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Reviewer: mdc20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 01:26 am Title: Stripped Dignity

wow, i am so glad the author , " honey to the bee" finally came back with the update, or maybe I was just late on the notification. lol!!.I  love this chapter because it is based on the reality of how true sacrifice and pride can make a relationship even stronger when you least expect it. amen



Author's Response:

lol it was kind of a late update. Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 04, 2016 08:58 pm Title: Stripped Dignity

Wow you see , Shit obviously went to fucking far , and now when Marcus is dying on the street he sees his point??? Nina is going to freak out , how is she going to explain this to Maddox? I swear no one things of what could happen after they do something , life wouldn't be better for anyone if he dies especially Michael when nina finds out he's responsible for all this bullshit , why listen to her crazy ass brother smh , now things went TOO far and the worse is too come 



Author's Response:

Exactly, it had to get to this point before Michael realized Nina's point with Marcus. She is going to flip. We'll see if she has to explain anything to Maddox... Michael didn't realize just how lethal James could get on alcohol because he's never seen that violent side of him before - now he knows better.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2016 08:16 pm Title: Mission Impossible

James James James. He's not only self-destructive, but his PFC is so poorly wired that he's even destructive towards the relationship between his sister and Michael. SMH. That man.

 

I hope MJ gets out of that situation rather than escalating it. 



Author's Response:

James is going through some things and yeah... he's dragging everyone around him down with him. Only he actually thinks he's helping. Michael's torn between doing what he knows is right and endulging in his little fantasy of watching Marcus getting his ass beat. Let's hope he does the right thing. 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 02:47 pm Title: Mission Impossible

Well...at least they tried to tall about Marcus in a calm manner...Nina and Michael, I'm speaking of.

Lord, James...he may not be physically cheating but it damn sure sounds like he's emotionally cheating. Haley has every right to be suspicious. I mean, has he tried to involve her in anything to do with this woman, who's supposedly his "friend"? Not to mention, why is there no one else that can help her too...only him? I smell BS.

Now, his drunk butt has gotten him and Michael into some ish,though Michael should have put on his grown man pants and gave James a firm "NO." Instead, he goes along with it and when they show up, Marucs brought 3 other dudes? To what, jump him? Nina is wishful thinking if she believes there will be peace between the two, because his actions again, just proved that he doesn't want peace with MJ.

Lord, I bet Nina and Mrs. Chambers, along with Hailey will give their respective husbands and son a piece of their minds when this "meeting" hits the fan!

More ☕ please!

Thanks 😆👏🙋

Author's Response:

Right! Michael's finally done being hard headed about it and is ready to approach him... and then here comes James... and right his situation is all sorts of shady whether he's actually cheating physically or not. 

Michael should have stood his ground and said no, but there's a little piece of him inside just dying to watch Marcus get his ass beat. Marcus already knew Michael wasn't going to come out there alone so he figured he wouldn't either. 

We'll see if these two make peace or war! 

And yeah James and Michael both are in for it lol because this behavior was childish and stupid. 

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 07:49 am Title: Mission Impossible

Finalmente per Michael arriva l'atteso confronto con Marcus potrà rinfacciare tutto il male che ha fatto a lui e a Maddox

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 07:34 am Title: Mission Impossible

I see trouble on the horizon involving James or Marcus  getting shot or something



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Someone will be in the hospital

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2016 04:51 am Title: Mission Impossible

James is a BAD influence. God Michael where is your spine my guy?!?!? He let that dude talk him into drinking tho I'm glad he did refuse the alcohol the second time. Good on that. BUT shit is about to hit the fan in a major ass way and I'm already on the edge of my seat. Nina is going to spaz the hell out when she finds out that not only did he drink but he let James talk him into that Tom foolery. As much as I want Michael to personally beat Marcus to dust I'm just worried shit won't be repairable if things go south. 

James personally gets 10 UGHs for everything in this chapter. I'm glad he's not cheating physically but he seems to be emotionally. 

GURL!!! Imma need more SOON!!! <333



Author's Response:

If Michael REALLY wanted to say no he would have said no, that little part of him that really just wants Marcus to get his ass handed to him allowed him to let himself get dragged into this. James is out of control and he's bringing everyone else down. He needs to deal with his own issues instsead of drinking. His only real motive for this spur of the moment was to fight because he feels like it will let off some steam to beat someone's ass. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2016 10:35 pm Title: Mission Impossible

They just made it 10 times worse omg , Nina is going to scream her head off at the both of them like wtf why do this smh , oh lord I'm praying for them 



Author's Response:

they both are going to need some prayers.. LOL

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2016 02:08 pm Title: Halloween

This is just not healthy :(

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 03:39 pm Title: Halloween

Ooh...here these two go again with their BS. The two of them love the drama and the making up with sex. It's a pattern between the two. Fight first, and have make up sex later. Whie continuing to ignore the big elephants in the room. Nina's poor mom is even getting tired of the both of them.

Lawd, I knew James was cheating; if not physically, defiantly EMOTIONALLY. Now, Nina's mom has to put up with TWO women and men running to her. Damn. I can also understand why she wouldn't say anything negative about her son to Hailey, but in private, she needs to tell her son he ain't shit for what he's doing, because what goes around, comes around!

Hailey messed up too, by allowing James to be her only source of income. Fuck that! This is why I would never recommend a woman doing this, because if the man decides to leave, you're stuck with no money and having no work skills or resumes to pull.

Umm...Michael has lost his damn mind talking about "good riddance." So, if she takes him up on it, he'll be hurt.

EVERYBODY on the out a right now. 😯

Hideki? No comment.
Marcus? No comment.

Thanks! 🙋💯👍

Author's Response:

It's aboout to explode just wait lol.

Nina thinks James is cheating, but is he really? We don't know yet. He is in a downward spiral though and lets just hope he doesn't drag Michael down in it with him. And right! You'll never catch me depending on a man 100% because I don't care how perfect he is at first you NEVER know what people are capable of or what might happen to them in general.

Neither Hideki nor Marcus are done yet lol.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 08:00 am Title: Halloween

These two, just when things improve they go to shit again. Michael made it 1000x worse by not communicating for weeks, but he does have a valid point about Nina's behavior. Nina can be such a witch to him sometimes. Maleficent is a fitting costume. They both need to apologize, as usual. 

If James is cheating with Brianne he deserves a smack upside the head and in the nuts. His mom should read him the riot act. If that were my son or brother I would  flip out. And I don't care how long you've been friends, it doesn't excuse being a homewrecker so Brianne is trash as far as I'm concerned. Hayley had better leave he doesn't deserve her.



Author's Response:

Michael did make it worse by not communicating and then just rushing in like 'HAPPY HALLOWEEN EVERYTHING IS PERFECT' when he knows that fake attitude pisses Nina off even more. Nina can definitely be a witch, but he knows what brings the witchiness out of her and he does it time and time again.

James... is he cheating? We'll see soon enough.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 06:59 am Title: Prologue

Nina has become a piece of work.  He's no said but she is over the top.  Maybe he should start hanging out with a few skanks and see how she feels   Great update 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 05:47 am Title: Halloween

Gawd. I Can Not. I don't want to give up on these two but how are they going to fix this? It's going to require an entire personality transplant for Nina. On the other hand Michael I can see changing. He's gotten his bad issues out of the way and he's being healthy and taking care of himself. I was so happy that things had soften with Nina and Michael was being more open but here we are yet again. UGH!!!!!

FIX IT JESUS!!!!!! 

More SOON!!! <333



Author's Response:

Poor Nina lol a whole personality transplant?! Michael has been doing a lot better about taking care of himself and staying away from his bad habits, but he still pushes her buttons and lacks the ability to effectively communicate in a relationship. Like as soon as the word Marcus comes out of her mouth, his ears are deaf to everything.

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2016 02:26 am Title: Halloween

Una bella festa di Halloween da passare con Maddox è stata rovinata da Nina gli ha rinfacciato il fatto di essere stata spiata da Hideki. Quando è lei aveva permesso a Marcus di accusarlo falsamente lui di aver abusato sessualmente di Maddox quindi deve tacere

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2016 04:00 pm Title: Picking Sides

They make my ass itch!!!! Got damn it they need to get their shit together in a real damn way. Any more and them being tighter is going to be impossible. Gawd!!!!!!! It's like they're both children throwing tantrums. I have to Tash tho Michael is right. Nina has never been on his side. If Marcus wasn't such a POS things would have been clear. This just doesn't fall on Michael. No way. This chapter has a rating of 100 UGHS!!!!

More soon cause I can't deal!!! <333

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