Date: May 25, 2015 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 35 Confrontation
Well alright now michael finally put that b***h in her place yes,i really hope imani rethinks her plan to because he needs her and the babies more than ever.
Author's Response:
Yes he did. He could have set Lisa straight more but he was being gentle. Michael does need Goldie, so much more than he realizes at the time. Thanks for being there Big fan and I hope you totally enjoy the next chapter...I think it has ur name on it! LOL :)
SUGAR
Date: May 25, 2015 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 35 Confrontation
Hopefully he didn't hang up the phone properly and Goldie heard EVERYTHING.
I hope she doesn't go through with this plan with Patrick. Not saying she should jump into Michaels arms after everything but he should be in his kids lives.
Author's Response:
Ah... the life of a fan fiction...Things never quite work out how we expect rhem to. Honestly though, if it were me, honey I would have just claimed my man Mike without asking. lol He would be like "Uh, Sugar baby, Wait...slow down!" lol Thanks for hanging in there with me!
SUGAR
Date: May 25, 2015 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 35 Confrontation
- damm yes Michael throw that bitch out and go claim Goldie , this whole plan with Patrick will be to hard to read
Author's Response:
Lol She did overstep didn't she? OUT she goes with the garbage!!! Bye CHIN! It will be a hard thing to read. Thanks for reading it anyway! keep gong...
SUGAR
Date: May 25, 2015 07:35 am Title: Chapter 34 Precautions
Let me just take moment to give you a much needed SHOUT -OUT.I have to say you are without a doubt one of the best writers on this site ,in my opinion the thought process ,the details you bring to this story is outstanding you seriously have talent.As for my review while i'm glad to see michael trying to put some order to this mess he's in, other forces in this situation are none to kind to him ''SAD''and got a big chuckle out of patrick and melanie goin in on michael Lol he rightly deserves it.
Author's Response:
Big fan thank u for such a stunning review. I hope u continue to feel that way about my writing and will read and review some of my one shots. Although they are pure smut I put my heart into them. Now, as for this story those two together maybe not a good thing, for Michael that is.
SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2015 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 33 Missions
Betrayal to the zenith. Its no shock Michael has trust issues. Lisa needs to be stopped NOW!
Author's Response:
So much...Michael does have trust issues...it began long ago. <3
SUGAR
Date: May 24, 2015 02:35 am Title: Chapter 33 Missions
Lisa is such a B**** , don't let Goldie hurt him
Author's Response:
Ah, such passion u have! thanks for reading....don't stop plz!
SUGAR
Date: May 24, 2015 01:47 am Title: Chapter 33 Missions
This just gets juicier and jucier !! First off PAT although he is all types of fine,trying to get with imani Lol!he's just binding his time to get MJ out the picture haha .And don't get me started on SANDY i knew she wasn't right ole sneaky heifer'and of course LISA goin all in ,poor mj and imani no rest for the weary
Author's Response:
Not much rest yet...Keep reading now.
SUGAR
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2015 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 32 Progressions
Holy shit Lisa is evil. What a vindictive bitch. I get that she's hurt but there are innocent children involved in this now, and she's planning to ruin the entire course of their lives just to get back at a man whose heart she obviously doesnt hold in the first place. Jesus.
You would think she would have a sliver of decency being a mother herself. I can kinda understand her urge to trash Michael in the media but she needs to leave the babies out of it.
Imani also needs to think of her children. Not Michael's reputation in the press or that cunt wife of his. The children are what matters and what's best for them is having a father in their lives who loves them. I hope she makes the right decision and tells Michael about Lisa's blackmail.
She also needs to ask herself, can she really trust Lisa's word? I think the answer is a resounding NO. Lisa has just proven herself capable of anything. She could easily turn around and spread rumors about Michael anytime she feels like it, no matter what Imani does. Lying to him about the kids only hurts the kids.
Where is Melanie when you need her? She needs to talk some sense into her daughter.
Author's Response:
you are so right! :)
Date: May 22, 2015 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 32 Progressions
I don't exactly get the whole point of Lisa Marie trying to ruin Michael and keep him from his kids. I assume that he's going to leave her regardless what happens between him Imani. She doesn't want his kids anyway so why do all this to him?
Author's Response:
A woman scorned is a woman scorned. Lisa's angry and hurt, most of us dont think so clearly when hurt and pissed. Things r done and said that r pointless.
Date: May 22, 2015 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 32 Progressions
Let me start off by saying '' Oh Lord ''Michael sure does look sexay in those GIFS ooh chile LOL .But back to the review this is just a sad situation while i admire imani wanting to protect her babies daddy fom that vile ,evil ,witch i just hate that michael has to be hurt.He seems to be really coming into his feelings for imani and not just for the babies he's going to be devastated its not gonna end well.
Author's Response:
I am with u on that. She shouldn't feel she has to do that, but she doesn't know where she stands with Michael.
Date: May 22, 2015 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 32 Progressions
- they are really about to hurt him in the most painful I can't watch this
Author's Response:
story's good though, right?
Date: May 22, 2015 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 31 Plans
All of this planning and deceiving on both their parts needs to stop,they made their bed so to speak ,so they need to come together and figure this out if only for their childrens sake .Lisa's vindictive she's gonna do what she wants regardless,all that matters now should be the babies welfare,sorry for gettin too deep just had to go there LOL!!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh no it's fine to go there.... This storyline makes all of us go there! Lol
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2015 11:44 am Title: Chapter 31 Plans
I don't think she should lie. Its going to come out that she was sleeping with a married man anyways, lying will only make her look like a skank who was sleeping with multiple men at once. And it wont really save any scorn directed Michael's way. Plus it isn't fair to the kids to deny them their father. Can she honestly say their lives will be better without Michael in it? Not saying they should be together, but I'm sure he will be a good father.
If I were in her place I would have told Lisa the truth- that she was sleeping with Michael long before Lisa came along.
She isn't thinking clearly. I hope she doesn't do it.
Author's Response:
She may not be thinking clearly. How clearly would you think if someone threatened Michael to you? How far would u go to protect him?
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2015 11:13 am Title: Chapter 31 Plans
Dam! Things just keep coming and coming, love it!
Author's Response:
Yes they do!
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2015 10:50 am Title: Chapter 30 Wishes
Nothing like a woman scorned..... Michael needs order right now, he's all over the place. I don't blame Imani for being as strong as she can be. The marriage that never should have happened! LOLLOLLOL!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
There are lots of emotions involved...