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Reviewer: mjjismybaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2015 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 76

Oh my god....he finally told her! Now that the cat's out the bag...I hope that they can come to terms with Michael being the father... But they gonna have sum thin on their hands when sky finds out...its bout to be sum more drama! U got to continue please!!! :)

Author's Response: I'm working on it.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2015 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 76

Vanessa's story brought tears to my eyes, and Michael's confession made my heart palpitate. Goodness, this story is too good! 



Author's Response: Thank you. I'm about to go read your Thriller era story I saw earlier. I LOVE Thriller era MJ so I'll be reading with no interruptions! All the way through to the last chapter! 'Bout to get started in a few!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 75

Omg the roleplay thing in the last chapter was NOT COOL. You had me fooled. I was ready to kick Michaels ass. 

Sky is jumping to conclusions does she seriously think Michael is going to abandon his only daughter just because he wants to move into a new house? I would think that his plans would also include her, for goodness sakes she is pregnant and only 17. He isn't the type of parent to put her on the street. 

It is NOT going to be pretty when Sky learns the truth. I only hope she realizes that they didn't tell her sooner because they are afraid of her reaction. 



Author's Response: LoL! I'm Sowwy for fooling you and everyone else. That chapter was just a filler, LoL!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 75

oh heck great chapter looking forward to the next great chapter 



Author's Response: Thanks, love! I'm working on it now!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 75

Jeez, you had me reeling with the previous chapter. Carsten and Michael role playing—of course. Sky is out of control. Loving this story; keep it going!



Author's Response: LoL! & Thanks, Love! I almost said what the heck and tell y'all last night that they were role playing but I decided to wait, LoL!

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 74

Oh my!

Car and Mchael are play acting.

Reviewer: appleheadlover 58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 74

Maybe Car and Michael are just doing a bit of role play?! Great Chapter

Reviewer: love_deeply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 74

I'm confuzzled. And yes I said confuzzled.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 74

Girl you had better post the next chapter ASAP you've just raised my blood pressure through the roof with this ending. I AM SO MAD. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 74

What the fuck Michael is cheating on Carsten?!!!!! What the hell! How could he?

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 74

WHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT?!?!?! Oh HELL no! This is NOT cool!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 74

what the hell crazy ending and very confusing great chapter look forward to the next great chapter 

Reviewer: mj_lover5809 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 74

What the hell?!?! I'm so lost right now. The end threw me into the darkness. What the hell is going on?

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2015 08:55 am Title: Chapter 73

we all understand ill be waiting patiently for the next chapter 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 72

great chapter i cant wait to read some many more chapters keep up the great writing of this amazing story of love 

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