Date: May 20, 2015 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 28 And Action!
Yass omg I hope the babies are okay
Author's Response:
We will find out soon.
SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2015 11:03 am Title: Chapter 28 And Action!
I love Melanie and Michael's inter action.
I hope Imani Ian's her babies are ok?
Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, for sticking in there with me. We will find out about the babies soon.
SUGAR
Date: May 20, 2015 08:57 am Title: Chapter 28 And Action!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
on the way! lol thx for reading!
Date: May 19, 2015 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 27 About To Hit the FAN
Loved it as always! Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It's coming! Thanks for reviewing!
SUGAR
Date: May 19, 2015 09:20 am Title: Chapter 27 About To Hit the FAN
OMG!!!Poor michael he's got two forces that are gettin ready to knock him down LOL.An angry black woman and elvis's twin haha what ever will he do .All i know is he better stand up and take that butt whuppin like a man cause it's about to go down.
Author's Response:
Is there a butt whipping to come? Lol He is in a world of shit as he says....who's gonna clean it up? Lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 27 About To Hit the FAN
Hope Michael is ready for all the shit that is now coming his way.
Ho Boy.
Author's Response:
So do I! Hehehe! Again thanks for reading, rating and reviewing! One day I will make it to 5 stars again!
SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 27 About To Hit the FAN
I can totally see Lisa leaking the story to the press when she finds out. Or outright fabricating shit. She does not strike me as the type to display any kind of dignity in the face of hurt or confrontation.
I'm glad Imani is starting to see things more clearly. She did allow him to use her. As soon as she found out he was seeing Lisa, she should have quit. I hope she's learned her lesson and doesn't put up with his BS anymore.
I agree with you about Lisa, she is being dishonest, but on some level she knows Michael would want nothing to do with her if she refused to have his child. So of course she isn't going to tell him.
Author's Response:
You have a pretty good handle on Lisa! lol Well, actually MJ broke it off with Goldie after things got serious with Lisa. Whn they were together at the beginning og the story, they hadn't been or quite a while. Again to answer ur last observation, yes she knows without having the children, MJ would have never married her.
Thanks for reading and commenting. enjoy the next chapter!
SUGAR
Date: May 18, 2015 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 27 About To Hit the FAN
Can they meet up already lol I love this story continue continue
Author's Response:
It's gonna happen. Thank u for loving this story, it means a lot to me that u all enjoy it. I plan to continue!
~SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 26 Who Knows What?
Lol yess she's married to a friend of mine. I've know him for like 17 years. He's FAM! They have a son together. I don't know her personally but I know him from before.
I never commented on the blog. I didn't even know that I could. O.O. I haven't been on there for a few months so I'm not sure how far you've gotten with it. I thought you had stopped updating it there. Don't worry when I rate you'll get 5 stars everytime because I love this story. It will go up soon I hope. <333
Author's Response:
Bless U! <3
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 26 Who Knows What?
Michael is delusional if he thinks he can keep a whole child hidden from his wife and everyone else. Screw Lisa, but his selfishness is being highly unfair to the child in the long term. He needs to either publicly claim the child as his own, or stay the fuck out of its life entirely. He can't have it both ways. No child deserves to be a dirty little secret or to be treated the same way he is treating Imani, like an afterthought. He wants to be a father so badly but if he can't put the baby first, he doesn't deserve to be.
I don't blame Lisa for taking birth control in this story. I wouldnt want a kid with this version of him either. Although I wouldn't be shocked if she was cheating too. I don't care what you say, you can't convince me that whatever "love" those two have for each other is enough to keep a marriage going. Or that Michael truly loves Lisa at all. She's just kind of there as a placeholder for "wife" because she has money and a famous last name, and he wants kids.
It's almost like Michael has some type of emotional block preventing him from loving. He feels bits and peices of love for both women, but not enough for either. In the last story he had an asshole phase at first, but he got over it and I believed he truly loved Mona at the end. Maybe she was it for him? Or he developed sociopathy late in life?
I hope that he doesn't act like such a sociopath with the baby.
Author's Response:
I don't think at this point that he wants to hide the child from the world. He just wants to know that it's his and safe. I don't think he is he type of man to have a child as a dirty little secret either. He loves children. As far as treaing Goldie as an aftr thought ur right about that. I think he's having second thouhts about it as well. Now, on to Lisa. Why cant she just come out and tell him she's not ready for another baby? She has been decieving him the entire time but there is a love they share, a surface kind of love, in my mind.You are right about his ability to love. There may be a block, keep reading and find out how it goes! I hope he isn't a sociopath... Lol didn't know I could write one of those.
Date: May 18, 2015 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 26 Who Knows What?
- she needs to give in a realize that she can't hide from him forever
Author's Response:
Hiding won't be an issue soon.
Date: May 18, 2015 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 26 Who Knows What?
Love your story so much,it gets more and more enjoyable to read on the edge of my seat to know what happens next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that is always my goal. Thanks for reading and commenting. plz rate next time! <3
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 05:20 am Title: Chapter 26 Who Knows What?
I remembered this story from your blog!!! It stuck in my mind because the pictures you use for Imani is the actual wife of one of my homeboys in real life.(It was a bit strange at first because it hit so close to home but the story is so good). Lmaooooo. It's getting closer to the part where I left off of in the blog. cant wait for it to get to that part.
More soon!
Author's Response:
Ahh, did u ever comment on the blog? I like to know who's reading. So ur saying that Nerissa Irving is married to a friend of urs? Tell me how it hit close to home, I'm all ears. Thank you for the complement. I do my best to make it realistic...of course not completely but the posibilities. R u all caught up on the blog? I've been trying to get my raitings up here from 4 stars to 5, but yall r tough.
Date: May 17, 2015 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 25 The Meeting
- juicy part 👌
Author's Response:
It's got some juice... Lol!
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2015 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 24 Down To The Wire
I hope that Michael's little plan backfires horribly. Hopefully Imani, Mani's mother AND Cindy all tell him to fuck off. He needs to learn that he can't control everything and everyone all the time. And that you should treat others how you yourself would like to be treated.
And Lisa, goodbye. Even though Mike is in the wrong, grab some dignity and stop acting like a raging psycho stalker. It isn't a good look.
Author's Response:
I love ur review. I can tell ur enjoying the story! Thanks, u guys all make my day!