Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2015 12:37 am Title: Chapter 48

great chapter i cant wait to read the next great chapter to this amazingly great story 

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2015 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 47

You all have valid points and ask all the right questions and I feed off of you all's responses. Yes, the relationship and the pregnancy were both RUSHED but she's yet young and oh so in love at this point. But so is Michael. He's wrapped around her little finger and she knows it. She's spoiled and she's rich, hell she thinks she can have anything her heart desires. But will she or will she not get what she wants in the good old state of Nevada? That's the real question! & I ain't telling, lol! Next chapter will be up shortly! On a more serious note though, notice I said Carsten came up with a very not so well thought out plan to wed Michael, doesn't necessarily mean he's going to do it! Or does it? Will he or won't he? We'll see! I've written five different versions of this story and this is by far the more drama filled one so right now, I haven't a clue as to what's going to take place myself. When my fingers get to typing, it'll be revealed to me and then to you all. But again, your comments do fuel my fire and they do greatly influence a lot of what happens in the story after I have read them. I may not always respond or respond promptly enough but I so read all of your comments and I appreciate them very much!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2015 11:46 am Title: Chapter 47

Doesn't she need to be 18 to get married without parental permission? 

It would make it harder for outside forces to keep them apart if they were legally married. Or to charge Michael with statutory rape. 

How much longer until she is 18? I've lost track!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2015 08:21 am Title: Chapter 47

Sounds like a plan, but is Michael down to elope? And isn't she still considered a minor? I wonder how they'll work this one out. Can't wait to read more; keep it up!

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 46

- weird story Michael and Carsten are wrong 

Author's Response: Well if it's not your cup of tea darling, keep scrolling. Appreciate you for reading thus far, however!

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 45

Corey really does hate Car. Wonder what else Crey did when she was younger?

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 44

Awwwwwwwwwww. Michael in this story has got to be the sweetest man on earth. I hope that Carsten's parents will look past his age and see that, and see how good he is to her. She really couldn't have picked a better man to raise a child with, and they love each other so much it is quite heartwarming to read. 

Reviewer: appleheadlover 58 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2015 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 42

Definitely wasn't expecting that information!!! And for Sky to hear her dad in the background!!!