[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2015 09:25 am Title: Chapter 83
Car's trying to talk to Corey with having a better relation was such a great idea. Corey's reaction was not surprising. After Car left you had to feel for Corey because Dee down she really loves Carsten. I think that over the years wth all the arguing and feeling within her family Corey has put up a wall to emotionally protect herself.
Kevin finally got his when he touched Car. Michael really gave it to him.
Author's Response: Yeah, that ass whipping was the ultimate writing release for me, LoL!
Date: Jul 01, 2015 09:05 am Title: Chapter 63
Could it be her sister???? Hmm I don't know. Girl I'm anxious
Date: Jul 01, 2015 08:56 am Title: Chapter 83
Michael finally got to set Kevin straight ! Great chapter !!!
Author's Response: Thanks love! It felt good to get that ass whipping down in print, LoL!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2015 04:06 am Title: Chapter 82
great chapter looking forward to the next great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, love. I really do appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2015 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 82
Oh and Carlisle is kind of an asshole. What kind of man refers to his own daughter as a whore? Even if its kind of true lol. Just wow.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2015 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 82
Gotta say I kind of feel bad for Sky. She has been a touch immature and obnoxious in the early chapters of this story but this baby is obviously forcing her to grow up. I can't even imagine what it would have been like to lose my mother at the age she did and then have to go through a pregnancy alone without the support of the baby's father. Carsten is lucky she has both Vanessa and Michael on her side. Sky has Michael on her side too but he is so wrapped up with Carsten, he honestly is not being there for his daughter as much as he should be. She is having a really rough time and he doesn't even realize, instead he wants Car to kick her out so they can have alone time on the phone. Car should have smacked him for that comment.
Sky's already feeling jealous and neglected, so I can only imagine the reaction she will have when she learns the truth. It ain't going to be pretty and I hate to say it she has some right to be angry at them. They are two of the most important people in her life and have both been lying to her for months! I hope for everyone's sake that she can get past it and realize that just because they love each other it doesn't mean they love her any less. And Michael needs to pay a bit more attention to her, she thinks she's grown but she isn't yet and she needs him emotionally almost more than Car does. Car is actually a good deal more mature despite being the same age.
The only one I truly don't get in this story is Corey. I mean, she has every right to harbor some resentment towards her parents for the way they treated her in the past, that shit was foul and wrong. But she is so misdirected, why would she wish the same on her younger sister? If anything she should be glad they have learned from their mistakes and are handling Carstens pregnancy better, for Carstens sake, but something tells me that isn't the way its going to go down.
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Author's Response: Can I tell you something, Hun? It's reviews like yours that get my motor revving. I hear y'all and I take to heart your reviews and I try to incorporate them into the story. I have to admit that before you pointed out the fact that Michael doesn't support Sky like he does Car, I never gave it any though and since you did point that out to me, you got it love, you'll see his support for her bloom and come full circle, I promise.
Date: Jun 30, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 82
Just caught up with both chapters. Sky's gonna flip her lid when she figures out that Carsten wasn't kidding... Keep it going!
Author's Response: Yes she is, LoL. And when she does, I promise not to disappoint.
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2015 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 82
Car's father needs to calm down. The man is ill and Car doesn't need to end upes in the hospital again.
Car and Sky's conversation about Sky fight with Ashton's mother, was interesting. Sky had a good reason to be angry but she needed to remember her baby. You have to feel sorry for Sky when she finds out Ashton was seen at the mall with another girl.
Interesting the part of the conversation the girls had about their fathers.
Author's Response: It's about to get real!
Date: Jun 30, 2015 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 82
They need to hurry up and tell sky , she will chew them out
Author's Response: It's coming.
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2015 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 80
great chapter looking forward to the next great chapter
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2015 07:18 am Title: Chapter 80
Well that went well with Carlisle......NOT! Lol.
Maybe once he has some time to adjust to the idea he will calm down. It probably is good that Vanessa told him ahead of time if he'd found out in that room he would have put Michael in a hospital bed too.
Date: Jun 27, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 80
Carlisle went ape-shit on Michael. Very good chapter.
Date: Jun 26, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 79
Provided the circumstances, Michael is showing that he's a true keeper. Winning!
Author's Response: HaHaHa! He's the sweetest and he's only going to get more sweeter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 79
beautiful cute chapter looking forward to readng the next amazing chapter to this amazingly great story
Author's Response: Thank you, love. The next chapter is already written and has been edited. I'll post it soon.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2015 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 79
Awwwwwww Michael really is a sweetheart. I'm glad Vanessa realizes this. Hopefully Carlisle will as well.
Sky is going to put two and two together sooner rather than later. I'm actually a bit surprised she hasn't already figured it out.....Michael is expecting a baby, he knew Car was pregnant and wad worried about the baby, and Car won't tell her who the father is.....if she thinks about it, I don't see how she can't figure it out.
Author's Response: Oh it's definitely about that time. It won't be long now before she finds out and when she does, Heaven help both Michael and Carsten!