Date: Jan 23, 2016 01:30 pm Title: Chapter XXXII
Team Vivian all the way. I'm so happy you're writing this again. Thanks for updating
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2016 11:25 am Title: Chapter XXXI
I honestly believe Michael is making a big mistake with Vivian I really can't stand or trust her she's the annoying one really if you ask me. I also agree with LouieLlama 100% he needs to leave Ari alone if he doesn't want anything with her. I really like Ari I just wish she would stop being so naive and tell Michael to stop playing games with her especially since she now knows there is another woman involved or just simply leave him alone as well.
Author's Response:
I can't even take a side between Vivian and Arilynn lol probably because I created them, but I can get why people get that vibe from Vivian. His comparison of her to Diana (a woman who has already hurt him) says enough kind of when it comes to her. At least with Arilynn he knows he'd never get hurt. And even though ari knows there's another woman involved she doesn't know just how INVOLVED Michael is with her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2016 01:53 am Title: Chapter XXXI
Seems like Michael is testing out water with both of them to see where he should be placing his affections. Though the rush he's in to seek out Vivian and the reluctance in getting in touch with Ari says everything. Janet should stop trying so hard, in the end it will only leave Ari broken hearted. She's a nice girl, to be sure...but I see her more like a nun or a missionary than someone's girlfriend....
Author's Response:
Michael's been testing the waters now for long enough he will be making a decision soon. Arilynn is a nice girl, maybe too nice.
Date: Jan 21, 2016 12:16 am Title: Chapter XXXI
Oohh! Update! Arilyn needs to try harder if she wants Michael! :c
Author's Response:
I'll be updating it more regularly now.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter XXXI
Sighs in every language known to man!!!
I really love the report Viv has with Michael but I'm still so on the fence about how evasive she is. That and her having the nerve to be judgemental. She's rating at 6 Ughs right now.
Janet gets 7 Ughs because she's relentless.
Ari gets 9 Ughs because she's so spineless when it comes to Michael. He could talk her down a rabbit hole and she would go in with her eyes closed.
Still just team Michael.
I missed the hell out of this story!!!!!!
More soon! Creepy internet love abounds. <333
Author's Response:
LMAO. It is hard to imagine a relationship between Mike and Vivian. like a real public one. She doesn't know anything about that kind of life and it's hard to see her in that situation. Arilynn it's easier to see because she's been a part of show business now.
Janet... just wait for it. She is NOT done.
Michael could talk me down a rabbit hole and I'd go in with my eyes closed and ears plugged, girl. LOL!!! but I get what you're saying. Though in her case you gotta understand the kind of influence this man has. It's not entirely her fault that she's so naive to fall for it every time.
This story is back don't worry!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2016 07:23 pm Title: Chapter XXXI
I just love Vivian and Michael he need a girl like her not because is sister want him to talk Ari done mean he ofto but he needs to make up his mind great chapter
Author's Response:
He does need to make up his mind and believe me the choice will be made soon.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2016 06:24 pm Title: Chapter XXXI
These three are all giving me a headache just reading about them.
Michael, if all you can think about is Viv leave Ari alone.
Viv, open your eyes and realize what you are passing up.
I gotta say I love Mike and Viv's conversations.
As for Ari I wish she would stop annoying the shit out of me. Don't even get me started on her phony fangirl ass. Yes I said phony. Not in a golddigger way but it is obvious she would not be nearly so enamoured with him if he wasn't 'Michael Jackson' which imo is the last thing he needs. I don't get why so many reviewers like her she is just a twit.
Author's Response:
LOL
It seems really simple. Michael is obviously in love with Vivian so the need to keep Ari around at this point is kind of selfish, but at the same time he hasn't given Ari the chance to show him any different.
I think Vivian sees more than you know with Michael. Her lifestyle and his are EXTREMELY different. it's hard to picture what a real relationship between those two would even be like. At least Arilynn is used to show business by now. And that may be true in the beginning that she wouldn't be so head over heels if it wasn't for who he was, but she's alreay come to realize (after his confession of his no strings relationship with Vivian) that he's no different than any other guy.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2016 05:18 pm Title: Chapter XXXI
Michael needs to make up his damn mind already. Poor Ari has no idea about Vivian and Vivian is just being a bitch about Ari. Calling her "The Virgin." At least Ari doesn't make a deal with someone that involves having sex with someone, no strings attached. Whore. I still hope Michael and Ari get together.
Author's Response:
Michael does need to make a choice. He can't string poor Ari along forever.
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2015 03:51 am Title: Chapter XXX
I'm still leaning towards Arilynn. Both girls are genuine, but Arilynn has been more upfront and shown respect and consideration for Michael. On the otherhand, his relationship with Vivian is founded on lies and she has repeatedly left him in the dark, found humor from making him uncomfortable and/or embarrassing him, and prioritized her feelings before his to a rather dramatic extent. While she is charismatic and I can see his attraction to her, those character features don't bode well for a lasting mutually-beneficial relationship.
Sorry for the delay in reviewing. I've had this tab open, but life is crazy.
Date: Dec 01, 2015 01:30 am Title: Chapter XXX
Please tell me you're gonna hook him up with that unclassy byatch again? Eew.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Chapter XXX
I like that Michael didn't crumble right away with Vivian. What she did was kind of messed up. Telling him about her children and having her children meet him are two different things. She could have just told him that reason then. It did grave injustice to both Michael and her children. He did give her a lot of his trust and a very intimate part of himself that strayed put merely physical for her so I can see where he felt she didn't reciprocate the same.
He really needs to not lead Ari on either. If he does really have some sort of feelings for her then he has to let go of Vivian. And vise versa.
I feel bad for both girls but I'm still team Michael. They are all losing right now.
More soon bb!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Chapter XXX
Michael shouldn't say things to Ari that he doesn't mean, just because he thinks she wants to hear it. All while he's sitting there thinking of Vivian...it's just wrong.
Ari was up to her usual needy puppy routine hanging on his every action and word. Like seriously she can't ask him 'when will I hear from you again?" Instead she longingly watches him leave through the window like a dog at the pound pining after a potential owner to take it home. Ugh and now that he's fed her some scraps she's going to be trailing after him even longer.
I'm glad Vivian called him and apologized! That wás a big step for her. And of course he will forgive her because he's Michael after all. I dont blame him for being a bit stubborn about it too. I hope she doesn't do anything else to screw things up.
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Chapter XXX
I can't believe that Michael would forgive Vivan so easily. I swear, if he breaks Ari's heart, I'm going to be so pissed off. It sounds like Ari is really getting used to being around him and he is starting to warm up to her. I hope they work out. Please continue soon!!!
Date: Nov 27, 2015 11:16 am Title: Chapter XXX
welcome to Team BAD Michael
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2015 10:58 am Title: Chapter XXX
Omg Michael is bad lol love it