Reviews For Return to Oz
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Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2022 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

Incredibly sweet! Looking forward to some more fluffy scenes.

Reviewer: Sockmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2018 12:51 am Title: Chapter 6

I loved this chapter so much!!! I finished reading this story and I am going to back to all of my favorite chapters. I love that scarecrow has a love interest and it’s so cute how he wants her to stay! But she is distracted so drama is on it’s way.

Author's Response:

Poor Scarecrow is just pouring his heart out to Blair and the whole thing is going unnoticed. Blair was in for a big surprise once she found out. It also didn't take them very long to share their first kiss! There was definitely a lot going on here.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2015 07:20 am Title: Chapter 6

That was the cutest thing!! Scarecrow being all protective and possessive of Bea with Simon. Like "No you don't jive turkey!!" lol. 

I'm so sad Bea didn't really hear what he said before he kissed her. I'm hoping now that the feelings are mutual between them. Scarecrow sounded so hopeful and in love.

I guess Bea is about to meet a not do cowardly lion now. I wonder what happened there. 

Your Oz is so magical. Lol. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that the magical elements I'm incorporating here wouldn't come off as too weird or anything. I have a thing for epic and fantasy elements so I'm trying to apply them while simultaneously keeping Oz familiar. It good to know that you are enjoying them. :) Yes, it was unfortunate Beatrice couldn't hear what Scarecrow had to say but...maybe she'll get a second chance? And I guess you're wondering what on earth is Lion's deal. Lol All will be revealed about him in the upcoming chapter, which will be coming soon. Thank you so much for your faithful reviews!

Reviewer: thelifer Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2015 09:32 am Title: Chapter 6

Your story is so amazing! This chapter took me on a roller coaster of emotions, worrying about what will happen to the heroes' relationship. 



Author's Response: Why, thank you so much! I do hope you stick around as the story progresses. I should have an update appearing sometime next week. Thank you for reading and I look forward to getting more feedback from you in the near future 😊

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2015 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

They kissed!!! Yes!!! That was adorable. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have another update sometime next week, Lord's willing a86; Thank you for following the story.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2015 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6

“I’ve never had anyone to call my own before. If you stay with me, Beatrice, it would be awe-inspiring. We can come here every night, if you wish it.” 

I just can't get over the way he talks, intelligent.

When Scarecrow said that she was the one to stay with them "forever" I could amainly and eerily hear that word echoing in the back of my mind until they shrunk to nothingness.Lol it was comically scary. Poor Scarecrow. Beatrice was clueless as to what he was saying, each and every one of his genuine thoughts went unperceived, though it was an innocent casualty on her part. However No matter the foreshadowing disappointment and heartbreak Scarecrow may or may not experience in the future.....BEATRICE BETTER make sure that in the end he is happy or she will be antagonize. I'm sorry but that's just how I feel. But she likes him too so taking such actions may be avoided.

Thank you and update.



Author's Response: LOL. I cannot stop laughing at how engrossed you are in this story and you're very clear that you want Scarecrow to be happy. I love it! I'm so glad your heart goes out to him so much, even if it is to the point that you're threatening Beatrice. Lol I don't blame you though. I would too. But Beatrice is crushing on him pretty hard so hopefully by the time this story ends she'll make things right? Maybe??? You have to stick around and see for yourself. Thank you so much for this great review! Yes, expect an update next week :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2015 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh boy, I think Beatrice has set herself up for a very difficult departure. And is that THE Lion?! I know he was trying to work on his courage the last time we saw him, but 😳. Maybe he went off the deep end 😔



Author's Response: Poor Beatrice. Lol She has no idea what she agreed to when she told him "absolutely." And yup. That's THE Lion. I guess it's safe to say that he's no longer cowardly. His situation will be revealed in the next chapter.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2015 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

AWWWW!!! Oh my God, I squealed so hard when he kissed her!! That was too adorable. I loved when he was pouring his heart out, although he thought she was listening to him when she really didn't hear anything he was saying. That ought to be an interesting conversation for later. So, we now know where the Lion is. What will happen next? I can't wait!!



Author's Response: Thank you! At first, I was afraid that I was having them experience that first kiss too early in the story but...I think it worked out okay. Lol I was actually laughing at Beatrice being so oblivious to Scarecrow's confession when I was writing it. Yes, she's going to be in for a big surprise later on. Poor thing. Lol As for Lion...stick around ;) Thank you so much for your constant feedback.

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