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Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

Lizzy, seems a little overbearing!  She wants her cake and to best it too!  It's okay for her to have someone but not Michael!  Maybe she's just jealous that mike fell in love with someone that isn't her!   

 

I would love love to see you continue with this story! But you have to follow your heart!  

Looking forward to your new story!



Author's Response:

yea, I debated making Lizzy be ok with everything but where is the fun in that right?  she's a piece of jeolous work.  thanks for sticking with me.

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 20

Wow Lizzy is still bitchy! I guess Michael will have to kick her out soon so that Lindsy can take that space. I'm really curious as to what Levi holds in that folder!!

It really saddens me that you might end this story. Of course its your choice, but I would really love for you to continue. I've been doing my duty of reviewing all your chapters lol. Maybe other readers have become lazy and not responding? 



Author's Response:

And I greatly appreciate you doing your part.  lazy people dont realize how much work and effort goes into writing.  that's why its frustrating.  Again I so appreciate your reviews.  the jury is still out.  I just might not write as often.

Reviewer: marje143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 20

Girl  please continue write  the story  it really  good  you write the best stoty alot of people read your  story but just  don't like to write review  so keep it coming . there's one more thing what about studio 54

 

 



Author's Response:

54 is down on the list.  I've been wanting to write my next one for about a year now so I'm really looking forward to writing it.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 20

Don't give up yet, love where it is going  and can't wait to see how it continues 



Author's Response:

we shall see

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Those erogenous zones...ahhh! Valentino is too much. Great chapter once again!

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2016 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 19

Michael cannot change his past. I just hope one day Lindsey is no more affected by that.

Thank you for the new chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 19

Love the introduction of Levi's life into the story. I bet he will be a detonant for disclose secrets unkown. Thanks!, once again

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter! loved the embarrassing and funny parts between the three of them.

I can understand the way Lindsey feels, but at the same time Michael keeps repeating how special she is to him. Of course Michael having sex with other women probably resembles the way he does it with Lindsey, but with Lindsey there are actual feelings of love, which makes it completely different for him, and she needs to understand that nuance (if it makes any sense lol). At the end of the day, she should be thankful he was a gigolo, or else she would have never met him!! She needs to reassure herself of the relationship. If not, I fear that when Michael meets her family, they will tear them apart. =( 

Can't wait for next chapter! I just friggin LOOVE the way you portray Michael in this story. 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 19

Levi instead of remembering Michael his old life as a gigolo and be jealous because he's  engaged to Lindsey. Even he can find a girlfriend

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 06:34 am Title: Chapter 19

Mike and Levi have some entertaining stories to tell if Lindsey keeps an open mind. And hey it sounds like Michael didn't enjoy the threeaome as Levi said he didn't last. Lol. 

Lyndsey kind of annoyed me here. What does she expect happens when you are a gigolo? I think Levi's story touched a nerve because it was a bit of a reality check that Michaels old "job" did not just involve helping women build their self esteem. She has been deluding herself of the reality. Of course Michael made it sound like it was all romance during their interviews because he has to justify it to himself somehow plus he's probably ashamed to tell her the worst parts. He has slept with hundreds of women and probably some men, there is no erasing that fact. She is going to have to get over her feelings and accept it or she will make him feel bad about himself. He already has enough shame he shouldnt feel it with her, and he should be able to tell her EVERYTHING. I get that it's an adjustment for her but not only did she go into the relationship with full knowledge of his background, it's all in the past. She is acting like he's doing it now. 

Because she loves him so much, she'll get over it. She isn't being a good partner if she doesn't. Michael is trying so hard to better himself for her sake, she had better see that. 

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 04:24 am Title: Chapter 19

I think with Levi apologizing they will become good friends and that Lindsey will try to fix him up with someone she knows!!! Great chapter

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2016 01:31 am Title: Chapter 19

I'm sure one day she'll be no longer hurt by his past and like he said it's the past and he truly loves her 

 

Hopefully one day Lindsey and Levi could be friends too 

 


Can't wait to see what happens next  

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2016 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 19

Sweet chapter!  Poor Mike and Lindsey seems their friends always catch them in compromising positions!   

Nice to see how close Mike and Levi are!  I think that Lindsey will accept both of the, in the future as she is totally in Love with Mike and he her!

There maybe some problems meeting her family in the future..but hopefully they will see how much he loves her and overlook his past!

 

Looking forward to seeing what will happen!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2016 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

Girl! I hope he says yes! Something tells me that he will be a bit hesitant at first but then he will give in. I will be on the edge of my seat, sipping my tea! Later girl! 🍵

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 07:46 am Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter, very layed-back so that Lindsey and Michael can connect even more. Loved Katie's reaction to Windsey, they were all super cute together. Michael seems like an awesome father, which adds to his charm for sure. 

I am hoping Lizzy gives Lindsey a break.. but then again, where's the fun in that? lol

Cant wait for next chapter, love this story to pieces!

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