Date: Sep 05, 2016 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Deep frying a turkey goddd 😂😂 thats interesting. Awesome
wet dream. She should have brought up
the phone convo that was completely inappropriate and uncalled for, for this woman to be calling her up harassing her about shit that's not her problem. He better handle it. Great chpt
Author's Response: thanks...i know she should have said something but he was being so nice and she didnt want to kill the mood. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 05, 2016 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Just love their casual convos. Valentino really trusts Lindsay...he's disclosing himself little by little :)
Author's Response: true little by little she gets mre pieces of the puzzle called Valentino thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, poor Lindsey. That's hysterical. I would've been mortified just like she was. Valentino is one sexy mofo, though; it'd be hard to NOT fantasize about him.
Author's Response: that he is. hopefully her mother wont say anything further. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 05, 2016 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great update. Loved her dream. Glad that Valentino texted her, I guess Lizzy gave him an earful...is she up his wife? Poor Lindsey, is head over heels for Valentino. But will have to forget him thinking he is married! BUT. he did kiss her lips in her dream! Is there some truth in that dream?
Author's Response: do you blame her? he's quite the looker and talker. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 02, 2016 09:19 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh please, don't let him be married!!!! That would really put a damper on the story.
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2016 01:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow, it goes straight to the heart. Please update, soon
Author's Response:
it will be a few days bu no worries i will. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 02, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 8
Those two aren't a couple, no way. I'm getting the feeling she's either the ex or a hired hand, like a nanny or something, and maybe she's lying about having a child with him. Can't wait for the next chapter - is it done yet??? If not, why not??? lmao sorry babe, I'm just so addicted to this! xx
Author's Response: so many possibilities. no sorry, I'm working on my other story. have to update that one first. Glad you are liking it. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Caught up again. Interesting twist with Lizzy. I'm surprised he wasn't weirded out by Lindsey watching him while he played with his daughter. That felt a bit stalkerish given that she was so obvious that Lizzy approached her. I'm very curious as to where you will take this next!
Author's Response: well maybe he wasn't weirded out because he's beginning to trust her. Afterall he did tell her a little more about Katie. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Btw...I definitely want to slap her boss. $100...really??!! She needs to find another job asap!!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2016 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Man... I bet Lindsey felt awful! She better watch out for Lizzie. Wonder what game Michael is playing....getting interesting keep up the great story and update soon
Author's Response:
as if she needed more self doubt but then again that was Lizzys intent. thanks for reviewing and being my 100th reviewer
Date: Sep 01, 2016 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
First of Lizzy you allow your man to have sex with women. Of course he might fall for one. And is that even her man? Michael---I mean Valentino never confirmed that was his girl
Also he is soooo sweet, generous, and kind. He's almost like a dream. I bet he's going to be calling Lindsey probably those nights while she's with her family to check on her.
Author's Response: so true he never did say who she was to him but dont worry it will be revealed soon enough(well in the next 5-10 chapters)..lol thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 01, 2016 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ya its not so much "abused" rehab as its re establishing positive touch in people who have been extremely traumatized, from being tortured, sexually assaulted, domestic violence and other types of abuse trauma etc. for example a relative of mine used to be a massage therapist specializing in physical therapy and she worked on victims of Catholic priests if you catch my drift. Massage is just one way to reestablish postive touch again so the victim isn't triggered when someone tries to give them a hug, sex etc. not that it completely gets rid of the triggers but it does help so a victim can stand to be touched again. Its just an idea for you:) you're welcome:)
Author's Response:
yea , I know as I too was a massage therapist. it's a great idea and thank you. I will have to think of where I might be able to use it if I do.
Date: Sep 01, 2016 10:45 am Title: Chapter 8
I lovve this actually! Didnt like what he had to say about virginity, ya pal its not a thing its a mythological social concept made up by men to further shame/control women. Anyway this is a really cool concept. Loll hes so arrogant about his dick thats cute. Id be interested to know if he did "escort" services etc for like sexual assault vics, domestic violence vics etc like as a positive touch rehabilitation therapy. Thats actually be cool. its interesting he went out with a 75 year old woman to make her feel better about herself even for a short while. Ya i love this cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
That's a really cool idea about the abused rehab. I will look into it and who knows maybe it will be weaved in. Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2016 09:49 am Title: Chapter 8
I totally didn't get that Lizzy was calling her from his phone. Omg that raises the stalker level up even higher. Lizzy is probably at his house watching the kid, because Valentino wanted to spend time with Lindsey. What a psycho. I bet Katie isn't her daughter she just fantasizes that she is. Ugh.
Author's Response:
No worries you weren't the only one who didn't catch it.
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2016 08:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Man Lindsey just needs to straight up ask Valentino who this chick is and why she keeps threatening her. Tell him what's going on. Call her out on what she is saying and the phone call and let him deal with it. How does she even have Lindsey's cell phone number?
If she's getting phone calls Lindsey deserves an explanation.
I think Lizzy is either a nanny or an ex client he accidentally knocked up, who is a psycho. I don't see a married man being a famous gigolo especially not a man married to her possessive ass. Hopefully she is a nanny so he can fire her. If she is Katie's mom she is going to cause nothing but hell for these two.
Author's Response:
He didn't get her number she called her on his phone looking for him Her number was stored. You may not have caught it when she looked at the phone and recognized his name. It was subtle. Don't worry things will come to a head soon. Thanks for reviewing