[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2015 11:59 am Title: Chapter 9
With Michael you never know.
Date: Dec 28, 2015 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Mike will really fall for her when he sees her.
Date: Jul 09, 2015 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oooooooooh this was so awesome!!!!!!!!! I am so excited for the next chapter bro!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael eyes are gonna pop out his head
Author's Response:
Ikr?! Michael's gonna look at Hazel and be like daaaaaayum girl you look bad!! (In a good way lol) Rofl :)
Date: Jul 09, 2015 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
I so love this! Yea I always had Tati pinned down as a stuck up bitch. I think he's going to get one hell of a raging erection when he sees Hazel, who I bet looks a 1000000000x better than Tatiana ever did. I can so see hazel singing the song back to him , you know taunting him, I know I know it's not a duet but that would be cool as hell! I think she'll be amazing at it. Can't wait to hear what happens:)
Author's Response:
Lol it shall be interesting indeed!!! Since for the next chap I want it to be told in Michael's pov to show how he's feeling ;) It would be super cute if Hazel were to sing with him! Stay tuned gurl!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2015 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow... :) I like this chapter; it is very unique, as well as very well-written too (despite the lack of paragraphs every time a new person speaks).
I also noticed that while Tatiana is shown to not be very nice in this story, Karen listens when Hazel tells her she is nervous and then replies that she will be fine (thus showing that Karen had seen what stage fright was like, and possibly knew how it felt, too). :)
Keep up your super-cool, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Author's Response:
Aw thanks so much!!!!! That means a lot to me, knowing that you appreciate the story :)