Great writing! I could feel the emotions of the story, how farrah's momis a pain in the ass and her love for michael. Good rewrite.
Just want you to know, that not everything your writing is historically correct, especially if it's civil rights time.
By the way when you added the N-word, I almost flipped, beimg black and all.
Thanks for writing this story, not enough history fics on here ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! If you don't mind me asking, what is not historically correct? I would love to know so that I can correct my mistakes and use accurate facts in the future. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!