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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2015 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 24

OH SHIT!

Reviewer: appleheadlover 58 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2015 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

This is amazing!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2015 10:33 am Title: Chapter 24

OMG! Shit is going to happen. 

OMG!



Author's Response: We'll see.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2015 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 23

Alriiiiiight girl! I pictured all of them and those are cool characters! I hope the celebrity character ain't Lisa Marie! Lmaooo



Author's Response: Neva, Eva, Evaaaa(in Chris Tucker voice) would I put Lisa Marie funky ass up in here!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2015 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awwww! Car spoiled Michael Lmaoo!



Author's Response: Yeah his butt is spoiled. Lol.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 21

Hah, Alex is also quite the character! Goodness, please don't let this girl be pregnant...



Author's Response: Yeah, Alex is gonna be another fascinating character like Teyana. He's that gay friend that every girl needs in her corner. I need to post a list of the new characters that are gonna be popping in and out.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oooo she goin to the club?

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Date: May 07, 2015 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 20

Lmaoooo this chapter was funny! Lmaooo at Teyana messing with Neevous Mike!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 19

Lmaooo Sky caught Michael staring at Car's ass! Lmaoooo! Sky kills me messing with Michael. But Lmaooo when Michael bust in his hand thoooough! Lmaoooo

and I missed Teyana! 



Author's Response: KMSL! You know Car can't take them two fools out to the same place together...they'd kill one another. Sky and Teyana, that is.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 18

When Naomi said Car was his girlfriend I was roooooolllin! 

And Michael was mad as hell when Car didn't call. I still think he can be a little to harsh on Sky. 

And woooow their talk though! Girl  so into this! Let's see how their relationship is gunna turn out!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2015 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 21

great chapter looking forward to the next great chapter 

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Date: May 06, 2015 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

damn such a beautiful ending to a chapter this is the way i truly imagined michael if he had a regular life i cant wait to read so much more of this story keep it coming 



Author's Response: Thank you, love. I don't think I've ever written a story where he was famous and I rather enjoy reading the ones he's not famous in. He gets to be as naughty as he wants to be when he's not famous, lol.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2015 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 20

Teyana is a damn fool! I want her to be my bestie too. Excellent chapter; I am CTFU. 



Author's Response: Thank you. And yes, Teyana is a straight up and down fool!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 18

This is going really far, really fast. Please don't be pregnant, not yet...



Author's Response: True. Their love story is intense so they're going to be taking all types of risks throughout the story.

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Date: May 05, 2015 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 17

Two words: Plan B. She is still in the 72h window. 

She really needs to take it because if they produce a child now it will be undeniable evidence that they had sex while she was underage, and Michael could get into serious trouble. Although it would make an interesting plot, Carsten getting pregnant and then trying to hide the father from everyone. 

Sky is a demanding brat. Such a Diva. She needs to control her attitude. I can see why Teyanna hates her lol. I can only imagine the theatrics when she finds out about Carsten and Michael, and her potential new sibling. 

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