Reviewer: cassieluv73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2015 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 11

Not surprised at all. Michael is a walking wet dream! They'll be going through the motions before becoming a couple...

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:31 am Title: Chapter 11

HWow. That was wow. Spontaneous kiss so hot. I bet money shes right about what his lips feel like😊 so he writes a song about preferring to be alone woth her instead of going out to sone restaurant in the publlic eye, good song choice! Its very cute and freaking adorable. Then he makes out with her but cant think of why he wanted to. Dude grow up. Being michael jackson doesnt mesn you can get whatever/whoever you want so easily. Hes used to not being told no and getting what he wants. Shes totally good for him:). I so knew he picked on her to intenionally piss her off probably because shes cute when shes mad type thing XD hes that confident that hes that good that she wouldnt go back to her dorm after dropping him off. HM SURE. He does know how to kiss well. And you know what they say about dancers in the bedroom... They know how to work those hips! I know im just shocked i hadnt seen the original full version ive seen the full version of bad, ya now i love the video :) she so wanted to slam him against a wall and show him whos really bad XD. Wonder who he wrote TWYMMF about. Hmmmmm. Keep going i so love this. Its one of my fav go to feel good stories:)

Author's Response:

Ikr?! Michael's so full of himself that he can't bring himself to say that he likes Hazel. Instead after he kisses her, he claims he doesn't know why smh he can't bring himself to admit his feelings just yet. I love Lovin You so I knew in someway I'd have to incorporate that song in the story lol

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2015 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wow... very neat, as well as very inspiring too. I like it a lot... :)

Keep up your super-cool, very brilliant and creatively phenomenal writing... :)

Author's Response:

Aw thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter :)