Date: May 25, 2020 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 What happens in paradise and home
best chapter yet loved it
Date: May 25, 2020 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 Going Home
loved this chapter very interesting
Date: May 25, 2020 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Other Beginning
Keep up the good work excellent chapter
Date: May 25, 2020 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 2 Life "Begins"
amazing story telling love this chapter
Date: May 25, 2020 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 IN The Middle
Great chapter very detailed good job
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 11:37 am Title: Chapter 42 Making it....Right
Loved this chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2015 09:46 am Title: Chapter 41 Open and Honest
Omg can Lisa just fuck off already? Like seriously, give it up already bitch. The man clearly doesn't want you, all he ever wanted was your name and your beat up uterus.
She has seriously overstayed her welcome in this storyline. As has Pat.
I'm kind of glad Michael is still tailing everyone, there are so many people out to screw him over I can't say as I blame him. I just hope he realizes that Imani is the one person he CAN trust and he was being paranoid ever having her tailed in the first place. She is not like the others including that cuntface Lisa.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2015 06:09 am Title: Chapter 40 Go TIME
"Co-creator of our tribe..." Girl you got me right in the feels with this one. That was such a cute proposal. Michael is so romantical...Sighhhhhh.
I'm finally to the second to last chapter I read on he blog. After the next one it will all be new to me!
Lawd I can only imagine what that crazy ass Patrick is going to try and cook up. Smh.
More soon!! <333
(Your almost to your 5 star rating!! It's more than deserved!)
Author's Response:
Yes Michael can be a romantic bloke when he wnts to be... lol poetic too as we all know. He was a great writer. I tired to capture him in the proposal. Ahh.. Patty...what trouble he is! It's coming! Thanks for rating, it helps!
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2015 05:37 am Title: Chapter 39 Hold Up Momma
"Listen here motherfucker..." Get it Mike!!!!!!!! People think because he's all "heal the world" that he couldn't defend himself physically. He knew martial arts. Lmao. Patrick take several seats and an aspirin and get your life together. Imani will never be yours. Creep.
I agree with Michael about the abusive and insinuating language. This isn't the first time she eluded that Imani was a whore and that's terrible. Fuck I felt insulted. Smh. She's her daughter. She my want what's best for her but she's also grown with a brain. Give her some credit sheesh.
Now let's get rid of The Chin!!! <333
Author's Response:
Sometimes a man has to do what a man has to do and that includes some ass kicking! ijs I wish he had done so in real life more... lol I can name a list! But anyway Pat had it coming...and then some. Melsnie loves her daughter but she is soo old school u know? She is slightly ashamed of Goldie if u ask me. She does know when to quit. Let's keep reading to find out what happens with The CHIN! lol
Date: May 30, 2015 01:29 am Title: Chapter 40 Go TIME
OMG You have no idea how happy this makes me ,it seems the plan went off without a hitch with lisa so for now she's taken care of yes!!! and imani has healed up properly so the babies are good and growing thank goodness.And last but not least that proposal from michael was without a doubt the most beautiful and humbling thing i've ever heard ,the emotion and love in that moment between them was everything .And finally that damn patrick uhh!! he makes me so sick he needs to go 4-real and now his whiny ass about to get momma melanie stirred up again i bet he's gonna spin that s**t and say michael's goons/bodyguards beat him up cause there's no way THE MICHAEL JACKSON could woop someones ass right including whoopin his punk ass 'but i'm just glad mj and goldie are solid GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy ur happy! The plan did in fact go off without a hitch.Imani's going home soon and she and Mike will be married...sounds like it's over right? it's not. Mike did kick that ass! LOL
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2015 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 36 Confessions
Now I can drag my over-tired ass to bed happy! Thank you for this chapter!
Author's Response:
Femalien U have me Dying! Thanks for thr ratings, reads and reviews! I really appreciate it!
Date: May 29, 2015 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 39 Hold Up Momma
I need to play catch up...as soon as I'm done writing my next chapter I'm diving in! Been missing me some Mike and Goldie!
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2015 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 35 Confrontation
Bravo, Michael! Damn, this was a good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks...
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 33 Missions
The bitches! Sorry, no further words...
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2015 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 30 Wishes
The divorce is in order....Lisa can keep her diaphragm and pills, she lost a wonderful man, she denied him the basic human joy of being a father.