[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2015 11:04 am Title: The Give That Takes
OMG!!!! I've never wanted to strangle a character so bad in my LIFE!!! Girl, Rhoda's little intro had me all sorts of angry! What a bitch! Her ass is not pregnant! I HATE females that use a baby (pretend or real) to keep a man.
And by chance if she really is pregnant, her threatening to kill the baby!? SHE'S INSANE!!! The lowest...
I love that Michael stood by Ria, though. I hope he continues to regardless of this crazy bitch.
Girl, continue soon!! The drama just got REAL!
Author's Response:
She was soooooo smug right? I know Michael wanted to just dip her ass in some fire ants to shut her up. I can't stand it either when women do that. You saw what she did to bring about the pregnancy so she's capable of anything and its vile. There are actual people out there that do stuff like that and it's insane. Yup Michael wasn't going to let Ria leave him again. No way not after all those years. If she does anything it will be on her not Michael.
The drama did just get real!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2015 09:23 am Title: The Give That Takes
Can this get any messier?
Author's Response:
Mayyyyybeeeeee. Lol. Next chapter won't be messy at all. You'll enjoy it!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2015 11:08 pm Title: The Give That Takes
If anyone is thinking you're crazy, then that's on them being a mess. There's a method to your madness and I love it. If they knew just how talented you are, they'd understand. So shame on you guys if you think my mentor is crazy. There's absolutely nothing wrong with her!
Jesus, look at me being all protective. 
Let me calm my short ass down. I'm looking forward to the killer being revealed so I can throw things. Maybe even if my cat if she gets in the way. Maybe I'll have to read that update outside so I can throw rocks into the woods. I am so ready. You've got me in right now so I'm wondering about all the connections.
Now, Rhoda. Girl, you are hilarious. You funny as hell, but I don't believe the baby is Michael's. I don't believe she's pregnant either. She's pregnat with hot air. She's full of hot air. She ain't pregnant.
I refuse to believe she is. I'm conducting an investigation. Here we go!
Researching......
Input from higher sources........
And so, the bitch just ain't pregnant
There is no pregnancy
The end. 
Author's Response:
Aweeee thank you for the protection. It would be from my own self though because I'm calling myself crazy!!!
We found out the killer Bb. It's Kenny. Michael spoke of it in the last chapter.
I LOVE your Michael court analysis pics. Lmaooooooooo. "Hashtag this bitch lying your honor!!" Lmaooooooooo!!! <333
Date: Feb 28, 2015 10:22 pm Title: The Give That Takes
me everytime: 😩😩ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
rt if u creyd
lmao no omg but why do I keep posting my reviews on the first chapter?! am I that emotionally unstable & mentally detached to reality to not notice lol can I blame you? I blame you! 😩😂 ok so when I started reading I was hesitant bc I didn't know whether to keep reading or not.. I could just feel their emotions & I didn't wanna go through that 😩ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ ugh but I talked myself through it and I made it out alive! I was right though!! this crazy ass hussy needs to get on with those lies!! jesus fix it! 😖
Author's Response:
"rt if you creyed.." I did cry at this. Lmao. You are too much!! I love it!!
its all good I enjoy your reveiws to the fullest no matter where they show up. I just look forward to seeing them!!
Yessssss you did call it. I want you to read. I don't want you to hesitate lol. There will be a bit more fun next chapter so you won't have to worry about picking up on the emotions. They'll make you happy!!
Rhoda is indeed a crazy ass hussy. How dare she. Smh. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2015 06:04 pm Title: The Give That Takes
She's too twisted. Stick with Ria, Michael. I get that she is trying to put the blood on his hands, but she's the one who as the ultimate say, regardless of what she tells him....aaaand that's assuming her ass is even pregnant. SMH. Such foolishness. If I was Ria, I'd insist they move to a building in which Rhoda couldn't make it past the doorman. Looking forward to the upcoming lighter chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes that is exactly what Rhoda is trying to do. It's crazy she went though the whole sabotaging the condom to hold this over his head because of his love for children. She's diabolical to say the least. We just have to hold out hope Michael won't give into her whims because like you said what ever she does will be on her own hands. Yes a bit of a lighter chapter coming up with your favs. Michael and Marley will have a little fun! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2015 03:26 pm Title: The Give That Takes
Noooooo
Author's Response:
Lol. I'm afraid so. Rhoda is showing her true colors. Marley and Michael are up next!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2015 03:15 pm Title: The Give That Takes
That Rhonda chick is one sick crazy psyhcotic bitch I really hope Michael doesn't give her what she wants take her ass to court , hell sue her but I do think she's lying though. I wouldn't be surprise if she and Kenny plotted and worked together in killing Ria neither, both of them are some pathetic sorry excuse for human beings. Still not really feeling Marley sorry I'm all for Ria all the way until the very end. You're awesome I love this story can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you love. Yesss Rhoda has finally snapped it seems. We will see just what Michael will do. It may all just be a rouse. Team Ria it is!!! Thank you so much for reading!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2015 01:23 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Random pet peeve - "lose" is to 'lost and found' as "loose" is to 'one's pants are too baggy'.
Wait - he took Marley to the same restaurant he'd taken his wife to? That doesn't sit well with me. That feels...uncomfortable.
I'm not confused. It's obvious who the cop is. I definitely favor Michael and Marley chapters.I like to see how he balances her as 'nanny' and her as 'gf'.
Author's Response:
Lol. I fixed it. A type-o my many re-reads missed. I should start using the grammar check too. Lol. It's a pet peeve of mine too with to, two, too etc. I fall victim to it sometimes and it makes me cringe. Lol.
Yes he did take her to the same restaurant. He'll come to explain it to her in a future chapter.
Mission accomplished I think with the opening scene and subsequent assumptions. Muhahahahaha. Lol.
Marley and Michael seem to be the favorite amongst everyone so far. It's going to be a delicate balance with him and Marley. Baylee of course will have to be considered in all things and with the intensity ramping up with the stalker things will be interesting for sure. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2015 11:22 am Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
WHO IS THIS MYSTERY MAN!?!?!! And what the hell did Michael do to him?! I'm no Nancy Drew so don't expect me to put any clues together I'm probably going to be in confusion until the answer comes out LOL. I'm thinking it may be Kenny like he never really died...
I knew that motherfucker killed Ria... smh!!! I'm hurt over it. I personally like the Ria/Michael romance better so far but I love Marley too.
Good that Michael apologized for lashing out like that. She couldn't have known about the earrings..
Steven... yeah I'm sure he'll take 'friendship' I don't like him. The same feelings you have about "Shade" in the Roommate story, I have about Steven.
UPDATE SOON!!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. Hopefully you won't be too too confused. Things will fall into place soon.
Ria and Michael's story is up next and yes now we know that Kenny is the culprit. The how and why still to come.
Yes. Michael realized he acted out of character because of the shock of seeing the earrings. He would not have been himself if he didn't apologize to her.
You know the level of dislike I have for Shade so I feel you on how you see Steven. There is something about him. <333
Date: Feb 15, 2015 05:15 am Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
I prefer Michael and Marley because the Michael/Ria era was during the early 80s and Mike was 'TRICIA'S' man at the time LOLLL.
Naw seriously, I like both parts. I know eventually everything will come together and I'm looking forward to it all. This was a great chapter...
Kenny... smh. He won't rest until he destroys Michael completely. And Officer Steve... something extremely sneaky about him.
Author's Response:
Lmaooo!!!!!! Speaking of Mike and Tricia you need to finish that story for my sanity girl!!! How you liking this brick ass weather!!! Smh!
Yup everything will come together in time. One love story will end making way for the other to start and continue.
Thanks Tree my love. Next up is Michael and Ria. The Rhoda drama continues.
Kenny is hell bent. Isn't he!! <333
Date: Feb 14, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
I'm digging Michael and Marley, but yooo ...
You still got me with this Kenny/Steven thing. So Kenny faked his death and is now coming back for revenge? I feel like you gave it away with the whole description of his backstory, but I still wonder. You right differently for Steven but id course you got to keep us questioning.
But anywho girl I am loving this story sooo sososo much. I know if I've said once I've said it a million times but its never enough. This is officially entering my top 5 favorite stories I've ever read. Forrealll, girl!
Looove en it!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Jazii. Another one for Michael and Marley!!
i was hoping to have you guys thinking hard on the Steven/Kenny connection. All you know for sure tho is that the opening character might be Kenny. The back story is very telling and purposefully so. ;) Remember Ria's story has not concluded just yet.
Im so thankful you're putting this in your top five stories. I appreciate the love and support. <333
Date: Feb 14, 2015 08:04 pm Title: The Interview...
soo... Kenny & Steven, or should I say Kenny is Steven, huh? I..
very wicked mind you have e_e I love it! lmao 😩 omfg No but this is taking a turn I couldn't fathom like.. this is good, really good. which is why I can't choose between Marley & Ria.. both are so intriguing; the mystery of what was and the anticipation & hope of what will happen is extraordinary. but this Rhoda situation doe.. I'm thinking she'll pull some crazy lie saying she pregnant or something to try to get him back.. you said it will be taken care of quickly so I'm holding you to that! quick & painless please!! ;-;
I should be the one thanking you! It's so hard finding a story that truly depicts the characters actions & emotions in such a realistic & raw form. it just captivates me & that's hard to do. so thank you for sharing & consistently updating. :)
Author's Response:
Is Kenny Steven? Lmaooo I'm answering your question with a question.
Im glad both eras are intriguing to you. You are very perceptive and I love it. I won't say yay or nay on any of your hypothesis.
Rhoda's scheme is up next and it will be taken care of quickly. But will she still be scheming in the background?
I'm really grateful that the story captivates you. It gives me a push to give you guys consisten updates. Also I feel like I'm doing my job if you can emotionally connect with the characters through my words. I will always thank you guys for sticking with me! <333
Date: Feb 14, 2015 07:16 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Michael and Marley
Author's Response:
Yayyyy. Team Michael and Marley is in the lead so far. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2015 06:27 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Yassssssss can't wait to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Hang in here. Next episode is Michael and Ria! <333
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2015 04:51 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
I'm feeling a lot of things right now. First of all, you are a goddess and the love of my life. I have to put you up on a high horse for a moment. I love everything you do. Sincerely, I love everything you do. From your art to your writing. This is why I call you my mentor. I can't even put it into words right now. I love you so much!
I have Baylee for the day though! I wonder what we're doing? I think we're somewhere buying lots of Disney related things because that's what I'd do lmao Ask Brie! She knows I'm always buying Disney stuff. Hey, I love clinging to my childhood.
I can't wait to read the next update to find out what Rhoda wants.
But okay, I am so heartbroken for Michael. He lost Ria and now it's coming right back. Kenny's punk ass makes me sick to my stomach. Just ugh!!!!!!!!!
Lovely update though. I just ugh. Kenny makes me sick which is why I won't talk about him.
Author's Response:
You butter me up so!!! You know for a fact I siphen from your pool of dialect writing!! Lol and I love you much for the support you always give me.
Yessss you had Baylee Bee for the day. New York City was your oyster so I'm sure yall lives it up. She has school next week!
I know Kenny is your favorite person in the world next to Rhoda. You will find out what she has up her slimy sleeve next episode! <333