[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2020 10:13 am Title: Part 7
Great story, loved the ending. Felt like the beginning was a little too fast. I think they should’ve had more interaction with each other, to make that transition from strangers as not seemed so rushed. GREAT STORY. I really enjoy tour writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2020 10:13 am Title: Part 7
Great story, loved the ending. Felt like the beginning was a little too fast. I think they should’ve had more interaction with each other, to make that transition from strangers as not seemed so rushed. GREAT STORY. I really enjoy tour writing.
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2015 07:14 pm Title: Part 7
Omg. It ended already!!! I loved it!!! I thought for sure Tony lived and was going to hunt them down. Another great story!! <333
Author's Response:
Yeah it was just a short little story haha! I'm glad you enjoyed it though!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Part 6
They're both so sweet together. I can actually feel the love through how you have them interact. There's danger afoot with their decision. I feel it!! <333
Date: Sep 09, 2015 12:14 pm Title: Part 7
Yes yes yes!!!!! You are super talented girl! This story is amazing!
Author's Response:
Bless your heart, love! Thank you so much!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2015 07:27 am Title: Part 5
Well Meg believes him about his work. But is he downplaying the severity of it to protect her? Usually that kind of work usually results in people being killed.
How big is his house that he thought she wouldn't hear the screams of a man in pain. Lol. She was bound to find out. I'm glad he was straight with her.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-Chris
Date: Aug 21, 2015 01:17 am Title: Part 4
Hes so naughty! She should just admit she wore them once during a performance but considered stripping them off and throwing them to him. Not a bad idea. She should give him the benefit of the doubt but on the other hand he was beating someone up to get information he's involved in some dangerous shit. Mayne drug smuggling? That could be interesting. Or a part of the mafia? Anyway lovvve this!
Author's Response:
Interesting predicitions! Thanks for reading!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2015 08:36 am Title: Part 4
Lawd Michael what are you into. Lol. Thuuuuggg Liiiiife!!! I love this one already too. Very interesting. Keep it coming!!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2015 08:28 am Title: Part 1
Lovely start. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
-Chris
Date: Aug 17, 2015 04:48 am Title: Part 4
Just started reading this and this is good please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks love!
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2015 04:00 pm Title: Part 3
Wow... :) I cannot wait to read the next chapter; from my perspective, it sounds pretty neat, as well as very inspiring too... :) (And I hope that Evelina gets what is coming to her as well.)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much love! Once I finish updating my current story, I will be posring chapters for this story :)
-Chris
Date: Apr 19, 2015 08:14 pm Title: Part 1
Wow mj is fine i luv it im addicted already plz keep going
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I will update as soon as I can. :)
-Chris
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2015 02:05 pm Title: Part 2
Very hot!!! Michael is irresistible.... Lucky Megan :) Very realistic.
Author's Response:
Haha thank you for reading, reviewing,and rating!