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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

Omg that office sex was so hot! 

I am dead @ "This is not a handkerchief Charles. I'm sure you can figure it out if you try"

Michael is a mess. He will always be pressed and jealous over Charles, he's just gotten better at hiding it in front of Kay. Reminds me of all the shade he threw at "Newton" in the first story. Anybody with a penis who even talks to his Smoochy is a target. Lol!

And uh oh @ "Who is Aiden?" 

Daddy Michael is coming back........I can't wait!

Author's Response:

Hey Camille :) I'm glad that you liked Michael and Kay's office scene lol.

You're right, Michael will never be at ease with Charles around but he will have to put up with him since he is working with Kay. He is not interested, Michael! Get over it lol!

I'm eager to write the scene with Aiden :DD

Thank you for the review and the rate :) The new super long chapter is online, enjoy :)

Reviewer: fjoseph Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2015 10:36 pm Title: Flashback 2

this was great story, i love it please continue with it , i'll be waiting.

Author's Response:

Thank you, the new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2015 07:10 am Title: Flashback 2

Well, given the amount of time I've spent in both of those places, I had better know where they are LOL. Homefield advantage ;)

Kalliope should have left a note. No, it's not cool how Katherine is being so damn controling, but a note is at least considerate. Now this Switzerland thing? Michael needs to learn that he can want to be in control, but she's NOT a pet. First things first, Katherine needs to not come with them lol.

<3 I'd missed your updates.

Author's Response:

Hi Redone :)

I will be careful next time, but I'm so eager to upload that I sometimes forget to double check facts. You know my issues with typos... Lol

Let's see how Kay manage to be back in her 'cage' and this time in a foreign country x)

But now, it's a present time chapter :D

Thank you for your review and your rate :D <33

Reviewer: tatyanalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2015 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5


Author's Response:

Thank you Tatyana :D The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2015 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Seattle and Santa Barbara are both on the Pacific Coast ;)

Me thinks Michael is going to get into some trouble for letting Blanket skip school....and that Daddy Michael is going to find out about the flirter. That hospital isn't Vegas and what happens there will not stay there. Sorry Kalliope!

LOL at that gif. Well played Annie, well played.


Author's Response:

You see every mistakes! LMAO, I didn't even bother to check. I need to go look for a map of America before writing about geography lol.

Maybeeeeee, maybe not ;-) You'll have to wait for the next chapter to know :D And LMAO, Kay knows how Mike is so you an be sure that she will make sure Michael won't hear about this innocent flirt :)

This is my face whenever I make promise knowing damn well I always change my mind. My bad :/

Enjoy the new chapter Redone <33

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2015 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh Daddy Michael is coming back. He's just been dormant for a long time. When he finally reactivates, he will be Super Daddy Michael due to the long recharge time he has taken.

Is it bad that I want him to come back?

Author's Response:

You're absolutely right, Daddy Michael is coming back. I knew that, just like Liu, you want Michael back ;)

But right now he is being Super Daddy while Mommy is working, but not sure that Daddy Michael won't make an appearance in a flashback chapter and in a 'present time' chapter.... ;)

Thank you for the review and the rate. Enjoy this chapter :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 07:28 am Title: Flashback 1

:,(((( all the depressed emotions in this! I know you been told this but you are a hell of a writer. I felt like I was in the room with Kalli!

but Mama Kat was her mamma in this chapter. Even though all this mess is going on. Kalliope has to be strong for her babies! What? She wants to get sent to the hospital because she isn't eating and isn't getting rest?! 


Author's Response:

Katherine needs to learn her place, and it's not to be Blanket, Jade and Egypt's mother!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awww - I'm glad they compromised. I loved it when she threw her money in his face. Some things die hard, and Michael's stubborness and need to be in control are two things that he will not let go of.

Author's Response:

It's going to be hard for Michael to give Kay some space but it's not like he has the choice! She is ready to work!

The new chapter is here Redone, and I re-read it ha! :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 09:00 pm Title: Flashback 1

I get that Katherine is trying to help and it is a difficult time for all of them, but if that were my mother in law her ass would be out the door. And she wouldn't be coming back unless she was willing to follow the baby's sleep schedule. 

Author's Response:

LMAOOO! To be honest, I would have been more assertive too! But I guess Kay feels like Katherine is one of the few in her team, so she doesn't want to upset her. She is alone so I guess livign with Katherine is better than being by herself...


Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2015 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ok you know I love this version of Michael but he was being such a little brat in the first part of the chapter. I wanted to take the cash that Kay threw at his face and stuff it in his mouth so he stopped talking. Like seriously dude it isn't that big of a deal. This isn't 1945, women work all the time and the world still revolves on its axis. 

He needs to remember that Kay returning to work will make her happy. And he should want her to be happy.

Part time is a good idea though. She can ease into it, and hopefully he will see that the universe hasn't collapsed in on itself and relax. Although having her around all those attractive men all day won't help. I think Kay's mom is right about Michael being a bit insecure. Although he really should know better. 

Author's Response:

Hey Camille :)

LOOOOOOL! I bet this is what Kay wanted to do deep down. You're right, Michael has to think about what will make Kay happy. And we all know that if Kay isn't happy, Michael will have to deal with her temper and the thirst. I bet this is not what he wants ;-)

If it was up to Kay, I think she would have chosen to work full time but Daddy Michael needs to get used to it... LBut something is telling me that it won't be that easy...


The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2015 10:47 am Title: Flashback 1

Woah. Katherine crossed a line. She is the grandmother, not the mother. She doesn't run this household regardless of what she may be used to. And what is Blanket doing making excuses for Katherine?! He's a bit young for that.

There are so many balls in the air - the allegations, Michael's addiction, and Kalliope's decision to go back to work. I can't wait to see what happens next <3

Author's Response:

Hey Redone! I am happy to see you reviewing this chapter :))

Katherine wants to help Kalli but she is crossing a line, indeed. She needs to remember her place and let Kalliope be a mother to her children. It's already hard for her to be away from Michael, feeling guilty about not being by his side and now she can even be a parent. Let's hope it ends well../ ;-)

And I think Blanket is cute! He obviously wants his mother and his grandmother to get along, but he doesn't really understand why is mother is acting like this. He is a big too young, you're right!

This is just the beginning, so many things are going to happen, more characters introduced, more storylines... And more cliffhangers :) I hope you're ready :)

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 03:20 am Title: Chapter 3

hahahaha he got played!!!! I'm sttarting to love her more and more, also mike is just so used to it....doesnt he know the more he waits the more desire that will take over him? Well im just saying...

Author's Response:

Kalli knows what she wants and is to work! Michael will deal

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! sorry it took me a minute 2 get back 2 u been updating my story how is ur story/writing coming? 

Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry. I don't update as often as I used to :/

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2015 06:48 am Title: Chapter 3

hmmMichael has followed her and is trying to take her out to lunch and is a man of few words. Michael needs to not. This was too soon to approach her, so something tells me that he isn't quite ready to accept her new position....dude is going to create a reputation for them both before she even works a day. And not a good one; "controlling husband" does not look good on him

Author's Response:

Hey Redone!

You're right! Kalli doesn't want to be known as a the girl with the possesive husband. Hopefully she can persuade Michael to support her on this one!

Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Omg Smoochy and Bambi are back! How did I already miss three chapters? I'm so excited!🙌

I don't get why they are arguing about her returning to work though? She always said she would. Its not like they need the money so she can probably do part time if they find it's too much. 

Lol something tells me Daddy Michael is not going to like Aiden. And will continue to hate Charles. I wouldn't be surprised if his entire reason for not wanting her to work is secretly to keep her away from other men lol. 

Author's Response:

Hey Camille! I missed your reviews :) Yes, Smoochy and Bambi are back for new adventures! I hope you're ready :D

It's definitely not about money but more about Kalli wanting to do something else than being a Mommy and a wife. Hoepfully Michael understands it and let her do what makes her happy. She will never do something that might hurt her family!

You know Daddy Michael don't like ANY men near his Smoochy. This is going to be fun ;))

Thank you for the review, enjoy the chapter :D

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