Date: May 12, 2015 02:04 am Title: Chapter 18 Home Life
Is she pregnant or not? This is so juicy
Author's Response:
The answers are coming. Thanks for the juicy comment. It makes me blush.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2015 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 IN The Middle
I love this story. And it has a believable Lisa Marie in it!Pls Update soon! I'm through with mj.. Just through. I want him too get caught as well! (mostly because I love drama lol) :)
Author's Response:
I love drama too and I hope this story will keep u entertained! thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2015 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 17 Running Away
Just read this in its entirety. Michael is an epic A-hole. Why the #$%@ did he marry Lisa when it's obvious he doesn't give two shits about her? Bad enough that he was screwing Goldie right up until he married her, but it's like he took job applications for the position of wife, and chose Lisa because she sounds best on paper. But the dipshit failed to realize that his feelings towards her are what is important! Who cares about her last name when you don't actually love the woman? Instead he has now irreparably hurt the woman he actually loves. What a tool.
If I were Imani I would run away too, and never look back. Kid or no kid. Screw him. I would not even want him to know I was pregnant because he is a selfish sociopath.
Author's Response:
ah camilleianpyt u love to hate my mj! its ok, i love it actually. u dont look at things with rose colored glasses...my mj is who he is again, i hope i wont let u down. i love reading ur analysis...u have great instincts. thanks for reviewing and btw he does love Lisa...
Date: May 11, 2015 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 17 Running Away
Running away never solves any of your problems. She'll have to deal with Michael at one point someday because he's not going to leave her alone.
Lisa is very suspicious of Michael when he's not home and I think it has more to do with her lying to him then him not being home with her. The fact that she expects Michael to her his whereabouts 24/7 is laughable not even his own mother knew where he was all the time. Only his sucurity team knew where he was most of the time. Lisa Marie needs to calm down and take a seat.
P.S. I read your previous full length story and I'm crossing my fingers a better ending in this story than that one. (meaning I hope Michael gets the girl and his child)
Author's Response:
ahh a return customer. thanks for coming back and giving me a chance. this is going to be a journey, hope u enjoy!
Date: May 11, 2015 06:39 am Title: Chapter 17 Running Away
shes being stubborn they need to be together already
Author's Response:
time will tell. thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2015 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 16 Now What?
This is getting really good,
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: May 06, 2015 01:27 am Title: Chapter 13 What Just Happened?
Omg I love the pic! It is soo cute! Omg! Just wow they did it! All I can say is just wow. Michael is such a idiot 4 saying they just screwed and laughed about it! I think I feel like Imani does at the moment. I hope he can explain 2 lisa or come up with a really good excuse as 2 what 2 tell her. I cant believe she bruised him i think i would have done it 2 lol. I surely will check out ur other stories my friend. I love ur writing.
Author's Response:
thanks...yes they did it...smh
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2015 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 13 What Just Happened?
Could it be someone gets pregnant?
Author's Response:
Anything is possible at this point. Crazyme55. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: May 03, 2015 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 12 Dreams, Fantasies and Realities
I'm in luv with this story more and more. I actually loved the bisexual and transgender characters it only makes the story even more better. I have an open mind 4 ppl no matter who they love regaurdless of what or who they do in life, doesn't matter if the story is fiction or nonfiction. I think u did a fantastic job of doing this it takes a lot of guts and bravery 2 either do a story about it or have characters related 2 the story and I 4 1 admire u greatly 4 doing this. I'm glad u and other ppl have the courage 2 write about these subjects/stories. I will keep reading this story just bc I luv it so much and not only that it is also due 2 the fact that ur a cool writer who is bold enough 2 come out of the box. Ur a cool person, I have respect and endless love and support 4 u as well as other writers/ppl on this site and plz keep this story going! I'm a huge fan!
Author's Response:
thx for ur kind words. keep reading please. Also if u get a chance please check out my other stories.
Date: Apr 26, 2015 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 IN The Middle
OK glad 2 hear from u I would still read it even if Lisa was or wasn't in the story what attracted me 2 ur story was ur writing style n the title of the story itself keep it going if u plz hope 2 hear from u soon
Author's Response:
Hi! The new chapter is up. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the compliment on my writing. I try. Thanks again for your interest in this story, I liked the title too!
Date: Mar 15, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 Life "Begins"
I really like this. Try as I might, I just don't like LMP. But I will try to stomach her in your story. Just give me lots of Michael and I'll be fine! <3
Author's Response:
there will be lots and lots of beautiful and sexy Mike!
Date: Mar 15, 2015 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 IN The Middle
Gotta say I like how this story starts! <3
Author's Response:
thanks for reading. i hope to hear more feedback from you soon.