Penname: lummilovesmichael [Contact] Real name: Lumaris
Member Since: May 11, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm in my 30's; I've been a fan of Michael Jackson and love him for as long as I can remember.  His music moves me to dance and sing.   His  music uplifts me when I feel down or tired is like a burst of positive energy.  I make sure to always remember his message of L.O.V.E.


To Heal the World.  To look at the Man in the Mirror and to start to making a change staring with yourself.  


I miss him everyday that he is gone.  I wished I meet him just once; I would have giving him the biggest bear hug and just simply said I will always believe in you and I LOVE YOU.


MJ4EVER...... I LOVE YOU ALWAYS ;)


With the L.O.V.E. Lumaris aka Lummi


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Summary:

Despite having every luxury a man could ask for, Michael Jackson was once a hollow shell of the man he could have been. Everything in his life has been going so perfectly lately, and he's finally happy. He's been married to the love of his life for six months and he couldn't ask for anything more.

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Jess is still amazed at what she has in her life. A good career and more importantly, Michael Jackson. After six months of marriage, she couldn't imagine having a better life. They're deeply in love and nothing but each other could possibly make them happier. 

Or so they thought. Now they're ready for something more in their relationship. 

 

They're ready to have a baby. 

Will everything go smoothly for them? What obstacles will they face? No matter that happens, they'll go through it together.

 


Categories: Family, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44726 Read Count: 4099
[Report This] Published: Aug 21, 2014 Updated: Jan 03, 2015
Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 27: The Worst Thing

So happy you updated and I know there most be some drama but, you had me crying in that last chapter.  I can believe they lost the baby :(. I hope you update very soon. Poor Jess & Michael. Be strong my beautiful couple god will bless you, hopefully soon and maybe twins ;). Keep up the awesome work.  L.O.V.E. Lummi :-).

Summary:

 

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Wini is just a normal beat cop and she is given the opportunety of a life time when she is assigned to a detail providing extra protection for The Jacksons. Michael is getting ready for a major life change, will Wini be a part of it?

 


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 351606 Read Count: 36823
[Report This] Published: Sep 02, 2014 Updated: Jul 06, 2016
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Date: Oct 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Hi there Thank you so much for the double treat today :).  

Well our power couple had their 1st small argument.  Next one has to be just a smidge bigger just a smidge now; maybe 2-3 hours of the silence treatment and Michael is the one who started.  After treat us to a hot, sexy, steamy make-up loving scene ;).

Gosh can we say capital B.I.T.C.H. from the moment she came to the table. OK so she got upset what Michael said about her record sales but, is true her music appels only to a certain fan base.  Michael's music transcends age, race, religion it just liked by everyone.  How come she thinks her actions won't affect Michael but, mostly Wini putting her on the spot as a easy woman and in danger too by giving out her name.  I hope after everything is in the open we don't see her anymore.  Please update soon.  Is time for the "material girl" to BEAT IT ;)...... Love Lummi <3 

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31

Welcome back, great update.  I loved the way both Wini & Michael stood up, to that big haired diva.  The Nerve ughh!!

I really could see Ms. Ross being that manipulate it towards Michael as Quincy said.  Wini wasn't going to take it.  Oh h*ll NO.  Please update soon.  Is all for L.O.V.E.... Lummi <3



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! There is another chapter on its way soon, just need to edit it!

Summary:

 

Chivonn's a girl in her mid-twenties working a mediocre job struggling just to get by. Her brother Bryan is a father of two young children is also struggling after his baby mama kicked him out and sliced his paychecks up with child support. The two siblings realize they are better off living together than struggling on their own. Chivonn feels safe with her brother and the living arrangement is working out perfectly....

....until the day Bryan's childhood friend Michael Jackson, gets released from prison and becomes the roommate from hell you just can't get rid of. He's bad, he's dangerous, and often lets his pride get in the way of doing what's right. There are a few good things about him, though. He's got a secret soft spot for children and just so happens to have one of the rawest talents the world will ever see.

 

But will the world get to see it? Or will his talent be wasted... Forever lost to the streets...

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Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142404 Read Count: 36879
[Report This] Published: Sep 09, 2014 Updated: Sep 20, 2015
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Date: Nov 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: The Morning After

I'm so happy during his drunken stupor Michael confess his feelings for Chiv. I LOVE YOU GIRL ;).  You know what they say: Drunk people tell no lies ;).... Chiv & Michael sitting in a bed S.E.X.I.N.G. first comes a kiss, then a soft touch, then comes Michael with a really Big C*CK lol ;).  I bet there 1st time together is going to be super sexy I can't wait for that. 


I know next chapter is going to be heated for sure, I can feel it. Brian is going to say his piece and he going to be RAW and no holds bar.  I hope Brian & Michael don't fight at least physically.


Hoped you update soon.  Is all for L.O.V.E.. Lummi <33.



Author's Response:

...and then comes Michael with a really big... LMAO!!! Poor Michael's been waiting over 2 years he'll probably explode in two pumps hahahaha. Thanks for your awesome review

Summary:

At first she was untouchable to him. As he was to her

But their attraction grew to be too much and both began an affair behind their significant other's back 

**A steamy one-shot story of Michael and Stephanie** 


Categories: Adult, Mystery
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2741 Read Count: 555
[Report This] Published: Oct 30, 2014 Updated: Oct 30, 2014
Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sexy stuff ;). I googled it images the first 2 images that showed I was floored. The images are just like one of the scene in YANA (You are not Alone), Michael lays of the floor while his co star is above him.  It shows that Michael knew about this painting.

It would be interesting to see a full version but, can it be a one shot as well even if it has more chapters.  Now that I read the one shot, my curious nature can't wait for a chapter update every day.  I just would like to know how they met.  The 1st time together and finally after the night he claims he made her truly his if they finally chose to be together or continue their secret relationship.... Keep up the great work... l.o.v.e.....Lummi <3



Author's Response:

Yeah, about a year ago I learned that his short Film was actually based off that painting hehe and I have been thinking to do a one-shot with some chapters but also a story about 30-40 chapters long.... I will see what my mind decides to do lol. Thanks for your review though :)

Summary:

*** THE SEQUEL TO STRUCK BY DREAMS! ***

 *** YOU MUST READ STRUCK BY DREAMS BEFORE THIS ONE! ***

 

It's been five years since Michael and Diana have seen or spoken to each other. Both moved on with their lives and established themselves with successful careers until one day, an unexpected twist of fate comes to life forcing Michael and Diana to cross paths with each other once again. Will Michael and Diana be able to patch up their past and rekindle the flame they once had between them? Will Diana tell Michael the truth about her memory? There's only one way to find out...

 

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended. 


Categories: Lisa Marie Presley: 1994, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature
Trigger Warnings: Death, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177462 Read Count: 8204
[Report This] Published: Nov 12, 2014 Updated: Dec 06, 2014
Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: The Beginning of the End

OMG!!! That was intense.  I knew that Gerwin guy was shady.  The way he keep looking at Ana.. I know is not right to wish harm on anybody but, all this individuals that hurt Michael & Ana they will answer for their injustice & cruelty.

All I feel right know is sadness & anger. Sadness because Michael is such a sensitive soul, he let's his fears take hold.  I knew he must had resort to take something to numb the pain.  I hoped they never have another fight like that. I can guess & hope that Ana is really pregnant this time.

I'm so p*ssed off I can believed Joseph (that's my guest on the mystery man) is at it again.  How can that man who is so evil & cruel have the same DNA as an Angel like Michael.  Please update soon.  My heart needs a healing.  

Ana & Michael have EARN their Happy Ending.  Can we please finally know the secret.  Can Ana tell Michael.  And Michael tell Ana what's happening REMEMBER no SECRETS.  Is all for LOVE Lummi :(



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. It was really difficult to write this chapter but I'm glad I got through it.

I don't know what to say about Michael's father to be honest - I guess we all just have to respect him because if it weren't for him, we'd never have Michael.

The secret will come in due time. You need to be patient! :)

Thank you for reading. :D

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Oblivious Temptation

This story is so wonderful, you had me tears.  I've seen the video in You Tube of the speech of Michael when he was in Africa.  It sadden me that Chris retired.  God knows how Michael needs real, trustworthy and loyal friends around him.

You were seconds away for being cuss out ;) LOL the way you ended the story before a saw that there is a part III of the Michael and Ana saga in the works.

All I beg for is pretty please with sugar on top that on that 1st very long chapter that you post for part III; after she meets with dude from the label company; she tells Michael what she's been keeping for the past 5 years. GIVE US THE SECRET!!!!!! Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi <3.... Upload the new story soon💖



Author's Response:

OMG LUMMI!!! I'VE MISSED YOU SOOOO MUCH! Where have you been? I was waiting for your reviews!!!! Thank you so much for reading this entire story. Don't worry, part three is going to be just as good and the secret will be revealed sooner rather than later - I promise! :D

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Date: Nov 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Temporary Solution

Yesssss, that was amazing.  OK hands upc5;if an angry, p*ssed off Michael is SEXY as H*ll.c5; Is about time that things begin to straighten out.  

This individuals how can they stand themselves, why hurt such a wonderful man. But game on you b*statds: Gerwin down for now & one to go.

This is why for now is a good thing Diana isn't pregnant.  I hoped you treat us to a small paragraph when Diana catches to lmp.  Please all I ask one good slap.  The type that leaves a red mark, your face has a clear hand print mark and you bleed just from the mouth.  

I'm glad that Michael fess up; well sorta he didn't have a chance till after the situation.  But now all we need is to get rid off please excuse my french that B*TCH (LMP), finished the tour, have a wedding, possible pregnancy and Diana's 5 year big secret.

Bring it on baby, I can't wait.  Please update soon.  Is all for LOVE Lummi <3  c5;c5;sexy ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks Lummi.

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The Rainbow After the Storm

I'm so happy you posted again.  I needed to see if this storm would eventually calmed down and the sun would shine again.  Is so beautiful to see LOVE is the answer :).  I loved that Michael proposed in front of the world (Eat it Tabloids)

I hoped Ana's intuition kicks in and doesn't allow Gerwin in the arena.  I mean yes, Gerwin came to see about "Michael's health" and he is sorta dating Marie but, he really doesn't need to be at the concert or backstage for matter after all Marie is there to work. (BY THE WAY best job in the world :))).

It sounds so sinister & malicious that the mystery man (aka Joseph), wanting a picture of Michael from back stage.  And exactly in what state?? No make-up? Undress?  The possible thoughts and answers make me feel ill.

What happened to working hard and earning things.  Gerwin gets money and then what?  A record label is not just about money.  No respected artist is going to put their reputation on the line on a none established label.  With no History (no pun intended) of producing successful records or other artists.  

Maybe I'm just a simple minded gal who still believes in: love, hard work, sacrifices and looks to see the good in all people.

Is been a draining and emotional last two chapters.  It is time for things to get fixed completely.  All this negativity & evilness needs to go.  Gerwin is 1st, please deal with him my creative friend.  Someone needs to catch him like now or actually next chapter ;).

PS: I'm trying my best patient but, I'm a curious gal by nature, so umm can we know the secret yet? {LOL ;) } Pretty Please with a cherry on top :(

Also Please-Please update soon is all for love Lummi <3




Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your lovely review.

I'd like to answer your questions/comments but they will all be answered as the story slowly unfolds.

I too believe in love, hard work and seeing the good in people. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one left.

Diana's secret is something that you will need to forget about until the right time. I won't say when but believe me, it's worth the wait.

I will be updating again tomorrow evening.

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Please check out my other stories as well! :D

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Calm After The Storm

My friend Whoooo, you put me through all the emotions tonight; I was p*ssed, sad, I cried and I laugh.  Haha also super curious,  Ana was about to tell him the secret she's been holding onto for 5 years and it didn't happened:  PLEASE I've waited 18 chapters.  Michael said he didn't want no secrets between them. I need to NOW even more than Michael lol ;) but seriously!!!

I'm super po'd I can't believe that hussy got through his security, then she drug him, then got him naked, she is so ughhhhh.  

Just a suggestion, I want Michael in the morning to fired all his current security team , if his main man Wayne is there, he will get some trustworthy guys for the hotel and arena. I want Michael to be super po'd, so mad he cusses.  I think is sexy but, I want people to see he is the BOSS and thou shalt not f*ck with the KING.

Sad, when Ana broke the news about the baby.  I guess in terms of the story is better that way for now, if Ana has to fight a b*tch aka lmp, she can throw down without any worries.  Ohhh and I would love for Ana to whoop some LMP *SS!!!!!

I did tear up, whe Michael wrote the message in the window.  I want to give him a baby, I'm here for you Mikey Bear ;).  I know becoming a Daddy is what he desires the most.

You can always can count on Jas & Marie to lighten the mood and make everyone laugh :)).  They are so cute and so naughty lol, all up in Ana bed side business lol ;) Get the camera. Hahaha..... PS: Sorry about my rant is all for love.

Please update soon.... L.O.V.E. Lummi <33



Author's Response:

Your reviews are so thoughtful and full of energy I LOVE THEM!

I can almost guarantee you will like where this story goes! :D

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Lashing To Loving

Wooo, thank you for the updating quickly.  This chapter had emotional overload.  I honestly couldn't help it but, I shed some tears. :(

TSG, The Sparkling Glove Productions.... LOVE IT... Oh YANA it fits perfectly for Diana & Michael. YANA is one of my personal favorites of his ballads.  I always enjoy his short films and how creative they are.  This one blew me away; there he was Michael Jackson almost nakey :))). The only thing I would change is the co-start LOL.  Please continue and I can wait for the next chapter. L.O.V.E..... Lummi <3

*Just the other night I thought I heard you cry asking me to come and hold you in my arms I can hear your prayers your burdens I will bare but, first I need your hand and forever can begin..You are not alone!!!!! I LOVE this song ;)




Author's Response:

Than you so much. Your reviews are always so thoughtful and heart warming. Believe me, there is A LOT more to come with this story. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: From Past To Present

Hello, Wow great story.  I was attractive to the summary so before starting I read the first one.  It was beautiful, deep and very sad with an unexpected ending. I kinda knew she remember who Michael really was at the end.  I've read about people who suffered amnesia and it can be selective.  They may know certain person and don't recognize another but, the fact the only thing she didn't remember was just the "relationship part".  Mmmm it felt sneaky. Lol sorry to ramble on. :))

Loving the 2nd part, 3 chapters in and I can't wait for the next update.  I also enjoy the fact that you give us LONG juicy chapters lol.  I know for a good story some obstacles have to happened but, Please can we find the L.O.V.E. ; can Michael & Diana finally have their happily ever after.  Right now so many sad things are happening in the world, please give us a Happy Ending. :)

*Liberian girl you know that you came and you change my world just like in the movies with two lovers in the scene and she says do you love me and he says so endlessly I love you Liberian girl.*... With L.O.V.E.... Lummi <33




Author's Response:

This is, by far, the most wonderful, heartfelt and sincere review I have ever heard or read. THANK YOU for your kind words. I am so touched and I hope that you continue to enjoy the journey as it continues to unfold. I don't want to give too much away but there is always a storm before the calm. I hope that I hear from you again. Thank you again! :)

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Date: Nov 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Everyday Create Your History

Yesssss, those were awesome chapters.  I really loved the history tour. Mmmmm Gold Pants SEXAY ;).  I loved how you added the all bonus songs & surprises.  Ana most had been red as a tomato.  And Marie is luckiest girl in the world she got to dance with the Michael.  Lucky b*tch LOL :D..

You know, Michael filmed all his concerts.  I wished they would released them. At least a few of each concert. He never perform the same show twice. In 1996, History in Australia he did an Off the Wall medley for that show.  In others he perform TS and blood on the dance floor.  But because I'm a bit of an MJ naughty gal.  My favorite is the 2nd royal concert in Brunei.  He did two shows there. 1.Dangerous & 2.History and ladies for the History show you can really appreciate the gold pants and Mike Jr ;).  He is up and saying hello world ;). Mmmmm mental picture :D.

I would loved it if they released the full show he did for History on his B'day. His 39th b'day, complete with the surprised when they brought the marching band, the cake and everyone sang Happy birthday to Michael. Ohh Michael I missed you so much and I LOVE YOU ALWAYS (sorry has a moment)

For the Dangerous tour, I believe he did performed: Remember the Time.  I've seen a You Tube video off a full rehearsal for the Dangerous Show.  I believe is also Michael sang TWYMMF acha oooooo!  Sorry I'm babbling.

Please update soon.  I can't wait to KNOW what made Ana dropped her water bottle.  Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi <3



Author's Response:

I love your enthusiasm. Your reviews always make my day and I'm glad you are enjoying this story. :)

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Impulse, Interrupted

This story is so amazing.  The emotions are so deep.  Honesty, friendship, lust but, over all L.O.V.E. 😘.  I am very happy Ana told him about the baby. Michael was so cute talking to her tummy.  Lol cupcake Jackson that had me giggling.

There is one more thing, I picked on this story there is one secret lingering. Every time Jas ask Ana to tell Michael the truth about something; Ana says is not the right time.  In this last chapters she said she would tell him after the tour is over.  I can't wait to know the curiosity is very intense :).

As for the person who is at the door.  Two guesses; it seems of course that a bit of drama is part of a good story.  So here it comes just before the happiest day on both of their lives here come the BS.  Guess 1. Joseph Jackson 😬. Guess 2. LMP😈.  I can feel it is one of this two fools.  Michael be strong stand your ground DO NOT let them win.  Diana if the person happens to be Ms.Thing do be shy, is she gets out of line slap the taste of her mouth.  Yes ma'am never liked her at All.

Please update soon. Love Lummi 😘



Author's Response:

HAHA! I love your reviews!

Yes, there is a 'secret' lingering which is something that a lot of readers are curious about. Be patient - you never know what it could be! ;)

Your guess for the person at the door is very interesting - who knows? You just might be right about one of them. ;)

THANK YOU FOR READING! :D

Summary:

Violet Haynes is a young woman who lives an anything but exciting life, working at a diner with a boss she hates, and living alone in a small apartment she can barely afford. She needs a little excitement in her life. What happens when she goes to a strange new club and meets Michael, a mysterious man with a quiet demeanor that Violet can't help but be drawn to? Find out in...

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18128 Read Count: 1050
[Report This] Published: Nov 24, 2014 Updated: Feb 25, 2015
Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hey there just giving you some L.O.V.E and letting know this chapter did not s*ck.  Please continue and update soon.  I'm looking forward to the 1st date and to Violet finally speaking to Michael.  

Smooth Criminal is one of my favorite short films.  Is just Michael is just so SEXY; with the suit, fighting, dancing and when he is a BAD ;).. Shamone!!

All for L.O.V.E....Lummi <3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it! :)

And Smooth Criminal is my favorite short film, the dancing is amaaaazing. And he's sexy af lol

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