[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Such a lovely chapter! I was wondering when you were going to address the fact that Beatrice, at some point, will have to make the choice of staying in Oz or returning home. Can't wait to see how she handles the situation. Love this story! Keep up the amazing work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, unfortunately a decision has to be made. It looks as if no matter which world she chooses to reside in, she's going to feel a pang of lost. Looks like we have to wait and see what happens.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww, poor Scarecrow! He's so hurt! I hope Beatrice can fix it! They so obviously belong together!
Author's Response: Beatrice has a lot on her plate right now. Let's hope she can handle everything that's been blown her way. Stay tuned 😊
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh GOSH! Did this HAVE to happen soo soon!!??? I mean they just reunited and were happy and giddy and so were we and then you do this!
You know what?! I'm so upset with you that I'm not even going to leave a review....nnyyaahh! *blows raspberry* ......so how you like them manzanas?
Lol, jk. But this was a nice update very smooth and satisfying . A bit upsetting but I'm sure there will be a foreshadowing reliever, I'm choosing to be optimistic.
Author's Response: Lol you are too funny! Don't be upset with me lol. I'm sorry but it was best this conversation happened now before more serious things like Wickus get in the way again. Yes, stay optimistic please. I just love your passion for this story! More to come soon 😄
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
Damn it Beatrice!!! Hurtin my Scarecrow like that. The hell!? I really hope they can work it out. And why don't her parents come to live with her there? Hasn't anyone thought of that? Dorothy will be too old for Scarecrow to want her and besides, he loves Beatrice. Please continue soon. I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for offering another option for Beatrice to consider. You're so thoughtful a86;. We just have to wait and see what happens. I'll update as soon as I can. Thank you for loving my story! 😄
Date: Jun 09, 2015 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awww, poor Scarecrow 😢
Author's Response: Let us hope things will turn around for him. More to come soon.
Date: May 29, 2015 10:43 am Title: Chapter 10
Ahhhh, Miss One! I was hoping she would show up soon d84;a039;
Author's Response: Yup. It was about that time to bring her on in here. Lol I hope you'll enjoy what else I have in store.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2015 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
This chapter was amazing! Cannot bear to wait for next. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have an update for you soon a86;
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
For a minute there I thought Wickus was going to pop up. I'm glad they got away!
More soon <333
Author's Response: Don't worry. You haven't seen the last of Wickus. Besides, he's pretty angry right now and is going to want revenge.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2015 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Miss one! I'm glad to see her here!
That entire escape was a wild one lol it was so much fun reading it.
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt that Miss One's appearance was way over due here. I had lots of fun writing out this escape so I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2015 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awww, poor little Tristian! I hope he's goona be okay. By the way, his name made me smile so hard, cause my younger brother's name is Tristan. Pretty much the same, minus one vowel. Beatrice finally got to meet the infamous Miss One!! Yay!!
Author's Response: Lol Tristan is a great name. That's also my little cousin's name a86;. And yes, Miss One has entered the scene. I'll post as soon as I can.
Date: May 28, 2015 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this story !!! Keep the chapters coming !
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and will do. I hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2015 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
First I must tell you I was singing "No Bad News" aloud. Lol. Awe man. This was such an awesome chapter. I'm glad it didn't take long for Scarecrow to come and rescue her. Is this almost the end?!?! I know Wickus is furious. I love how you write him!! His cockiness is his demise after all. I knew Lion had something up his fur!! So great. I felt the reunion "Don't let go of my hand" Sigh. :)))))
As I said this was a great chapter. More soon! <333
Author's Response: Thanks. I was worried that this chapter wasn't going be very effective so I'm very glad you enjoyed it. More to come soon. As always, your reviews are appreciated, so thank you.
Date: May 15, 2015 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Return to Oz! This sounds very creative!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you stick around until the end. Thank you for reading :)
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yeeeesh. I dont even want to imagine what Wickus' flesh wound might even look like....an eye dangling out or something disgusting...yeeck! Karma. That skywatcher was hilarious, wanting to retire for the day, complaining about his wing...just, Lol.
Halelujah! Scarecrow, with assistance from Lion and The Munchkins, has saved the morning.
Thank you and Update.
Date: May 14, 2015 10:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Lion pulled through! And they escaped! I know it's not the end; I look forward to even more adventure :-D
Author's Response: Oh, it's definitely not the end yet. I have big plans for that part. Don't you worry. More adventurous on the way.