Date: Aug 31, 2012 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
Ths is good! Write more & check out my story.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I have.
Date: Jul 24, 2012 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
PLEASE upload the new chapter! D: I'm dying here LOL
Author's Response: Well I've been pretty busy lately but I'll try to come up with something. I'm glad you're really into my story though. Thanks!
Date: Jul 20, 2012 06:05 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
Please update! <33
Author's Response: I'll be working on it!!
Date: Jul 10, 2012 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
Wow this is very interesting. The idea of the impossible love due to the skin color is great... I think you can come up with a very good story, just keep it this way. It's a delicate topic so please... I suggest you to take it slowly, let their love grow without hurry! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I fist published this story about a year ago but things didn't happen so slow so I decided to slow things down a bit. Impossible love is one of my favorite type of stories to write!! Thanks for the review!!
Date: Jul 03, 2012 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
ah... this story is just awsome so far!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 09:07 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
Was I the only one secretly wishing she would fall in the lake and nearly drown so Michael would have to jump in and save her? haha
Cuz I totally was XD
Oh how I just LOVE stories about an impossible love
There’s just somethn so enticing and bittersweet about them
Keep it up please I was really glad to see youd updated!!
Thnx, Ash ;^)
Author's Response: LOL!! That's brillant! I do too! They are always the best! Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 07:57 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
I really like this! At first I was like "did she accidentally delete the story?" then I saw that you decided to redo it. :P I also really love the concept of this story and any way you do it, I'm sure it will be great and spectacular ;D
I really like how when they was at the lake and Farrah touched Michael's feet ^_^ too cute!
You are a great writer and I'm positive this is going to be a wonderful story like the rest of them!! :D
Much Love <33
Author's Response: Yeah, I decided to redo it. I didn't really like it and I ran out of ideas. Aww thanks! Lol! I would havedd been blushing too!! Thanks so much for all your support Oh by the way We've made an update to "when push comes to shove" you've missed a lot of "Who Do You Love???" but updates for that will be comming soon. Thanks for your never ending support! You're too sweet!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 05:48 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
This is story is very good!I think your writing is great!
Please keep going!
Thank you!
Author's Response: No, thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2012 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3: Bit by bit
I almost intstantly fell in love withthis story the moment I saw the banner, and when I laid eyes on the story itself, I was a shoe-in. One thing I hope you do fufill is making your chapter a little lonher, just to be more satistfying, otherwise, you're on the right path! Keep. It. Up!
Author's Response: The banner is beautiful, it's made by leahluv21 so if you need a banner she's the lady. I will try to make the chapters longer. Thanks for the encouragement and thank for the review!