[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2015 06:26 am Title: Chapter 88
Wtf?!!!!!!!!!!!! Girl I don't even know how to react to that ending. Wasn't Sky like 11 or 12 when her mom died? How could they arrest her?!
I'm glad you're having some flashbacks to Michaels past where Sky and Byron's mother is concerned. What happened to Halle has kinda been glossed over so far and it seems that both Michael and Sky have left alot unsaid where her death is concerned. You can't tell me based on the way he was acting in that flashback that Michael didn't love that woman wholeheartedly. I find it a bit surprising that Mike hasn't thought of her once since finding out he is going to be a father again. I think he is perhaps bottling up a lot more emotions than anyone realizes.
Sky is about to go NUCLEAR on Carsten's ass.
This story is getting SO good!
Author's Response: Thank you, love. This is the beginning stages of the big reveal as to why Michael has always been so tough on Sky and why he harbors a degree of disgust towards her.
Date: Jul 04, 2015 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 87
Oh gosh , this is not the way for Sky to find out!!! Another awesome chapter!!!
Date: Jul 04, 2015 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 87
SO MUCH going on in this chapter! First Carsten's manifesto to her dad, them Michael's slip-up with the name... and then he drops the receipt?! All hell is about to break loose and I can't wait to read it. I am LOVING this story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 87
I had to catch up on a few chapters of this wonderful story. But I think the sh*it's about to hit the fan. Michael is just going to make things worse because of the way he's treating sky and I think she's going to have a lot of resentment towards him and Carsten when the truth cones out because he's been neglecting Sky for Carsten.
I hope I made sense. I love this story :-)
Date: Jul 04, 2015 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 87
- also when's the new chapter going to be used very anxious
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2015 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 87
Michael needs to lose the attitude. It ain't cute. I get that he is mad at Sky but what's done is done. He is going to push her away for good if he doesn't watch himself.
I want to read a scene where his dead wife's ghost appears and haunts his ass for the way he is treating their daughter. Something needs to snap him out of it. I don't like this version of him and I don't think anyone else does either. I can see him pissing off all the women in his life soon (Janet, his mother, Sky and Car) if he keeps it up.
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2015 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 86
Michael's attitude sinks. Someone needs to break him of his high horse.
Date: Jul 03, 2015 10:32 am Title: Chapter 86
He has some nerve to talk all this shit when he's betrayed his daughter and it's not her fault her baby father isn't helping he's really being unfair and I don't think his saying all this to sky will help when he's keeping a secret that can just tear his daughter and granddaughter away from him , he might get his wish and watch sky move out and far away from him
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2015 10:22 am Title: Chapter 86
That was an insteresting tantrum he just threw.
Michael is obviously still mad and in his feelings that Sky went and got herself pregnant. He never properly vented those feelings when she told him because of his situation with Car. If it hadn't been for him knocking up Car, he would have hit the roof. Instead he pushed those feelings down and tried to suppress them which is not going so well lol. Probably what led to him subconsciously avoiding Sky since he found out.
He'll get over it. And his declaration that he won't support Sky financially is pure bullshit. To expect her to still go to school or work if she lives at home is not unreasonable by any means. But I cant see him throwing her out or anything. Put the man in a baby store and he is already going nuts buying stuff for his granddaughter. I see right through him lol.
Hope Car can talk some sense into him. I don't see Car taking his side if he gets into a fight with Sky over this. Not only is she in a similar position as Sky, she has seen the worst possible way in which a teenage pregnancy can be handled in her own family with what her parents did to Corey.
Michael also needs to realize it is not Sky's fault if Ashton is going to be an unsupportive douchebag. Its Ashton's. She shouldn't have to suffer if the father isn't around when her own father has the means to help her.
I hope he cools off before he talks to Sky.
Date: Jul 02, 2015 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is beyond amazing. The ABSOLUTE best story on this mjfiction site. So thankful that you created this fantastic story. Cannot wait for the next chapter or two ;)
Date: Jul 02, 2015 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 84
He is going to lose sky big time
Author's Response: Yeah, Sky is definitely not going to take it well but in time, things will get better.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 84
Lol @ Hornsten.
Car is right about Sky. Michael needed to be told. I know it wasn't intentional on his part, but revealing the truth to her is now going to be more difficult because she feels neglected. I still agree with Janet that they shouldn't delay any more though. It will only make it worse.
I hope that once Sky's initial angry reaction wears off and Michael/Car stop hiding that they can all become closer.
Author's Response: Sky's character is about to come full circle. There's so much about to go down with her and I will say that it's going to allow her to be able to better handle their betrayal.
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 85
Omg Michael ejaculating into the chocolate and then Carsten drinking it was just nasty (in a good way lol). Those two are like wild animals when they get going. Janet is going to be horrified at the mess!
I'm surprised Carsten isn't triple pregnant by now.
Author's Response: Okay! I was thinking the same thing, she should be pregnant with an entire litter by now, LoL!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 85
Oh Boy wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, love!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2015 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 83
Welp Carsten tried, the ball is now in Corey's court. Car shouldn't stress about it any further. Hopefully Corey realizes what a bitch she has been and apologizes.
Michael went HAM and cheese and crackers on Kevin's wannabe sex offender ass. Good. I hope Byron grows up a bit and realizes he shouldn't be hanging out with future convicted rapists. Dude needs to get better friends.
Car's shyness around 'auntie Janet' was also endearing. You forget how young she is in this story sometimes, but it really came across in this chapter how innocent her mindset can still be at times even if her body isn't lol. Her and Michael both are really softhearted.