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Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 03:08 am Title: Flashback 6

Love it, but Kay loves Michael, right. Please don't let their special connection be damaged. I really really really want them to be good. Your story has been so wonderful and funny and romantic so far, please don't break them up. They are soulmates and it should really stay that way. Michael and Kalliope against the world. I love Bambi and Smoochy Their are the b st when they are united. Like the force, you know, it's got a lot of power 😘😉

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2017 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 9

<3 <3<3 this story

Author's Response:

Thank you :D

I finally gave birth to the next chapter lmao!

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh and please get rid of any Lisa- Maries or any trying to get with Michael or Aidens trying to shamelessly taking advantage of a week moment in a marriage whatsoever.
Please let Bamby and Smoochie be the loving rekindled strong self again . THEY ARE INVINCIBLE WHEN THEY ARE TOGETHER AND THAT IS HOW IT SHOULD BE. 💕

Author's Response:

Actually, Kalliope and Michael are my all time favorite couple to write and I do believe that they are invincible. I bet they will be fine at the end

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 9

Dear Annie,
your Story has been so incredibly wonderful so far, well at least until the couple of chapters, where Kay and Michael are not in tune anymore.
All of your three stories have been everything from romantic to exciting, funny, sexy as hell and wonderfully postive. A faire tale we all wish for and I wish he could have had in real life.I grew soooo extremely fond of it. Please let those two soulmates rekindle and let them be Bamby and Smoochie again. Don't let this end bitterly with them endig up cheating, separating, seeing/ dating the opposite sex. I just know you did not come up with this story to let it end in drama. Please let them realize and fast, that they are meant to be and bring back that loving feeling. They have to be able to anticipate eachothers feelings and thought, like they used to. It was so special. You wrote it soll so well. Loved it. Whatever happened to Kay always wanting to protect her man? Michael also needs to be supportive and accept her wish for a little piece of independency - only part-time of course. Please, please, do your magic and let that special bond between them remind them, that they should treasure the special and deep love they have for eachother.
Please make it funny and endearing again. You did it so ecxellently well.
Much love

Author's Response:

Hello Gigi, thank you for your reviews.

With Kalliope and Michael, I wanted to write everything what a coupl go through and obviously it won't be pink 24/7. I know this is a fanfiction but I was trying to keep it realistic. I hope you understand and you're not too disappointed.

But you're right, I didn't come up with this story to not have an happy ending ;-)


Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 03:56 pm Title: Flashback 5

Oh, thank God not that Lisa-Marie.

Author's Response:

Lool! I didn't want THIS Lisa Marie in my story lol

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 8

Don' t let them break up, please!!!

Author's Response:

New chapter online :)

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

Why? ..,,,,,!,,,,

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Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 01:23 pm Title: Flashback 3

What a beautiful chapter!! This is so intensly romantic

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: WritingConquersAll Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2016 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what the hell happened in one year?! Great story by the way!!!

Author's Response:

Ikr! So much!

Reviewer: Amare58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 05:56 pm Title: Flashback 5


Author's Response:

Sorry for the wait, the new chapter is here 😘

Reviewer: Amare58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2016 03:42 pm Title: Flashback 5


Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: Amare58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2016 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 8

Man this series is just great. It's got everything

Author's Response:

Thanks x

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2016 06:23 pm Title: Flashback 5

I just reread War of the Hearts. I hope you can find time to update it soon!! I'd forgotten how much I loved this series.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 07:22 pm Title: Flashback 5

Pft. I don't care if it's the same Lisa-Marie; she's over stepping and she's not even being subtle about it. What is Michael thinking?! At least Katherine and Jade stepped up. Blanket? Like father like son. side eye

Author's Response:

Loool! Blanket like ladies too much :p

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2015 06:09 pm Title: Flashback 5

Kat redeemed herself in this chapter with the shade she threw at May. Lol. She had better clue in her son later.

Michael is OBLIVIOUS. Omg that chick is totally thirsting for him and he doesn't even get it lol. And then he wonders why his wife doesnt like her?! Dude open your eyes.

Kay should have told him why she was upset though, in private, instead of just bottling it up. She has every right to be mad at him, his recovery be damned. Nobody in recovery benefits from being coddled and kept from reality.

That's the theme of this story so far, Michael being clueless and Kay not communicating how she feels. Lol. I want to slap Michael across his pretty face so he wakes up. There are more people in the world than just you my friend. And Kay needs to talk instead of just accepting things. Even when she blew up on him in the present day chapter she didn't really explain it other than him not supporting her going back to work. It's way deeper than that. Michael is going to wake up one day and Kay will be banging Aiden and he won't be able to figure out why. 

Gah I want Smoochy and Daddy Michael back to normal.

Author's Response:

I'm sure Michael is aware of how dumb it was to invite Lisa-Marie and have his family there at the same time! That would be amazing if Kathy could knock some sense into his apple head lool.

I want to slap Kay as well lol!

Lmaooo! I'm sure Aiden would love that! Watch out Michael lool


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