[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2015 07:40 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Wow this is just getting better and better every time you're an amazing writer can't wait for the next chapter I'm a ready hooked on this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that!!! :))) So much more to come and be revealed. Up next Michael and Ria. Stay tuned!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
WHAT?!! How can you do this to me! Who gave her those earrings and HOW did she get them!?
Michael was kind of mean about it... I get maybe they stirred some emotions in him but damn "I said take them OFF!" chill out home boy... damn she just thought they were a gift!
And "Just have to wait for my situation... to subside." LMAO I don't know why that made me laugh so hard lol lol lol
MORE MORE MORE!!!! Now you've turned me into a crackfiend.
Author's Response:
Now you guys know what's in the box!!! Lol things will start to unfold.
As for Michael being upset it's more of a knee jerk action. The last time he saw those earring Ria was wearing them and she was alive. Then she gets killed and there gone. Now here they are. I know Marley is really taken aback. More on that soon tho!!
I pictured his hand gesturing towards his crotch when he said that so vividly. I laughed too when I wrote that. lol.
Next is Ria and Michael reunited now what!!! <333
Date: Jan 28, 2015 05:47 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
fdjbdyhrj RHDKBNF oh MY GOD 😩😩😩 what are you doing to us??!? first you seduce us with your charming cute words of love between mike & marley: the dancing & then when they were alone dhkfyvdjf "His eyes wondered down from her face to her body." oh. "She turned walking seductively stoping just short of her bed." OH. "he began to leak a little." oh. aND THEN BAM!!! next morning we wished we didn't know what was in the box! wHO WOULD BE SICK ENOUGH TO DO THAT 😩
..ok but now, I think Rhoda might be behind this, if not Kenny. she was kinda desperate to keep Michael & kept coming back. maybe he didn't like how he ended up with ria. But I don't know man, I just don't know anymore *rocks back & forth* ;-;
lol
Author's Response:
Lmaooooooo I swear you make me cackle!!!!! Real tears!! 😠Lol. You guys wanted to know what was in the box. Don't worry there's more to come with the lovin with Marley and Michael. But next is Ria and Michael rekindling!!! I told you I would have you questioning who the culprit is!!! Hang in there with me!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2015 05:13 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Yasss!!!!
Author's Response:
<333
Date: Jan 23, 2015 02:44 am Title: To Be Or Not To Be That Is The Question
YASSSSS Mike and Ria are going to try this relationship thing out! So happy for them! I feel bad for the officer but hey.. He's handsome. He'll find someone else.
Author's Response:
Yup!!! Michael and Marley are stepping out on a date finally. Let's see where it takes them. The night will be filled with romance for sure. How far will it go? Lol. Thanks for joining me over here tree!! Love you!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2015 02:17 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
Poor Ria smh.
Kenny is a miserable person who is jealous of a man that isn't even in the same town. This was such a well-written chapter. I hate what to Ria s going through. I hope she gets the courage to leave his behind. She is not financially-tied to him amd he can very well kill her.
And Rhoda.... I don't like her for some reason but I don't understand why Michael decided to shack up with her if he has no real feelings for her. He needs to drop her and let her find a simp man that actually WANTS to be USED by her lol
Author's Response:
Kenny has serious issues stemming from his family life and deep seated insecurities. It's an awful unstable mix. As for Why Michael is even bothering with Rhoda iys a case of holding on to nostalgia for way too long. He does have feelings for her there just not love feelings lol. It's wrong of him to use her like that but she's using him too for other reasons. <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 07:29 pm Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
YASSSS Michael name and claim that girl!!! I knew it would be dangerous for them two to live together. Way too much sexual tension. I like Officer Canton and so but Marley does indeed deserve the best and the best is Michael!
Author's Response:
He's not making no mistakes and pussyfooting around with Marley. He learned his lesson with Ria so he's staking that claim!!Living together set it off nicely!!! <333
Date: Jan 22, 2015 06:37 pm Title: The Interview...
I'm here menen!! Can't wait to continue this wonderful story!!
Author's Response:
Tree!!!!! Yay welcome to the story!!! Lol ;) it's going down!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 01:28 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Great chapter...now maybe she can tell Michael was an ass Kenny has been...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! Yes they will talk about Kenny but somethings will be kept back a bit. Stay tuned to see what goes down!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2015 01:15 am Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Awwwwwww the meeting was so cute! I half expected Ria to faint again lmao I love the surprised reaction from Michael. He was so excited to see her. Just warms my heart.
Finally we get to see what's in the damn box lol
Author's Response:
Lol. She didn't faint but she did throw up in the morning from nervousness. The meeting was really sweet next it's time to catch up. Let's see what will be revealed between the two of them. <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2015 12:49 am Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
JESUS! Ole crazy man Kenny is back in the streets! I just know it's him! e.e why isn't he locked up somewhere far off? Smh I just know it's him. I feel it's him!
ITS ABOUT TIME THEY GON ON THIS DATE. They are so damn cute together ugh! Michael is still sexy as ever. That kiss definitely was something. Bee just makes me smile. She's so adorable and very smart! I'm sure she'll notice michael and Marley dating way before they are ready to tell her lol I just hope whoever is stalking Marley *probably ole Crazy Kenny* they leave Bee alone. She don't need to be harmed :(
marley open the damn box! ;-;
Author's Response:
Lolllll. Everyone gets hit with this question...Is it Kenny?!?! Can you be sure? We will see.
Yess date night is coming up and the contents of the box will finally be reviled. Bailey is a very smart girl. She's like her daddy in that vain. The stalker's craziness has only just began. Stay tuned!!<333
Date: Jan 20, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Hey! Just wanted to say that I have been reading your story and I'm in love with it! You are a great writer and this is one of the best stories that I have read on this site! I'm so glad that Michael and Ria are finally reunited and I can't wait for the next update. Awesome chapter and great story so far!
Author's Response:
Hey welcome!!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I appreciate your kind words. Yes!! Finally they meet again and so far so good!!! They both have been pining for each other. Next chapter...What's in the box?!?! lol. Stay tuned!!<333
Date: Jan 20, 2015 06:09 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
Whoo hoo! They are elated to see each other again. I can't wait for the lovinN.
Wonderful updates!
Author's Response:
Them meeting again was medicine for their soul!!! The Lovin will be spectacular when it comes. You know Michael will be bringing IT!!! Love you!!! <333
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:49 pm Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
What's in the box. Yes it's Gotta be Kenny watching him. He iss angry. Michael gets them all! Well maybe if he was more of a gentleman and not a bully he would have a nice girl! Nit Ria because her heart was always with Mike!
Author's Response:
Is it Kenny?!?! Lmaooo I'm asking everyone this question because as the story progresses you will ask yourself this question more than once.
Ria's heart has always belonged with Michael and Kenny knew that but he had to win!! But ultimately he lost and your right it made him very angry!! <333
Date: Jan 20, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
OMG! Call it fate! She was going to interview the man she truly loves! Not realizing he feels the same way!
Author's Response:
Wasn't that something?!? I bet she never thought in a million years she would get this gig. It's even more fate that her boss doesn't even know she knows Michael so intimately!! <333