[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 11:09 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
I had already read this chapter but I had to go back and review for the last chapter but now here I am... Rhoda gave me a headache, she's already a pain to me and I hate hate hate Kenny. Can we say he's a drunken bastard or no? And Michael no no no Rhoda is not the route honey. If all else fails I'll be his baby forever!
Author's Response:
The two antagonists here will make your head hurt. So much hurt happening needlessly. If only they had made the right choice. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 11:05 am Title: The Officer Or The Gentleman?
Okay.... maybe I'm feeling #Michley idk yet...
I feel like I betrayed Ria!
Author's Response:
Lol. Look at you switching sides. #Michley get really cute!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 08:15 am Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
TUT. My heart, its dying. I'm losing life.
I love me some Usher, why you had to do this? Its cool though but I'm still with #Kamichael for now.. even though shes forcing herself to love Kenny when that should NEVER be done. Just because he was there don't mean nothing girl. Buy him a cake, give him a kiss on the cheek and a thank you and keep it pushing. Smh.
Author's Response:
Ria was so lost here. I know Michael's heart died with how things turned out after he came back from school. Things could have been so different. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 08:09 am Title: Scattered Daises
I couldnt even leave a review for the last chapter to get to this one.
Giirrrrrl, im dying.
#Kamichael , but i feel bad for Marley, I wonded who broke into her apartment. I'M WRAPPED.
Author's Response:
Still #Kamichael. Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 07:58 am Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
#Kamichael
I feel Baylee, I lost my mom when I was 5. Its hard thats very true, when she grows up she'll understand.
Anyway, I hope Michael heals some more. I can still tell how its an open wound.
Author's Response:
Awe I'm so sorry to hear you lost your mom!:((( and so young too. :(((I can't even begin to imagine what things would be like if I lost my mom. I feel so strongly for Baylee especially since she's come to know Marley as her caretaker since she was a baby. She wants so bad to call Marley mommy. :(( HUGS!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 07:51 am Title: Heart Of Gold
I felt bad when Kenny showed up Michael's gifts until I read that Ria cherished Michael's more.
This is so cute and I love Baylee.
I'm actually Team Ria right now though. Marley has yet to win me over but maybe when her and Michael have more private dialogue I'll feel better about them being together but for right now im all for Kamichael.
Author's Response:
Lol Kamichael!! Marley was never really impressed with Kenny's wealth. The locket was her heart. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 07:42 am Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
I just got all the feels from this chapter and I don't even know why. I started reading this but I stopped but I'm back now! I feel bad for Michael and I'm so angry that Ria died, ahhh, but I'll have to see whats in store. Baylee is so cute. Moving on, next chapter!
Author's Response:
Welcome back to he story Brandy!! :)) There is so much in store. Baylee is a cutie pie. Such a smart little girl.<333
Date: Mar 16, 2015 11:24 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
TBH..... I love Michael and Ria. I love how he was so in love with her, even as a little boy. I mean, Marley is cool and all, but I really hope Baylee doesn't start calling her mommy or some shit. Cause then I'm gonna be pissed. And I hope Michael visits Ria's grave or something and at least get some closure and some reassurance to be able to move on with Marley. All in all, yay Team Ria, nay Team Marley.
Author's Response:
I think the teams are evening out now. Lol there where a lot of team Marley before. The situation with Bylee is going to be very sensitive. Michael and Tia will be talking about that very soon. <333
Date: Mar 16, 2015 10:32 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
yaassss! happy chapter!! amazing as always! 😄😍😊
but that ending though mhmm .. mike & marley ayy *thrusts* 🌚🌚🌚 haha
They're so in tune with each other, like everybody. the way Marley takes care of Baylee; Same with her & Michael. (I think I mentioned that before?) they're so great together! which would make me think that Michael will probably open up about what happened to Ria. And I think I'm having déjà Vu .-. Lmao.
so yea! I hope that detective finds out who's doing all of this. very smart move of Michael I must say. Bc I don't trust nor do i like officer Canton. very shady stuff.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thrust indeed!!! We will get to that after the crazy that comes along with Ms Rhoda. Yes Michael is making sure he has some kind of control of the investigation. He's goibg to protect his girls at all costs. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 10:29 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
I think Marley has the right, if Michael is serious about the relationship.
I think Michael may be a storyteller, but this story will be hard to tell.
Rhoda needs to go the way of Diana in your other fic. Michael needs to not listen to anything she says. I think that if he needs to stand by Ria. He can't let Rhoda manipulate him into a relationship...that sets a bad precident and it will not change. That being said, I'm half dreading what will happen. Eep!
Author's Response:
It's going to be a very hard story to tell. Michael hasn't really spoke aloud what happened. Not to anyone not even his mother. It will be interesting to see how he will go about it. As for Rhoda it all comes to a head hold on to your hat! Lol. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:01 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
That was beautiful as always. It was great seeing them together again and being extra cute and adorable. I think Marley should wait for Michael to tell her. He'll tell her when the time comes. You can't blame her for being curious either. Especially when they're in the early stages of the relationship and they wanna know everything about each other. I think in due time he'll tell her what went down. He's in love, so he'll tell her the truth. I have faith in him!
But oh gawd, the next episode. I am ready for this to unfold. This baby that ain't even real! I'm hoping Ria doesn't let it come between them. She can still be with Michael. He doesn't want Rhoda so I'm hoping she can see that!
As for Road Rash, move the fuck on already. I am so tired of this. Why? Just why? She can find other things to do. Find some new D and move on with your life. Lying won't get you anywhere. Michael doesn't want you. He's not gonna think "oh wow let me marry you and take care of this baby because that's a smart idea"
Even if the "baby' is his, it still doesn't mean he has to stay with her. Yes, he can take care of the baby but he ain't gotta do shit with her unless it's for the baby.
So the plan don't work
The plan ain't got no erection
The plan simply cannot fuck
The end
Great update though <3 I love you much
Author's Response:
Yesss thank you bew!!! The next episode is going to be...let me consult Gwen Stefani for this...B.A.N.A.N.A.S. Road Rash...DEAD!!!! We will see how it all goes down!! <333
Date: Mar 16, 2015 05:06 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Girlll every time I read this I be thinkin cttg is a songgg loll
They cute they cute **cough cough** for now **cough** lolll jkjk
Good Update 😂👏👏👏
Author's Response:
LOL There is a movie called Cradle To The Grave starring DMX but this story is nothing like it. I don't remember if it had a song to it. It might have tho. LOL <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2015 03:54 pm Title: The Give That Takes
Rhoda is a nutcase!! Auughhhh Michael was crazy for even getting with her in the first place.
I don't believe in abortions at all, but Mike should chuck the dueces at Rhoda once and for all and let her do whatever she wants to do SMH.
I'm glad Ria plans to stick around but I surely wouldn't with a coo-coo chick like Rhoda acting like Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Rhoda is a nutcase.But in defense of Michael, when he got with. Her she seemed pretty sane. But...
She's trying to blackmail Michael into choosing her and we will have to see what happens. Michael is smart though so we can only pray he makes the right moves.
Neither Michael nor Ria needs this insanity in their life. Especially with what's to come. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:29 pm Title: The Interview...
Oh, I know it's Kenny. It's just the fact that I need to see all of this come together!!
Author's Response:
This is a journey into sound young padawan!! We'll get there!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:19 pm Title: The Give That Takes
YO WTF Rhoda you crazy ass bitch! I...wtf ;-; all for a man??? come on now even Michael AINT worth getting THAT crazy 😩😩 she needs SERIOUS help. I hope the baby .....well I'm conflicted, she doesn't desrve that breath of fresh life at all but I hope she isn't the one who kills it. I hope that makes sense lol she just doesn't desrve the little bundle! But then again e.e she might be lying. I mean I beliveve her but at the same time, she might legit be lying. Because why hasn't she answered any of his calls if she really is pregnant??? Hmmmmm??? MHM ole lying snake
Author's Response:
Yup!!! The crazier part is there are women who have done this crazy BS in real life. Smh. Rhoda is very self serving so using a baby to bait and keep Michael is not far out of the scope of crazy shit she would do for status and well...being with Michael Jackson.
I know what you mean and you're right is she lying or nah!!
lmaoooo "ole lying snake" that she is. She's very manipulative and Michael knows it all too well.
<333