Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2016 02:15 am Title: Chapter 21

If it comes to custody fight Lizzy changes arevt that big tho since she let her child almost die and like Michael said its not the first time something happened under her watch, even katherine says Lizzy is too busy with other things than her daughter and if she's leaving for a few months too, what kind of mother does that?  Michael is a better parent for katie and so what if she calls Lindsey mommy one day? Did Lizzy really thought Michael would not fall inlove and have a girl one day? But she's allowed to date?  Not fair either, I'm with katherine hoping Lizzy will be out of the picture one day 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

it certainly is an interesting mess for all of them.  cool heads hopefully will prevail and they will deal with it like adults.   thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 21

Liked that chapter. If I may suggest something for your next chapters I would probably suggest that you never let Lizzy return from her business trip. This way, they would have to fight over custody and the problems will be gone in an instant.

Author's Response:

now wheres the fun in that?...lol  no worries though it will all work out.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 20

always amazing Tinker, just love it x

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2016 02:08 am Title: Chapter 20

Readers and reviews will come and go honey, unfortunately not everybody checks in to the site every day to see if there's an update. crap, I know, but people lose interest sometimes. Your story is brilliant and you should continue - just because some have drifted away doesn't make it any less of a brilliant piece of work. It's their loss, not yours. Write for you, not them. That's what I do :)

 

Amazing bond between Michael and his wee one, although I kinda thought Lizzy might get her claws out. She's being cautious seeing her child interacting with another female, and I guess that's pretty natural. My guess is that she's not jealous of Michael's relationship at all, she's being protective. I know I would be xx

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

Hate to see this end. Would like to see where you go with the story and see how Lizzy and Bluebird do!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 07:54 am Title: Chapter 20

Hmmmm I wonder what Levi and Michael are hiding with those papers?

I can totally understand Lizzy's worries given Lindsey's career as a journalist, but her attitude stinks. It wouldn't kill her to be nicer would it? There is a nice way to state her concerns and still give Lindsey a warning without being a complete witch. She's acting like Lindsey has already done something wrong and she hasn't. It's almost like she is sour that Michael found someone and is happy, surely she didn't think their unusual arrangement would last forever she doesn't strike me as stupid. And if she is choked that he fell in love with someone other than her, she needs to get over it for her daughter's sake. 

Lizzy and Michael should not be living in the same house that much is obvious. They can't get along and arguing is not good for Katie. 

Author's Response:

lol..you picked up on the papers...It was a subtle mention I didnt think anyone would catch.  I debated making Lizzy all rosey but what fun is in that.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: The man with no name Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 20

Nooooooooooooo...it's too short for me :(, I want to read more so badly :'(.

If Lizzy didn't have a boyfriend, I would think that she was jealous. Maybe she has this withheld feeling towards Michael? Or maybe she just needs time to warm up? Anyway, only time can tell ;).

As a fan of yours, I always make sure to give my reviews in stories I read from you, because I know you have to take your time and enthusiasm and I want you to know my appreciation :). But you know, people can get lazy sometimes (or most of time :))). Or maybe they are busy so that they can't read the new chapter immediately when it's just came out and review right away. Because it is for me these days, I've only read and reviewed the new chapter maybe days after it had been updated. So I just want you to know that:).

I know it has been difficult for you with this story since you did not intend to continue it. Of course to me, I would love to read more because there are so many things I want to know. But it's really up to you. If you don't have much passion to continue and you have other idea or projects to make, it's really ok to put a stop. I promise I won't be mad at you :)).

Anyway, thank you for the new chapter :).

Author's Response:

And I greatly appreciate that you leave a review.  its nice to feel appreciated because it motiviates me more than you can know.  thanks for your loyalty.  I will probably keep it going just might not update as quickly but know i will not just stop without wrapping it up.