Date: Jan 28, 2019 05:50 am Title: Chapter 1
HOT! Ur story is amazing!
Date: May 13, 2016 11:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Very good descriptive writing!
Date: May 13, 2016 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Very good beginning!
Date: Apr 13, 2015 06:35 am Title: Chapter 27
This is sooo sad! Very well written
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: Apr 12, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
Date: Apr 01, 2015 11:36 am Title: Chapter 27
Damn she's dead! I wonder how MICHAEL will survive now. He will probably learn that you miss your water when the well runs dry, and the mistakes he made he will forever regret. I'm sure he's gonna pay for her funeral and stuff too.
Author's Response:
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
Author's Response:
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
Author's Response:
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
Author's Response:
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2015 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 25
She's gotta say YES
Author's Response:
cross ur fingers!
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2015 09:59 am Title: Chapter 20
I'm disappointed I was hoping Eugene would be a good guy. Michael needs some major competition.
Poor Mona she has had some pretty shitty luck with men.
Author's Response:
I think we all hoped that Eugene would be a nice guy... he fit the bill didn't he?
Date: Feb 26, 2015 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 20
So she's determined to have shit luck with men? Why can't this girl win? Michael ain't shit but a trifling cheater and Eugene is an abusive asshole? What has Mona done to deserve this? I can't. SMH
Author's Response:
Well, I understand ur point of view... Please don't stop reading. Thanks
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2015 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Liz gives great advice.
What Michael did was disgusting. Mona had better make him BEG before even thinking of taking him back. I hope she gets with Eugene too, if only for a short while. What Michael needs more than anything is a taste of his own medicine. That man is too damn used to getting his way and needs to learn.
Author's Response:
Oh there is begging...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Feb 23, 2015 09:34 am Title: Chapter 19
I hope Mona starts seeing Eugene. Nobody cares about Michael's ass crying, good he needs to suffer! He's a fuckin spoiled brat he's used to getting anything and everything he wants all the time. Mona needs to pay his ass DUST! It's not her fault at all and she was not the one being dishonest and a ho, that was all him as it always is. I don't feel sorry for him and I won't ever. Finally somebody has stood up for herself and left his trifling ass alone.
Author's Response:
love, I feel the love... lol She did stand up for herself. Ithink there comes a time when you have to say that is this about love or about respect. Michael's himan and has feelings too. i wanted to express it, yes it may be to late to do so but there u have it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, please continue to do so. you all makes this fun!
Date: Feb 18, 2015 12:16 am Title: Chapter 16
Smh Mona is gonna get hurt, Michael ain't no damn good. She's gon learn the hard way. Unless she starts having some fun of her own.!
Author's Response:
Well just read and see... Hurt happens to us all..smh
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: Feb 17, 2015 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
Damn all he thinks about is fucking. And it seems Mona is always ready and willing to fullfill too. Hmm.. Something just doesn't seem correct here, but I'm tuned in. Lol. Mike just may be a damn sex addict, even if Mona is the only one he's sexing. At the moment, cuz I still don't trust his ass.
Author's Response:
Yes Mona follows his lead. She knows noother way to be but also she loves it. She is discovering herself with him. It may not be correct because its fiction...:) He was a Sexy beast back then...lol
Date: Feb 17, 2015 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 14
You seem to have great instincts and just for that, I will post the next chapter right now...Lets see what happens next.