




Date: May 13, 2015 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
YAY!!! Scarecrow to the rescue!! I knew Lion didn't really kill him. I can't wait for the next chapter!! More, please!!
Author's Response: Yup, Lion came through for them. Beatrice feels pretty guilty now for the way she treated him. More to come soon.





Date: Apr 28, 2015 06:06 am Title: Chapter 8
Man the way you write Wickus is amazing!!! He's a cocky son of a gun that's for sure. He's just a little boy with oversized toys and a mean streak. Lol. I can see why Bea just laughed at him. Playing dress up in his mothers shoes so to speak. I do feel bad because Bea didn't realize what Lion was trying to tell her which was ultimately that Scarecrow was still alive.
It was sweet though to see her finally figure out she's inlove with him.
This was such a great chapter!! More soon! <333
sorry it took so long to read I'didnt even realize you updated. :)
Author's Response: Lol yeah, it was hard for Bea to take Wickus seriously. Don't worry. She'll find out what Lion had to say soon enough. And no worries about how it takes for you to read the story. I'm just so happy you're taking an interest in it. Take your time. No harm done. I'll update as soon as I can 😊
Date: Apr 25, 2015 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this prologue, and this family is so precious!





Date: Apr 24, 2015 11:09 am Title: Chapter 8
Wickus is a horrible person. And I thought his mom was bad...goodness! The Apple did not fall far from the tree at all. The seed just rottened. I wonder how Bea will get out of this. I understand her pain and anger with lion but I wish she had listened to him. If it was about Scarecrow, I'm sure lion probably let him go? Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Beatrice was so angry at Lion that she didn't even want to be in the same room as him. Maybe she'll eventually regret not listening to him though. We'll find out soon enough. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can.





Date: Apr 23, 2015 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
To sum my thoughts up completeyl... THIS CHPTER WAS SO FUCKING HYPE, SHIT I CAN'T STOP SMILING!!! The Warlock fe'll for her?! , yup that some twisted, funny, unfortunate, amusing...twist.
Oh Lord, girl, you know what, just keep doing what you're doing.
Thank you and update.
Author's Response: You always seem to give me the motivation I need to continue this story. Thank you so much for your hilarious and valuable feedback. You're awesome 😄
Date: Apr 23, 2015 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
I've been waiting for this update!!! It all comes full circle-and, of course, our other hero will be making an appearance soon (I hope).
Author's Response: Lol sorry for the delay. Finals are coming up and it's about that time to put a little more focus into my studies. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. I'll try not to keep you in suspense for too long. As for "our other hero," maybe you'll get what you're hoping for in this upcoming chapter ;)





Date: Apr 23, 2015 07:46 am Title: Chapter 8
Awww, poor Beatrice! Now she's forced to marry that creep. *shudders* Eww! Something tells me that Lion was trying to say that he didn't kill Scarecrow. At least Beatrice finally realized that she loves him. I can't wait for that reunion! More!!
Author's Response: Things are looking pretty dark and gloomy for Beatrice. I hope you're right with your assumption about Scarecrow still being alive. I guess you have to wait and see :) Yes, Wickus is such a creep and hopefully he'll reach his end very soon. Thank you so much for your consistent reviews. It means a lot.





Date: Apr 08, 2015 01:08 am Title: Chapter 7
I think Lion has something brewing. I'm hoping at least!!! Great update!!!
more soon! <333
Date: Apr 07, 2015 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
GAH!!!!! This is too much! I know it's gonna have a happy ending (I hope) but still. Please let them make it out!





Date: Apr 07, 2015 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well Lion was not as friendly as I anticipated. He scared me, pissed me off, but I also feel his Prescence instilled some sort of hope for Scarecrow's and Beatrice's efforts in a strange way. I mean he is some sort of leverage now. And even though I think him "attacking" Scarecrow before those Doll Creatures is Malarkey I still felt Fear.
And to think all of this could've been avoided if Damn Scarecrow wished her Happy Birthday in the Darn Cave. Lol.
Author's Response: Yeah, Lion working for the other side was a bit of a surprise. But maybe he'll eventually fall on the right side as the story progresses. Lol I guess Scarecrow chose a bad time to try and be romantic.





Date: Apr 07, 2015 08:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Nooo!! Something crazy is gonna happen, I know it! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Lol you have to wait and see. More to come soon.





Date: Mar 29, 2015 07:20 am Title: Chapter 6
That was the cutest thing!! Scarecrow being all protective and possessive of Bea with Simon. Like "No you don't jive turkey!!" lol.
I'm so sad Bea didn't really hear what he said before he kissed her. I'm hoping now that the feelings are mutual between them. Scarecrow sounded so hopeful and in love.
I guess Bea is about to meet a not do cowardly lion now. I wonder what happened there.
Your Oz is so magical. Lol.
More soon! <333
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that the magical elements I'm incorporating here wouldn't come off as too weird or anything. I have a thing for epic and fantasy elements so I'm trying to apply them while simultaneously keeping Oz familiar. It good to know that you are enjoying them. :) Yes, it was unfortunate Beatrice couldn't hear what Scarecrow had to say but...maybe she'll get a second chance? And I guess you're wondering what on earth is Lion's deal. Lol All will be revealed about him in the upcoming chapter, which will be coming soon. Thank you so much for your faithful reviews!



Date: Mar 27, 2015 09:32 am Title: Chapter 6
Your story is so amazing! This chapter took me on a roller coaster of emotions, worrying about what will happen to the heroes' relationship.
Author's Response: Why, thank you so much! I do hope you stick around as the story progresses. I should have an update appearing sometime next week. Thank you for reading and I look forward to getting more feedback from you in the near future 😊





Date: Mar 26, 2015 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
They kissed!!! Yes!!! That was adorable. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have another update sometime next week, Lord's willing a86; Thank you for following the story.





Date: Mar 26, 2015 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
“I’ve never had anyone to call my own before. If you stay with me, Beatrice, it would be awe-inspiring. We can come here every night, if you wish it.”
I just can't get over the way he talks, intelligent.
When Scarecrow said that she was the one to stay with them "forever" I could amainly and eerily hear that word echoing in the back of my mind until they shrunk to nothingness.Lol it was comically scary. Poor Scarecrow. Beatrice was clueless as to what he was saying, each and every one of his genuine thoughts went unperceived, though it was an innocent casualty on her part. However No matter the foreshadowing disappointment and heartbreak Scarecrow may or may not experience in the future.....BEATRICE BETTER make sure that in the end he is happy or she will be antagonize. I'm sorry but that's just how I feel. But she likes him too so taking such actions may be avoided.
Thank you and update.
Author's Response: LOL. I cannot stop laughing at how engrossed you are in this story and you're very clear that you want Scarecrow to be happy. I love it! I'm so glad your heart goes out to him so much, even if it is to the point that you're threatening Beatrice. Lol I don't blame you though. I would too. But Beatrice is crushing on him pretty hard so hopefully by the time this story ends she'll make things right? Maybe??? You have to stick around and see for yourself. Thank you so much for this great review! Yes, expect an update next week :)