Date: Aug 23, 2016 07:51 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Man I'm enjoying this twist! I hope you will be able to continue your story sometime soon!
Date: Sep 27, 2015 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Hey girl, long time no hear. How is the good ole college life? Is it harder than high school, better than high school or about the same? What college/university are you enrolled in?
Just wanted to let you know, asking how you're doing was not the only reason why I came here :)
Date: Mar 15, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Something I should have said in the beginning. But it is reall nice to read a squeaky-clean story such as this one on this website. I have seen millions of stories on here that are R rated for explicit sexual content and strong language. I'm mean really? That's the only thing these writers can do is format a hardcore sex story to get the most readers and reviews? Frickin pathethic.
Anyway, how'd you come up with this story btw? It almost reminds me of the move The Secret Life of the Bees. Only for this story, in stead of bees...we have flowers :)
Please continue and update asap when you have the chance. I really like this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I agree with you about all the explicit stories. It's so sad. I actually was inspired to write this story from reading Secret Life of Bees. It's really one of my favorite books as I thought it would inspire a great MJ Fanfic. In the first version of this story that I wrote (Eons ago!0, there were bees involved. Farrah's family were beekeepers and Michael was their apprentice. I changed it to followers because I thought it would make the story more orginal
Date: Feb 08, 2015 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Farrah: It felt so good to be Michael's girlfriend. I can honestly say that I have never been truly happy than I am now. Tonight I'm going to visit my Michael back at the cottage. I knock and wait for him to open the door, which doesn't take very long. He smiles when he sees me. I smile too. I step inside and turn around just as he closes the door. Walking up to him...I throw my arms around his neck as he throws his around my waist. We stand there kissing like there's no tomorrow. Something inside me becomes bold as I was suddenly unbuttoning Michael's shirt. I stopped and waited for him to react; he didn't. So I resumed. I don't know why I was acting this way. Maybe it was because when I saw him shirtless down by the lake...his upper body and his slight muscles enticed me. Together, we manage to take off his shirt as I toss it on the bed. My hands roam gracefully all over his chest, which makes me shiver with excitement. I heard him hiss. "Michael, I'm sorry if I'm being too forward."
Michael: He looks at me with those pretty brown eyes of his. "Don't be Farrah," he says cupping my cheek, "you're my girl now remember? Besides I like what you're doing. Your hands feel nice and warm."
How was that MichaelManiac? Was it sexy in a sensual way or what? LOL
Author's Response: Lol! You're right!
Date: Jan 30, 2015 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Don't worry girl, I am not here to pester you on updating. I just wanted to get another thing off my chest. Now as I begin to explain...you might think it strange afterwards lol. But I consider it really sexy when a woman unbuttons/or tears open a man's shirt and begins to rub his chest. Actually it is way better than sex itself. That's why I was sort of hinting at you to throw in a "chest part" for this story :D Having a woman rub the chest of a man is another way to be romantic working bypassing the sex part.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I've never written a sex scene before. It's too embarrassing. If my characters have sex it's always implied but never described. This could go a long way. Thanks!!
Date: Jan 25, 2015 10:34 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
YAAAAAY!!!!! They are official now, so happy for both of them :)
The part where Charles (aka Mr. Dipsh*t) referred to women as madis and copulatory objects irked me. There's no doubt that comes to mind that if Farrah were to stand her ground a little more agressive, then he would hit her. I know for a fact that once they marry, Charles will not have conjugal loyalty...heck he doesn't even have loyalty right now.
Thank you so much for updating girl. When I saw the 8th chapter, I thought Omg she updated FINALLY! And thanks again for adding the kissing part. I can't wait to see how their relationship will flow now that they are boyfriend and girlfriend.
Lovely chapter, I want more!!!!
Author's Response: Lol!!! That gif is killing me!!! Yes, Charles has major potential to be really abusive and the loyalty part... well, we'll see. I thought to myself: "Today, I will update." And I did!!! Lol, you're welcome. The chest part will come very soon. There will be more! Thanks for being a faithful reader!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 05:50 am Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
Great!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Unthinkable
I missed this story thanks for updating it can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!