[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2016 03:09 am Title: Chapter 6
glad Valentino got his own back on his friend after doing that to him, i did laugh too, made me giggle in fact to his whole retelling of the incident to Lindsey, i'm glad he feels so comfortable with her telling her all this stuff, not alot of guys would share their bad experiences like that, lol great, so well written
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2016 03:04 am Title: Chapter 5
wow can't believe she just blurted that out, mind you courage brought on by alcohol not always best thing, lol much to her mortification, lol why do i feel i'm falling for him as much as lindsay lol thanks for such an awesome story so far!
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2016 03:01 am Title: Chapter 4
wow is it hot in here or what? lol loving this!
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2016 02:59 am Title: Chapter 3
I really love your story and can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lindsey you should've taken the money...I like Courtney way more than the brother already. Yay for bad influences! I suppose Valentino is going to explain who Lizzy is. He said "our daughter" so I don't think she is just the nanny now. I also think Lindsey will keep her word on quitting her job, but am excited to see what new job she gets. Maybe she can be a nanny to Valentino's girl while she's in job limbo (Lizzy would love that), or his assistant, or his very personal assistant WHO KNOWS ;)
Author's Response: gotta keep you guessing who Lizzy is..lol thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Valentino has a story to tell. I hope he isn't married to that girl!! I can't wait till she has enough money. Bluebird should have taken her sisters $$$$. I wonder if she will really quit her job...time will tell
Author's Response: he certainly does. time will tell for sure. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 25, 2016 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
Book the date! Book the date! Lol I can't wait..! x
Author's Response: do you think she should book the date? lol thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is so mysterious? Please make sure to unravel the mystery of Lizzy and his relationship soon. It is so sad to think that he has to stick together with her
Author's Response: no worries..i will in about 2-3 chapters thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
great chapter, can't wait to read more
Date: Sep 25, 2016 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Cockblocker Lizzy just doing what she always does. Lindsey's sister is so sweet! And Valentino never said he was in a relationship with Lizzy. But I can understand why Lindsey feels crushed. But she's still going to go on a date with him. I know she is.
Author's Response: cockblocker..lol thats funny...you will have to wait and see. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great so far, i was intrigued with the first chapter, looks like Valentino is casting his spell over the readers too, lol!
Date: Sep 25, 2016 10:08 am Title: Chapter 11
Poor Lindsey, every time she thinks that perhaps Valentino likes her and perhaps be something between them
The elephant in the room returns!......Lizzy!
Now she's certain that he is a married man!
Will she still want to go on that date that she is $150 away from achieving? Hmmmm that's the million dollar question?
Another great update Tink!
Author's Response:
lol the elephant in the room. that's about right. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 25, 2016 08:46 am Title: Chapter 11
Ooooo why does he feel he has to "explain" himself to Lindsey thought his personal life was off limits. Getting a strong hint of jane eyre here with the mad wife in the attic type feel. Update asap!
Author's Response: he had to explain because he wanted to take her out for a cup of coffee and had to cancel it. plus its obvious they have feeling for each other. thanks for reviewing
Date: Sep 25, 2016 06:56 am Title: Chapter 11
That damn Lizzy ALWAYS makes it a point to ruin their time together, he better explain the situation to Lindsey soon because she's not having it, understandably. But just the fact that he said "you knew what you were getting into when you started this" proves that this is not a marriage, or not a real one at least.
I'm glad to see her sister seems really interested and accepting towards Valentino, I hope the money gets Lindsey to her goal VERY soon lol.
I feel the next chapter shall be a very sexy and interesting one, considering the photoshoot and the talk that will follow. Cannot wait!! =D
Thank you for writing this story!!
Author's Response: thanks. yes the photoshoot certainly will be interesting. wait til you see what I've choosen... thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2016 05:29 am Title: Chapter 11
Yeah no way Lizzy is his wife. More like a former client he impregnated by accident and now she's obsessed with him. I bet they were never together. She probably poked holes in the condom too. My guess is she's calling him threatening to kill herself or something equally cray cray which is why he's dropping everything to run off to deal with her. I bet he worries for the safety of his daughter. If so he needs to see a lawyer and get custody but what judge would grant custody to a gigolo over the child's mother? Whatever the situation is with Lizzy it seems a mess.
Valentino likes Lindsey. It's obvious he's sweet on her. He wouldn't have picked her up himself otherwise or be confiding in her so much. They keep getting closer. I think it would possibly hurt his feelings if she tried to pay for a date with him. Even if he doesn't sleep with her on the date the insinuation is that she is paying him for sex. It would be a bit weird at this point and he may even feel insulted. They have gotten too personal imo for her to consider that anymore.
I feel kind of bad for Valentino. He truly is a sweet guy. He puts on a good front but how happy can have really be with his liifestyle? I'm also pretty put off by his sisters. I understand why they would keep it secret from the mother but how could they keep accepting his money after finding out? I sure as hell wouldn't if it were my brother, unless he was much older and I was a child who had no choice. Maybe this gives Janet a pass but isn't LaToya older than him?
Author's Response: that's an interesting twist her threatening to hurt herself. hmmm thanks for reviewing