Date: Aug 03, 2015 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1, Part 1
I'm already in love with the story!! You writing is incredible!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm writing a new chapter, hopefully I'll finish it this weekend! b25;
Date: Aug 02, 2015 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 2, Part 3
Loooovvve this!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie! :)
Date: Aug 02, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 2, Part 3
- wow that's was crazy this Carlos guy is no joke and it was so sweet how her tears saved him
Author's Response:
Yeah, Carlos is a nut tbh. I was hoping the tears part didn't sound corny but I'm glad you liked it! 😊
Date: Aug 01, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1, Part 1
Wow. Your writing is really detailed and awesome:) i wish i could write like this. I have to give you a compliment, I LOVE how you depict Michael, he's not perfect, arrogant, stubborn, spoiled, emotionally immature brat who can't take no for an answer. I feel like some of his fans forget that he is in fact not perfect, he's just human well ok in this story it doesn't sound like he is but you get my point. He's capable of making mistakes etc. seriously Brava to u:)
Author's Response:
I know this response is late (sorry lol) but seriously, thank you for your critique! I try to write Mike as I think he would be in real life. It irks me when other writers paint him in an unrealistic way, and I can never get hooked onto a story becasue he is written out of character. But yeah, I want to show that Mike was imperfect and human, and most importantly, realistic. :)
Date: Aug 01, 2015 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2, Part 1-The Howl
- I'm hooked 100% 300 years old Omgoodness please update
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reading my story! I'm actually writing more chapters as I type this response. There are 2 more parts that I plan to update right now, so don't worry, I won't leave you hangin' lol
-TJ
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2015 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1, Part 5
This is really great so far. I like it - it's very deep, as well as very well-written, too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I'm always critical of my writing and you made me feel better about it! a86;
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2015 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1, Part 2
Omg I love this so much I love mj in this story a lot! plz keep it going
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks for the review! I'm currently adding chapters I've already written on another webiste to the story. There is one more part to chapter 1 that I'm also working on, as well as the first part of Chapter 2, so I don't plan on slowing down lol. Thanks again! :)