Date: Jul 27, 2015 01:27 pm Title: Retreat...
Michael is a complete dummy for forgiving nye. I don't trust that bitch as far as I could throw her and neither should he!
The way he thinks about Pen is HILARIOUS!!! Lmao him in the shower beatin off to that song - DEAD!!!
Author's Response:
I don't know why that song just popped into my head while I was writing that part. Lmaoooo. But can you picture the scenario? I have... I have.
Lmaooo. The things this man puts in my head I tell ya. Nye is living that truce life but he does love her. She might just be drifting on a memory soon. Lol. <333
Date: Jul 26, 2015 10:31 pm Title: Retreat...
Nye aka Bye is up to no good. Period. It's just so convenient that she couldn't come. Girl BYE. And yasssssss at Pen finally getting some penis, yes gawd. Much needed lmao. But of course, that just awakens you to wanting more and sense she's clearly attracted to Capt Asshole aka Michael narrow ass, something is bound to pop off. His ass is fiending hard too. I can't wait to see what happens on this trip chile. And I DIED at the Terence Trent D'arby shade! I never got Michael from him as much as I did a fake ass Prince.. That's who I think he really wanted to be. But Sign Your Name is my SHIT! Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Lmaooo. Terrence Trent and his Whack ass. He tried to come for Michael about two years ago saying Michael was jealous of him and made the label not advance his career like they should have. so basically he flopped because Michael was intimidated by his talent. Boi please. He needs to take a stadium worth of seats all at once.
Pen did get some penis and trust. This trip is about to be more than anyone bargained for. <333
Date: Jul 26, 2015 07:06 pm Title: Retreat...
Yaassss bitch!!!! Pen got some Fenty ding-a-dong-a-long.
Now, I'm glad Mike considered this trio cause Fenty and Pen can get much closer but hell, the way Mike be having these lil naughty thoughts about Pen, hell fate is bound to happen.
Now as for forgiving Nye, hmmm., in a way yes because I guess she apologized and the people didn't go through with it. No, because she trying to put their personal life for the world to see and not only that, she's giving off vibes as if all she cares about is money, being known as Mike's fi-whore-ce and all that. Like, I don't think she really loves him. I see dolla signs in her head. All that matters to her is what michael can do for Her and give her.
Now, I'ma give her the benefit of the doubt.....
For now.... up until I know for sure. I ain't gone say she's doing more than she was suppose to and told Mike. But I'm gonna give her a chance. It's a 50/50 chance she is or not.
Nye, don't be doing shit you ain't got no bizness bitch!!!
Author's Response:
Yes girl. Pen got some relief between the sheets. Lmao. Fate is bound to happen and it will hit them both like a ton of bricks. BAM!! It is a 50/50 chance of dirt being done by Nye. We'll see in the future. <333
Date: Jul 26, 2015 05:04 pm Title: Retreat...
First of all, I hate you for reminding me that I never went paint balling and I don't see it happening soon. I would love to go with Michael though lmaooo I bet he's a beast! But it's cool, I got Splatoon so I get some color on some folks in the gaming world. Omg I wanna go soooooo bad lol It looks like so much fun.
They're about to make some memories for sure. Diana ain't went to do shit but fuck ol dude. Clients, my ass.
But Pen finally got some, so good for her. You get your rainbow girl. No shame in that at all. Let him beat the guts all he wants to. You aint' seen gut beatin like the one waiting for you though. Oh, what a day that's gonna be.
Michael forgave her because he's a good dude. He really didn't have to but he did. Now, we all know what she's doing and just uuugh
Great update, mama! I'm so ready for what's about to go down
Author's Response:
I've never been on an official course but a group of friends and I had war games in Prospect Park in Brooklyn!! So fun!!!
Lmaooo. I think your residual hate for Diana from the last story came out in this review. Nye is the new Diana. Lmao. She went to "take care of clients".
Good for Pen. My girl was getting a little hard up but Fent cleared all the cobwebs. The best he could anyway. Lmaoooooo.
Michaelnis a good dude and at the end of the day he's trying not to let obstacles manifest in their reality. He might be thinking of bending Pen over one good time but it hasn't happened...
Yet!! Lol
<333
Date: Jul 18, 2015 12:13 am Title: Request De-Nyed...
Nye is such a wack ass bitch. Michael needs to tell that bitch to Beat It. All pun intended. She's thirsty for fame and clearly overestimated her effect and persuasive skills cuz Michael ain't doing that bs ass reality TV. I'm glad he's sticking to his guns. That shit would cheapen him and his brand and she musta lost her rabbit ass mind thinking it would help him in any way. Not only does he not need the help, but bitch BYE. All she thinks about is herself and the come up. Bye Nye. Anyway, Fenty has arrived! Maybe now Pen can get some dick. Lmao. She definitely needs it and why not with somebody she already knows? I don't see nothing wrong with that.
Author's Response:
Nye is out for herself and getting Michael to be on her show will give her a big boost. Michael is peeping game and be dining to realize they may be veering off in different directions. Pen is under his skin now so it only a matter of time. <333
Date: Jul 17, 2015 09:29 pm Title: Request De-Nyed...
I can't take Nye... I just can't. I like how Michael is starting to notice things are fading with her. Cause she needs to go!
and LMAO!!! his ass is still bad with names, that makes him seem like an even bigger asshole - I love it.
And ooooo!! So Pen's gonna go on a date with Fenty!! I wonder just how deep this is gonna get under Michael's skin when he finds out. I'm surprised he didnt' have something smart to say when she flipped him the bird. It probably turned him on so bad he had to walk away to keep a hold of his own sanity LOL!!!
MORE SOON!!!! Even though I dont' have no business rushin' you on your chapters because I've been lacking on my own stories. lol
Author's Response:
More and more Michael is starting to feel disconnected because he's not sure they're headed in the same direction anymore. We will see just how much this gets to Michael. You know he's going to show out. Lol. They're under each other's skin already and this date is going to bring it up a few notches.
I can't wait for More Michael and Chiv!!! <333
Date: Jul 17, 2015 03:57 pm Title: Request De-Nyed...
ughhhhhhh i really do NOT like Nye lol I understand she's had a hard past but her spoiledness just upsets me lol I don't have anything against her yet though. shes just full blown annoying.
Michael and Pen got some great grooves they creating mhm. I'm enjoying this!!
Author's Response:
Nye is super annoying and I'm sure you'll find something to not like soon enough. Lol. Michael and Pen's grooves will get interesting pretty soon. <333
Date: Jul 16, 2015 08:08 pm Title: Request De-Nyed...
There are alot of words I can describe Nye as of right now but I ain't gonna name them cause you can guess what they are. *wink, wink*. Anyway, Nye is all about being seen in public, getting attention, fame and all this other carp you can name. It's like the shit coming from Michael's mouth don't mean anything all she seems to spit out is the fact it would benefit her life oh, and his too. Like, does he really need that when he's already go??? Oh, and I strongly believe she is up to something more than making false promises to her producer. Something is up with that girl. It'll be a matter of time when it comes to light. I'll be patient and wait for it. :)
Now I see that Fenty is back. (Whoo whoo whoo : Martin's voice)
So he and the beautiful Pen is going on a date. Hmmm. Her night might Will night to rememberalright, especially if they used to be friends with benefits ain't no telling what might go down.
I do kinda think Michael is gonna question her relationship and how she knows Fenty and probably get slightly jealous. Anything is possible of he be having dirty thoughts about the girl.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :):):)
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo at "wooo wooo woo". I love me some Martin!!! You know Michael's going to be jealous. Lmao. We'll see how he reacts when he finds out about the date. As for Nye she's only thinking of her view in the public eye. She's not thinking of how it all is affecting Michael. We'll see what she's up to soon <333
Date: Jul 16, 2015 06:08 pm Title: Request De-Nyed...
Michael and I are gonna have fun with Chad's name. He and I are both so ready. I texted him and he said yes. We're ready for this shit lmaoo But Nye know damn well she should have asked first. You just can't promise someone to something without asking them. That's not how life goes. It doesn't matter if he's your fiance or not. You still need to ask him first. You just can't be inconsiderate like that.
Just no.
And yeah, we all know she's doing some shit with this Chad bastard. They both can suck it.
Now, I do want Michael to get mad at me like that. You know I'd be like
Teach me a lesson, daddy. Gaaaaaawd
Okay, but Pen and Fenty?
Loved it, doll! Can't wait to see what happens next. Yes, I had to use Psych gifs just for this one lmaoo
I love you!
Author's Response:
Lmaooooooooooo that last gif got tears in my eyes. Yup Nye should have asked first but now she has to dig herself out of that hole on her own. We are going to have lots of fun with names. Lmaoooooo. If you ain't in the crew your name is up for grabs in Michael's world.
As for Pen and Fen. Mama's need love too ya know!!!
love you much!!!<333
Date: Jul 10, 2015 03:12 am Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
I read all the chapters, & I love it thus far. Michael & Pen are like kids going back & forth with eachother. I honestly think Nye is up to some dumb shit & Michael's gonna get his feelings hurt. Diana is real cool. I like her. Pen definately needs to get some, not from any of the other guys at the shop tho. Atleast take the edge off until Michael comes along. Lol.
Anyways, I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work doll. 💟
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story my dear!! Pen and Michael's rivalry will be epic. But it won't be for long. Nye is being basic as hell. Pen will get some and it won't be from anyone she works with. That's coming up. Let's see how jealous Michael gets. Lol. <333
Date: Jul 02, 2015 11:25 am Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
Lmaooo she's still drinking ass drank. I am dead!
I had to come down and say that first lmaoo I keep reading it over and over.
But I'm dying at the jealousy. I always say you can't be jealous if you know what you got and the got is yours ya know. That's why she's jealous now. Ol booty drankin ass
"as if i need to know what you have for lunch" I love these two so much lmao
Diana is my girl though. I'm forever telling folks "you think i care about your hydration levels right now?" Oh, Diana. I'm loving you so much.
And, ooooh, Diana was so right about Nye. Can I fight her now? Please, let me do this. I know she out there doin what she want. let me fight her!
I loved this update and I can't wait for more. Sorry I took so long. You already know why. But I love you!
Author's Response:
It's all good bb. I know ...I know.
Diana is one of my favs this time around.
Nye drinkibg all kinds of yukiness. Lmaoooo. Your scenario is coming up tho. So stay tuned. You can fight her soon. Her ways will be seeping in before you know it.
<333
Date: Jun 29, 2015 11:10 am Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
Lord I just read this story and gotta say I love it!
Why in the hell is Michael wasting his time with this trifling bitch Nye though? Fuck she is not a nice person, is clingy annoying and materialistic and is obviously cheating on him. Michael isn't stupid and could get lots of women so like wtf?
Pen or no pen, he needs to dump that Ho. Can't say I feel ANY sympathy for her getting left at the altar.
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story!!! Glad you love it so far. It's going to be one hell of a ride I can promise you that.
You're right. Michael isn't stupid and things have gone down in the past. We will have to see what it is she's up to this time around tho.<333
Date: Jun 29, 2015 10:05 am Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
Lemme find out Nye being a heaux with her producer. A mess. I can just tell Michael is playing himself with that bitch. She's insecure because A: Pen is a bad bitch, way more so than her garbage pussy ass, and B: because she's guilty of doing bullshit her damn self. That's how it always is. Well she might as well get ready, cuz Pen has Michael's attention, and I guarantee once she does bless him with some of her good good, she gon put his ass straight to sleep! And they are a mess with these nicknames. But I like that Pen gives his ass a hard time. Good, somebody needs to.
Author's Response:
Lol we'll see what Nye is up to. It may or may not be what you think it is. Pen has Michael's whole brain right now. Lmao. Pen ain't got time for him and his mess. She's going to have her fun. <333
Date: Jun 28, 2015 10:27 pm Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
Good LAWD Michael's imagination is WILD!!! LOL Omg I laughed so much at this chapter! He is too much for me right now! Too much! lol But just enough... Ooo I have such a love/hate with this Michael.
Nye is so ANNOYING!!! Sip on your fart lattes, ho! That's all I have to say.
Pen is so hilarious. I love this couple so much I can't wait to see what it's gonna be like when they finally hook up. Keep the chapters coming girl! <3
Author's Response:
Michael's damn mind is a maze of nasty!!! Lmaoooo!!! So much more to come on that front. This Michael is for you what your Michael in Roommate is for me. Love him but can't stand his ass. Lol. To to much.
DEAD DEAD DEAD @ "fart lattes"
soon and very soon we will witness the collision of crotches. Lol <333
Date: Jun 28, 2015 09:17 pm Title: Hello BabyHairs...Meet Hardcore...
So Mike and his lil Nast imaginations of Pen, eh??? He can't deny it. He wants her lowkey.
And Nye was dropping the poon and shit lately like babies. Girl, is you really that insecure??? You're the one with the sexy ass dude by the name of Michael. Hell, even got a damn engagement rock sitting on your finger So why all of sudden you're clingy?? There's no need to be that way when you already got what others don't. Take pride in that.
"I wrote a song about it…Like to hear it?…Here we go…"
I died when I read that causei t's from Calhoun Tubbs on In Living Color. I sing it all the damn time. Lmbo!!!!
Now....Pen and Mike are slowly getting on the good side, especially with their new pet names for each other now. wink, wink*
Okay Nye??? Wtaf you done did now??? Why the guilty face??? Huh???
More soon :)
Author's Response:
Lmaooooo. I love In Living Color and I was actually singing that when I wrote it!!!
You're so right. All of a sudden she wanna know what's going on and throwing the cooch left and right. You know there's something going on there. What it is we'll see soon!! <333