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Yahara
Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?
Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164232
Date: Oct 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
dang...what's her problem?She's annoying me already...
Date: Oct 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Well ... finally they did!But Yogi deserved something more romantic ... Everything was too fast! Am I romantic? Yes .. But I'm glad that their relationship is getting more genuine.
Thanks for the update!I liked it!:)
Date: Oct 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
"You know I should’ve like did all types of crazy, TV, romantic marriage proposal type shit but I didn’t."
Sarcasm?
"Michael, last night was special without the EXTRA CRAP.”
Romance=CRAP
"Houston I think we are having problems ..." When writers ask "Please Review" I think we can express what we are thinking about the story.You shouldnt take this as a bad thing ... You can get better with the criticism.
Yahara is a girl who would like to make love, not sex.There is a huge difference between "having sex" and "making love". Yahara is romantic and she was thinking that Michael just wanted to have sex with her. So he should be more affectionate and romantic with Yahara. The romantism would make him show that he loves her and not just sexual pleasure. Mike should have given her a special night for Yahara and prove that he is not thinking only of sex and that he loves her. I'm sorry but this is my opinion as a reader.
But it's okay ... If you only want to read compliments ... well ... I will do when I think that you deserve and you're very talented as I said before.
btw...Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I was literally just joking. I didn't mean for anybody to take it as if I was serious, I enjoy reading all reviews and not just those that compliment my stories. As for the Michael and Yahara situation...I purposely made it that way for later chapters that I will not reveal lol. But thanx anywayz
Date: Jan 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
NO!!!!I mean...I cant stand it!AIDS???NO WAY!JUST...DONT!DAMN!
Author's Response:
He doesn't have aids. He was comparing her to sex that leads to aids. I wouldn't have him with aids. That's some complicted stuff
Camilla never understood how a sweet soul like his could shatter her world into pieces and put them back together in an instant.
I'm back to updating regualty x
Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14946 Read Count: 3716
Date: Aug 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Silent Treatment
OMFG!I cant believe it!NEW UPDATE!Thank you very much!
Please post more...I've been waiting for so long!Thank u!
Author's Response:
Lol aww thanks xx I'll try getting more chapeters out xxx
Date: Mar 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - His room...Part 2
Jesus Christmas!!!
This chapter made me crossing my legs!!WOW!
THAT WAS HOT!!
“Slow”
“Hard”
“Fast”
ALL ABOVE PLEASE!!!!Cant wait!!!Thanks!:)
Date: Mar 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - His room ...Part one
OMG!OMG!OMG!!
YOU'RE BACK!!!!
Hallelujah!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!|o|
I cant believe it!!!I'm so happy!
I loved the update!!THANK YOU!!!
Date: Nov 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
Hey girl!I'm dying here!I'm craving for an update!!
PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!
Author's Response:
I'm sooo sorry to keep you waiting for sooo long but I just updated xxx
Date: Oct 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
Michael and Cam are acting on impulse ... the reality is very simple ... Michael is a boyfriend of Camila's sister.BOOOO!!
I dont know where this will lead but ME...right now.. at this moment ...want to see Michael and Camila sharing the love and passion they have for each other.
Get ready because the volcano will erupt!!!LOL
Thanks for the update babe!I loved it!
Date: Oct 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Too Far In
okay ... I know it's wrong ... they are doing all this in the back of her sister but ...DAMN! I need to see these two on fire!PLEASEEE! I'm sorry my lord, but they cannot stop there! They're already in the car and a few minutes have passed ...
They love each other.FACT! I would feel worse knowing that my sister's boyfriend is not in love with her but ME!
If she really loves her sister she will tell the truth. Whether she will stay with MJ after that or not but she has to know the truth.
Next chapter: let them get o FIRE!!!!|o|
I'll be waiting...I need to wake up early tomorrow to go to work but...ohhhhh I'll wait for sure!THANKS!
Date: Aug 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
I cant believe u posted one more chapter!Well... Finally Mike noticed what he did to her...but I have to say...Mike should suffer the same pain. He must moonwalking miles around the world to get her back!
Thank you!Post more ASAP pleaseeeeeee!*_*
Date: Sep 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Against The Wall
OMFG!!!!I cant believe it!This chapter was very intense!Just...WOW!
I cant imagine all pain and hurt she felt...DAMN!I was reading and...girl...I couldnt breathe!You're PERFECT!Amazing writer!
"Then out of nowhere he stopped."
Well...I think he will say "I told you.I'm changed." *________* DEAD!
I cant wait til next chapter!
THANK YOU for this vey well written story!Love it! *hugs*
Date: Aug 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
"By the way, don't come over tonight, I don't feel like seeing you anymore"
With that he slammed the door an left."
WOW!Amazing start!I cant wait to read more!Congrats!Loved it!
Author's Response:
Love your comment and hope I don't disappoint you xxx
Date: Aug 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
I'm listenig John Miles's song called "Song For You" and I was caught thinking about them...The lyric seem to fit perfectly!
Here's the lirycs...
Song For You - John Miles
Don't turn around,
It could never be the same again,
You've let me down,
I don't understand I can't pretend.
Oh, feels like I've been goin' down this road sometime before,
Someday, I will leave it far behind and that's for sure.
Don't call my name,
There's no guarantee that I'll be there,
You feel no pain,
Nothing for the times we used to share,
Oh hopin', you'll be easy on my mind and I'll forget
Somehow, can't help thinkin' that I wish we'd never met.
This is my song for you
Thoughts of winter,
Dreams of sunshine,
Nothing that I can do
Changes how I feel in my mind.
This is my song for you,
Times I hope you will remember,
Things that were meant for two,
Here in my heart,
Here in my song for you.
I'd like to know,
Do you ever stop to wonder why,
As feelings grow,
We could never change it, never try,
Oh, who knows, you might even find you miss me when I'm gone,
Somewhere, I've just got to find the strength to carry on.
This is my song for you
Thoughts of winter,
Dreams of sunshine,
Nothing that I can do
Changes how I feel in my mind.
This is my song for you,
Times I hope you will remember,
Things that were meant for two,
Here in my heart,
Here in my song for you.
Oh, who knows, you might even find you miss me when I'm gone,
Somewhere, I've just got to find the strength to carry on.
This is my song for you
Thoughts of winter,
Dreams of sunshine,
Nothing that I can do
Changes how I feel in my mind.
This is my song for you,
Times I hope you will remember,
Things that were meant for two,
Here in my heart,
Here in my song
This is my song for you
Thoughts of winter,
Dreams of sunshine,
Nothing that I can do
Date: Sep 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The introduction
YAY!You're back!
I loved the update!Girl...things are getting really BAD!Who would have thought?Michael and her sister are dating!WOW!I'm loving this!Thank u!
Author's Response:
Ur welcome x I'm loving your comments btw xx