[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 05:35 pm Title: Pain
"What was Austin doing to her?" Messing her up, that is!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 05:08 pm Title: Why Me?
Austin purposely made her lose the baby! Another miscarriage.. Michael needs to know about this!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of your reviews, InvincibleGirl! I greatly appreciate everyone's feedback, its so motivational. Thank you very much, and I hope you enjoy what is yet to come :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:55 pm Title: Layla is The One
Layla is developing a crush on the hunk, Michael. ;) lol, but Marissa is way different than Michael and Layla. They have othing in common. Marissa doesn't even like kids.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:51 pm Title: Just To Let You Know :)
I just read your story today and i'm completely hooked to it now . i can't wait for whats goin to happen, youve just earned another loyal reader : ) , keep it up !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I love to hear feedback from my readers, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside to know your enjoying it :) Again thank you so, so much, your reviews mean a lot!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:50 pm Title: Now Or Never
Yesss, they're both about to see each other again!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:46 pm Title: The Morning After
Layla is so sad and depressed. They're both thinking about one another. The flashback of Michael and Layla and the picture was so cute but saddening.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:39 pm Title: Love and Lust
See, Austin beat the crap out of her. He found the tests... She's not a good hider, lol. And Michael and Marissa. I see y'alls.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:35 pm Title: Hope
Layla is preganant! Watch Austin beat her up and make her lose it if he finds out. I hope Michael and Layla meet soon.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:32 pm Title: 10 Years Later
Marissa is probably with somebody else besides Michael. Hmph. And he probably found Layla. Awww. Loving the story so far.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:26 pm Title: Alone
Oh my god, this beginning! It's so good and interesting. Layla is being abused. :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2013 09:01 am Title: ''I'm Proud To Have You As My Daughter In Law''
At least Kate loves that they're together now :)! Wow they're about to make love again! Layla is gonna end up prego.
Let's bring on the sequel :D!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, they've overcome one obstacle, but lets just see how it goes when Marissa finds out!
They can't keep their hands off each other, so hopefully she will get pregnant, she really wants kids. We'll just have to wait and see :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2013 10:55 pm Title: You Have A Lot Of Explaining To Do
Update girl :D I gotta know what's gonna happen. Mama Kate seems pissed
Author's Response:
I will! Yeah, she is pretty pissed, but lets see what happens after Michael explains everything :)
Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2013 05:23 am Title: Sequel, Yes or No?
Sequel please! I wanna know what happens to everyone. 10 years Austin has been abusing Layla and 10 years Michael has been in love with her so I wanna know who she will choose.
Date: Aug 01, 2013 07:53 pm Title: Alone
U should do a sequel.i enjoyed reading this.
Date: Jun 28, 2013 09:46 pm Title: Alone
Pregnancy is no reason to stay with someone you don't truly love. You aren't doing the future kid ANY favors by staying with someone based on a lie. Smh. I get that Michael feels guilty but he is being stupid. He should at least tell Layla what is going on. And I doubt that kid is his anyways.
Author's Response:
That's very true, it won't do anybody involved any good. But IF it is his child, he can't just leave Marissa right now to be with Layla, because when the kid grows up, he or she would resent him for abandoning him or her at such an early stage. Michael doesn't want that to happen. But you will soon find out who the baby daddy is. Thank you for the review : )