Date: Feb 07, 2015 11:57 pm Title: It's Understood
Reunited and it did feel good....
That was HOT!!! Michael showed her in everry single way how much he missed his 'puddin'. I'm so glad that Ria is finally pursuing happiness with a man that will truly treasure her. The absence of a condom though??? We'll see what happens there...
...and Rhoda is like a little gnat that just won't leave!!
Great chapter menen!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Tree bb!!! ;)
Michael sure did sure her. He wasn't messin around with his Puddin this go around. He wanted to stake claim!! This girl is his whole life so he's going to go to the mountain top and back to make sure she's happy and satisfied. That's his Ria!!! :))) Ria is on the pill so that's why she was ok with the no condom.
Rhoda is most def a gnat!! She gets shooed put keeps popping back up. Like girl!!
Thanks fornyhe love Tree <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 11:27 pm Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
"Kenny was relieved more than anything else and was quite indifferent to his sudden departure"
Date: Feb 07, 2015 11:11 pm Title: Scattered Daises
Oh, poor Marley. Why is there something in me suspecting that a Mr. Kenny is to blame or, perhaps, some other, mysterious ex-lover of Ria's?
Author's Response:
Ahhhhhhh everyone's theory so far is that it's Kenny. We'll see!! ;) <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 10:54 pm Title: Broken Promises
Ohh, noo! Why didn't I start reading this sooner??
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're here now!! Read on!! <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 10:38 pm Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
"WHAT?!?!?! The betrayal!!!!"
Lollll, I'm looooving this, Men! But I gotta know the rest of the story with Riaa!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooooo. She blindsided herself!! Her mind and body betrayed her. Read on!! <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 10:02 pm Title: Heart Of Gold
Oh, I seeeee :)
Author's Response:
Yessss!!! ;) <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 09:45 pm Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
Awe, I'm loving it and Michael's relationship with little Baylee. :) And about Marley, well, hmmm... I'll hold my thoughts off on that one for now.
On to the next...
Author's Response:
Michael and his little munchkin will warm your heart as the story goes on and you will see Marley is an absolute sweetheart!! <333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 09:35 pm Title: The Interview...
Oh my word, yes, Menen, I love it already!!! I've finally gotten around to reading this and am about to dive right in. I see your writing style has grown, too, I'm really excited to see how you weave this together (I still read Art & Soul sometimes :) ).
I'll talk to you later. I'm sure there will be a lot for me to rant about.
Author's Response:
Heyyyyyyyy!!! Welcome to the story Jazii!! Omg. I can't believe you still read Art & Soul. That story is my baby. I really need to revisit it and finish it up. :)) I'm so glad you finally got a chance to start reading this!!<333
Date: Feb 07, 2015 07:39 pm Title: It's Understood
would you look at that! a cliffhanger at the end of the chapter yea? Lol so lovely of you for doing that!! 😩
whyyyy what are you doing Rhoda gO HOOOME!!!! Don't nobody want you!! 😑 & I was so ready for that morning lovin' ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ª this might not end well.. just when things were looking so good ;-; why am I so emotionally invested in this. I personally feel attacked rn like .. this is somehow cruel & unusual punishment lol ;(
Author's Response:
J I swear you kill me. Yes girl another cliffhanger. I have to keep y'all on your toes. If it's any cancellation won't end with a cliffhanger. It will start with one Dunn dunn dunn. I only kidding. Lmao. Or am I?
Rhoda is like lint every time you brush it off and you think you're home free here she comes again. Smh. It won't end well I can tell you at least that much but it won't be for long it gets dealt with quickly.
Awwwwwe I'm sorry bew!!! You will love me in the morning I just know it!!! I'm kinda honored I'm able to strike a cord in you guys. I can't thank you all enough for the motivation!!<333





Date: Feb 07, 2015 06:24 pm Title: It's Understood
Omg! Rhoda... smh... I can't wait to see how that pans out.
But AWWWWW!!! Now that is what I call a reunion!!
"Come home with me" goosebumps!!! I literally got goosebumps reading that, cause I could hear his sexy 'deeper' voice. Ah!!!
And "Where are you taking me... to paradise, girl" omg!!! Shoot, I wanna go! lmao!!
Girl, yes! I'm still dying to know who sent those earrings!
Author's Response:
Yup Rhoda (said in the dryest voice possible)lol.
Michael was not giving up his chance with her this time. If anything seeng her again made his love strengthen so it was hard to resist the lovin!! I know the voice very well cause it's what I here when I write his words. So damn smooth! I wanna go to paradise too shoot.
We will find out more info on the earrings next episode. ;) <333





Date: Feb 07, 2015 04:50 pm Title: It's Understood
ooooooooh drama!
Author's Response:
Yup the drama is about to start!!! <333
Date: Jan 31, 2015 05:39 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
What an awesome chaper!
What a romantic date Marley and Michael had. You could cut the sensuality with a knife!! And later that night!! LAWWWWD I love Baylee but she picked the most INOPPORTUNE time to knock on that door!!
Those earrings though... I could feel Michael's hurt and pain when she saw Marley with the same earrings his late wife wore when she passed away. Who in the WORLD sent those to Marley??? This story is getting better and better and I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
Don't make us wait too long!
Author's Response:
Thank you Bb!!!!
Baylee is always popping up when they least expect her to. Lol. Notice how she just skipped out the room. I'm glad you liked the date. I was hoping it didn't come off corny.
Yup those earrings tho. The Mystery increases!! I'll update as soon as I can. We have another supposed storm brewing!! Lol. We'll see. Love Ya much!! <333





Date: Jan 30, 2015 03:25 am Title: Passion Overshadowed
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
That's all I can saay for this last part. Just who in the purple fucking hell would do this? What the hell is this shit? I'm sorry for cursing I"m just feeling a lot of things right now
This dragon's blood is stron and I'm over here boiling omg
Just why!?!?! This is cruel and fucking awful. I hate everything on this earth right now.
I hate it all!!!
Let me take a break for a minute. Okay, Michael asking folks when they gave their flowers away. Boy, if you don't mind your business and worry about your own DEEDEE
But here he go, proving he's a sex god from sextopia in sexappolis in sexville city in sex much greatly galaxy. The milkway!!! Michael's such a damn uuuugggh
I hate this dude so much for this.
He ruined me when I was younger and started reading fics. I know it changed my life forever. Michael was the only love I needed back then.
I'm writing a bio
let me leave now
great update and gaaaaaaawd
please update soon
Author's Response:
WTF indeed girl... Things are starting to heat up. Not only on a romantic level but mystery wise as well. Luckily she's supposed to meet with Officer Canton later so she can get him to look further into it. That in its self...I've said to much. *Evil grins... Him being intersted in her flower though!! Lmao Natural conversation flow. I hope you're buclked in because this rollercoaster hasn't had its first drop yet...but it's coming so hold on! Bits...love you to bits I say.<333





Date: Jan 29, 2015 11:00 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
"Oh God."
"Not God baby, Michael'" SHIT. THAT KILLED ME. there is something so dark and sexy about that ;_; you and Teddy love me bc I'm getting loving from both y'all stories and am loving it!
The earrings!!!!!!! wHAT. HOW. WHY. AND WHEN. I ain't gon ask who bc I still believe it is Kenny u.u but that is some shady mess ;( I feel bad for Michael and Marley. They are going to be tested through this relationship. I just know it. Ugh whoever it is aka Kenny, needs to stop being a creep and just leave them alone!
Author's Response:
Lol. He was hilarious for saying that. It was dark and sexy. Can you even imagine!! *Falls out!
ok done things are becoming more obvious now. But are they as they seem? Marley and Michael will be tested a great deal!! It's only just begun. They'll finish up what was started soon though. ;) <333





Date: Jan 29, 2015 01:51 am Title: Passion Overshadowed
Did Kenny kill Ria? That would be just sick!
Author's Response:
Just hang in there with me. We will get to the bottom of it all!! Stay tuned for Michael and Ria!!;)