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Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2013 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh come ON!! That is the worst cliff hanger ever, you cant just cut it off there! Ahahahaha god this is so good! Pleeeeaaase publish soon, this is really special! Probably my favorite fic so far!



Author's Response:

well, let us not forget that Lisa's behavior left Michael quite insecure and he has his own doubts and fears to face before he commits himself to another woman...

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2013 06:32 am Title: Chapter 20

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I'm craving fo more; girl!!!!! Nice, really sweet story! keep going!!!   please!!



Author's Response:

Patience is a virtue....

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2013 04:43 am Title: Chapter 19

Awwwwaawwwawwwawww that was the most romantic day in a fanfiction I have literally ever read in any other story. NO JOKE. I've never enjoyed a chapter more than that- dcrew it, the whole story is just so amazingly well written!! 

Please publish again soon, I cant take the cravings for this story!!!

Reviewer: MissK123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2013 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this story!! <3 thank you do much for writing it.<33

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2013 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 18

Wooohoohoo, arent they cute!!! XD

God I love this, Anouk's personality is HILARIOUS!! I love Mikes reaction too XDXDXD

Publish again soon, cuz I cant wait to read this dinner scene!

 

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2013 07:13 am Title: Chapter 17

OMYGAWD pleeeeaase publish again soon, I CANT TAKE IIITTT!!! 

I love this sooo so so so so so so much!!! And I wanna know what this accident is, poor Manny! :/



Author's Response:

It was discussed some chapters earlier, he fell from the tree in the head and was in coma for 3 weeks...

Reviewer: makingmichaelmagic Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2013 04:34 am Title: Chapter 16

I read ‘Behind the Mask’ during a very busy hour in my life and I still found it undownable.  I pine for heroines that can resist the superstar charm of ‘The Great Michael Jackson’ and after reading about Anouk I was smiling with surprise.  With this story of ‘femalien’ I don’t ever get a huge background dump with any of the characters POV’s instead their lives, secrets and issues are gradually introduced, which I loved.  I highly recommend this one even for those non- mjfanfiction readers.  I think they’ll be surprised.   Spoilers: Anouk is on the run from her past and from Michael on to a secluded place where she lives and works, avoiding any personal ties from him.  What she hadn’t counted on was him being drawn into her life and literally following her to the place where she calls home.  Slowly Anouk is letting her guard down, growing attached and falling in love, allowing herself to dream of a future with a famous man that won’t hurt her....and so the story goes...and the twists...and yes of course before I forgot - 'The Romance'...can’t ask for more...


An absolute  must read for 'femalien' fans


Rating: another 10 stars.

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2013 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2013 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 15

Lisa Marie was out of place for speaking to Anouk like that not to mention trying to put her hands on her. I think she should have been allowed to atleast get one punch in but that's ok cause she cursed her out.

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 04:50 am Title: Chapter 9

New Reader Alert!!!

Ahh... my lovely femalien...

You've done it again! :-D

I'm totally into this story!!!  Famous MJ stories are my least favorite, but this one, I love!!

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Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 14

hum...Could be Lisa?
Hopefully Michael and Anouk can work things out!Jesus!

I'm dying to see THE KISS!omg!


Thank you!Cant wait next chapter!I'm curious!

Reviewer: Dri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

My thoughts on this chapter...Michael will tell you...



Much Too Soon (Michael Jackson)


She was there just sitting at the table
Thinking now that things won't be the same
And would you like to go with me?
And she aswered no to me
But I guess I've learned my lesson much too soon

I never thought she'd leave me forever
But who knows just what the future brings?
And would she like to go with me?
And she aswered no to me
But I guess I've learned my lesson much too soon

Take away this never ending sorrow
Take this lonely feeling from my soul
If only I knew what things bring tomorrow
She'd be sitting here beside me
And my heart would fill with gold
Just...

I hope to make a change now for the better
Never letting fate control my soul
And hoping that my prayers will see
The day that you'll come back to me
But I guess I've learned my lesson much too soon

Yes, I guess I've learned my lesson much too soon

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Heeeeeeeeeere's Lisa!

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 09:32 am Title: Chapter 14

Who else but Lisa Marie's crazy ass. Michael might have said what what he wanted to but I doubt Lisa Marie was done with the conversation. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2013 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hope Michael's smart enough to kick Lisa's desperate thirsty ass to the curb. All she's going to bring him is more hurt and pain. That relationship is never going to make him happy. It's just going to waste his time and prevent him from meeting someone new. And if he gets back with her, even temporarily, there's no way Anouk and him will ever work out. Anouk has had a hard enough time trusting him, if he gets with Lisa so soon after saying all these things to her she isn't going to believe another word out of his mouth. I wouldn't either. He needs to remember that Anouk never said she didn't return his feelings. Everything she said is based on the fact that she can't get past her own pain. She's afraid. He did the right thing by leaving her though. She needs to make the next move. 

I love this story so far. I like all your stories they're great. My favorites are Give into me and Ghosts. 

 

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