Date: Sep 14, 2016 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
It was funny reading the dialogue btw Lindsey and her brother. I can understand his over-protectiveness though, when you look at the situation from his point of view, it does seem a little shady. But of course we know Valentino isnt shady... =D
I love their late-night calls, I would have loved to be a fly on the wall to see him getting scolded by his mother lol!
Another great chapter! Once again, cannot wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
of course Valentino isnt shady hes just mysterious and charming...lolthanks for reading. patience my friend :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2016 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
At least Mama Katie knows now and everything's out in the open. The way she found out wasn't ideal, but I'm sure Valentino feels better now that she's not in the dark anymore. I can't wait to get back to Lizzy and whoever she is to Valentino.........
Author's Response:
soon my friend. I promise you will know who Lizzy is soon. thanks for reading
Date: Sep 14, 2016 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I dont want to sound annoying or pushy but do you know when we can expect a new chapter? Sorry im just so excited =D
Author's Response:
so impatient...lol..I've had a busy week... but I just updated
Date: Sep 08, 2016 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 9
LOL loved Lindseys dream! I can't blame her for having that dream about Valentino, who wouldn't after being around him so much and getting all that attention he's giving her! I do wonder why he's doing so much? Does he feel as strongly for her as she does him? Or is he just wanting to be nice to her? But I knew that sex scene was a dream.Valentini wouldn't go into her moms home and have sex with her lol. Don't seem his style. Plus he would want to wine and dine her first before they got to the sex. And Lizza keeps getting in the way it seems....*Sighs* I can't wait to learn the truth and what's up with her?
Author's Response:
you will find out soon enough...patience is a virtue....thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2016 08:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Now, my question is: will he wait until he gets paid to have fun with Lindsey?
I'm wondering about his wife(?). First, she's obviously insecure and Lindsey has crossed whatever limits she had that kept her from being too jealous of his work. I'm just also wondering why Valentino is with her. He doesn't seem to speak of her, which suggests his level of passion for her is but a pebble compared to his boulder of love for his child. I don't have time to go back and check if he's ever said he's married, but I do wonder if she's the nanny and is territorial (i.e. a take on Grace), or the mother of his child and is blackmailing him to stay with her (i.e. will reveal his ID and work if he leaves her).
This story has me constantly torn between wanting to cringe (e.g. some of the sexual innuendos and awkward moments) and waiting with anticipation for something to happen/be revealed. It's a guilty pleasure lol. Good job!
Author's Response:
so many questions that I wont answer or it will kill the suspense(if thats what you call it) no he didnt say if he was married or not just all signs lead to that. that's all I'm saying...lol...no worries though all will be revealed soon. thanks for reading and I'm glad it can be your guilty pleasure.
Date: Sep 06, 2016 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
I really like the scope you write in your characters...look forward to the next update! Thanks for your work
Author's Response:
thank you. i try to give a different twist in my stories. thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Sep 06, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
She strongly wan to meet mister sixty nine Valentino. Maybe Lizzy will be a costumer dissatisfied because Valentino is no longer interested in him for this bothers him whit the excuse that it is his wife. I wonder if you really Lindsey and he will become more a real couple.
Author's Response:
yes she certainly does want to meet him. who wouldnt. thank you for translating. my italian is non existant. thanks for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2016 08:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Valentino owes Lindsey an explanation as to who this Lizzy woman is, I personally would not feel comfortable with all the attention he is giving her knowing he is married.
Author's Response:
I would agree but lindsey is certainly torn because she's caught up in him. She will reach her end soon. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 06, 2016 02:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Even Valentino says Lizzy is out of line so once again to me that's a sign of not being married, besides that IF they are Lizzy shouldn't be saying anything because she knew what kind of job he has, but still I don't think lizzy and Valentino are married
I hope for Lindsey her dream will be reality one day, including the kiss that would mean she's more than a client, which im sure she'll be at some point, it's obvious that if Valentino is married to that Lizzy woman it's not going to work out
Hope for Lindsey she had a great time with her family
Author's Response:
i guess we will have to wait for the truth...soon my friend thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 06, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Lindsey needs to get laid soon :3 by not anyone but the one and only Valentino :)).
Valentino was so sweet. That cannot be an act.
Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: so true..there's only one man that can take carfe of her business...Bobby wont do thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hot
Author's Response: thanks
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
So nice of Valentino to text and call to see if she made it there ok. Clingy isn't the right word, but he certainly has a hard time forgetting about her too. Maybe she will tell him about her dream next time she drinks ;)
Author's Response: attentive maybe? not clingy for sure lol telling him when she drinks..good one. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 05, 2016 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Somehow I knew this was a dream.. Poor Lindsey who can't seem to concentrate on anything other than Valentinos greatness, and i dont blame her! Loved their phone conversation. Valentino seems to truly care about her. Maybe he should take her out on a real date without her having to pay! Dreams do come true...
Another great chapter! Cant wait for their reunion
Author's Response: who can blame her right? it will be getting interesting soon for sure. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 05, 2016 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
Man...too bad Lindsey was just dreaming! Poor Mom didn't know what was happening. Lindsey better save some money fast so she can finally get her date. Great chapter
Author's Response:
hopefully mom wont ask any further questions. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 05, 2016 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Even I knew that was a dream Lmaoo! It was too could to be true! Poor Lindsey! Lmao
Author's Response: true. but poor lindsey has it bad. thanks for reviewing