character.
Only superb writing can make me hate a fictional character!!
Author's Response:
I completely understand. It was hard for me to write it where it would have the impact to show just how senselessly Kenny stole her life from Michael and Baylee. He's every it the little boy crying for attention and unfortunately he's set his sights on Michael and Mar now too. There will be a little break from all the doom and gloom so Michael Mar and Bay can get a little closer and be happy for once. You guys deserve that. Lol. Thank you so much Tree my love!! <333
Date: Aug 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Secrets So Untold...
Lawwwd Kenny done killed his partner! LAWWWDDD!
i'm glad Mike and Marley got away but we all know Kenny is about to prAnce off to the West Coast behind them once he finds out!!
The suspense is killing me!!
MORE! MORE! MORE!
Then again, I'm nervous about how Ria truly died. Man... I know that chapter is going to mess me up... that's how AWESOME you're writing is!!!
MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Yes gear up for a full chapter coming next. It's going to be heavy stuff. Not graphic though. It will be covered as artiscally as possible. Thank you so much for sticking with me Bb, I appreciate you. ;) <333
Date: Jul 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Watching Eyes...Sinister Ties (Deux)
Kenny is just... chile... that man is TWISTED!
But I can't help but to somewhat understand why he's acting the way he is. I couldn't imagine the hurt and pain he felt when Michael wouldn't stay and left him alone with the 'monster'. That really stuck with him and Kenny has carried that rage ever since.
What he did to Ria is inexcusable though. Raping her and then blackmailing her. Aughhhh I can't stand him!
This story is getting better and better! I am HOOKED!
Author's Response:
Kenny did have a wretched childhood because of his father. There's no way he's ever going to heal from this. More is coming by!! <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 15: It's Understood
Reunited and it did feel good....
That was HOT!!! Michael showed her in everry single way how much he missed his 'puddin'. I'm so glad that Ria is finally pursuing happiness with a man that will truly treasure her. The absence of a condom though??? We'll see what happens there...
...and Rhoda is like a little gnat that just won't leave!!
Great chapter menen!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Tree bb!!! ;)
Michael sure did sure her. He wasn't messin around with his Puddin this go around. He wanted to stake claim!! This girl is his whole life so he's going to go to the mountain top and back to make sure she's happy and satisfied. That's his Ria!!! :))) Ria is on the pill so that's why she was ok with the no condom.
Rhoda is most def a gnat!! She gets shooed put keeps popping back up. Like girl!!
Thanks fornyhe love Tree <333
Date: Jul 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls
Auughhh I'm starting to hate Kenny more and more. Just unapologetically evil for no reason! Poor Ria smh... Poor Marley!!
I can understand Marley's anger at Mike for not telling her about the box and I hope Mike keeps her in the loop for now on.
And I'm glad Michael is starting to realize that Kenny may be behnd all of these shenanigans.
I truly think that they should petition to have new detectives assigned to their case being that Officer "Canton" can't seem to separate his personal feelings from doing his job and Hicks really isn't trying to reign him in.
More, menen!! MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Michael had a moment of weakness with keeping things from Marley but he's learned his lesson. There's too much on the line here. That's the first thing they'll do. They really need other detectives to take over the case. Steven is not reliable at all. Michael does feel deep down that this might be Kenny. He just needs a little more proof. <333
Date: May 24, 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Soft Then Vile
Kenny is crazy!!! I can't believe he killed his father like that! So effortlessly... no remorse, no regrets... smh. That guy is twisted.
But let's talk about the BEGINNING of this chapter... Aughhh Michael and Ria make me just want to stare at my computer screen and smile like a nut. They are so beautiful together!! That intimate scene had me salivating!! Michael sure does know how to throw down!!
He truly does love her and I'm glad he wants to make it official and ask her to be his wife.
This chapter was jam-packed! Romance, suspense... HOMICIDE!!
I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
It sure did take a crazy turn there. The good lovin then Kenny's crazy self shows out. He was in the moment with killing his father. Trust me it did make an impact he's not quite feeling just yet.
Michael and Ria are perfection together and they're getting married. Happiness will find them. At least for a little while. <333
Date: Jun 25, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Watching Eyes... Sinister Ties (Une)
Poor Ria... while I know I will be sad by what the last few chapters feat. Ria will entail, I am looking forward to it! You are a fantastic writer menen and this story has got me all sorts of addicted.
The romance is there but the thrills, the mystery, the darkness.. I enjoy those things as well.
Mike and Ria seem to be head over heels for each other and it's wonderful that they have settled into married life-- unfortunately Kenny has reared his ugly head and I am saddened how this will end.
Please update ASAP!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you guys are up for going there with me into he darkness. It won't be too much I promise. So glad you love it Tree. Means a lot to me! 😘
Kenny is a cancer to both past and present for real. <333
Date: Mar 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 17: The Give That Takes
Rhoda is a nutcase!! Auughhhh Michael was crazy for even getting with her in the first place.
I don't believe in abortions at all, but Mike should chuck the dueces at Rhoda once and for all and let her do whatever she wants to do SMH.
I'm glad Ria plans to stick around but I surely wouldn't with a coo-coo chick like Rhoda acting like Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Rhoda is a nutcase.But in defense of Michael, when he got with. Her she seemed pretty sane. But...
She's trying to blackmail Michael into choosing her and we will have to see what happens. Michael is smart though so we can only pray he makes the right moves.
Neither Michael nor Ria needs this insanity in their life. Especially with what's to come. <333
Date: Jun 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Unintentional Lies
First of all... I am SO SORRY for the late reply!! You know I love this story so much but life just gets in the way sometimes... :(
But here I am... and this story gets crazier and crazier. I would be feeling down and out too if my man was suddenly being distant to me. And Detectve Canton--- AUUUGHHHH I loathe him more an more each and every chapter!! He is causing trouble between Mike and Mar and I don't feel he had any right to tell Marley about the box even though I believe Michael should have been told her.
Awww man... now Marley is now going to rip Mike a new one!! Lawwwd the drama!!
Author's Response:
Awe Bew it's all good. I know better than anybody jut how much life can get in th way of our pleasures.
Yessss this story is getting crazier and crazier but things are going to start falling into place AND get evern crazier LOL. There's going to be some rocky road coming up in both past and present. hold on BB <333
Date: Mar 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 18: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Aughhh how dare you stop the chapter so suddenly!! Cliffhangers *sniff, sniff* so mean and cruel to your faithful readers *SNIFF*
I so loved this chapter. Marl is such a good nanny to Baylee and I really like how Marl and Michael got the chance to truly know each other not just as employee/employer but potential lovers. I know the delay of lovemaking had more to do with their busy schedules and wasn't deliberate, but that delay has caused them to reallly enjoy each other. I SOOOO look forward to when they finally INTIMATELY enjoy each other. I need to go buy snacks for that particular chapter LOLL
As far as the questions you posed, yes, I do think Marley has the right to know what exactly happened to Ria. Marley is not involved in it too and it would not be right to keep her out of the loop.
I honesly don't think Michael will be that open with it. It is still painful for him, but I hope he overcomes and truly becomes honest with Marley
As far as the next episode... Rhoda is a PSYCHO! I have no doubt we haven't seen the last of her and I truly don't know how Michael will handle the ultimatum. I look forward to reading about what he does though.
Menen, this story is progressing wonderfully and I am totally into it!! Please update ASAP!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo!! *sniff sniff.
Marl is great with Baylee. I love their relationship. Michael and Marl have so much to talk about.
We most def have not seen the last of Rhoda. I'll be updating tomorrow!! <333
Date: Apr 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Divinity In Motion
Ahhh finally Mar and Mike have consummated their relationship!! Mike went ALL OUT for his boo and I was up in HERE reading it. Aughh I love it! No Baylee, no interruptions-- no nothing!!
I'm kinda ready for Kenny to start trouble though... is that bad? I'm ready for the drama LOLLLL
Great read as always!!
Author's Response:
Yassss!! The loving has been had and damn if he didn't lay it down nice and proper. Don't worry my dear the drama is coming!!!<333
Date: Jan 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Interview...
I'm here menen!! Can't wait to continue this wonderful story!!
Author's Response:
Tree!!!!! Yay welcome to the story!!! Lol ;) it's going down!!! <333