[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2015 06:06 am Title: Nervous Wreck
I've only played Monopoly once and that was three years ago. I'm forever jealous of folks who play it all the time. You just reminded me of the fact that I still haven't bought a game for the house yet so I gotta get on that. That was the cutest damn intro ever. Michael's 40s slang! It was on point for sure lmaoo I was cracking up at that.
Rhoda be like
Lawd, I feel for Rhoda. She pisses me off but I feel for her. Love will make you lose your damn mind and do some crazy shit. At least Michael wants to be in the kids life and is wiling to take care of it.
I'd wake up every morning ready as hell to fix his breakfast. Bright and early
If he made me come three times, I'd make him his meals all month. Eat it in bed baby. Get crumbs in the bed. I'll clean it up for you. No ants will get to it fast enough cuz I'll be there to clean it right up. He can eat bbq in the bed and get it all over the sheets
and then I know I'd be crying over the D if I don't get it
But, Tut, sweet mentor of mine, the D had me cleaning bbq sauce out of the sheets and well
I feel like I wrote this review just to remind myself that I need a serious Judy Garland day.
But lets get back to everything else
I feel so awful though :( I honestly think the baby woulda been the best thing in Rhoda's life. With all the stuff that's happened, I think the baby would have made her so happy ya know? Being hurt over Michael not wanting her, she would have had the baby at least. I wonder what she's going to do next though. I'm worried, anxious, excited.
Thank you for this chapter!
More soon because I really wanted to click to a next chapter after this one!
Hurry, but take your time but also hurry because I need more
*plans to watch some Judy whenever I wake the hell up today*
Author's Response:
As "Some Where a Over a The Rainbow" plays
Monopoly is insane after the first couple of rounds. It can become all out mayhem. Lmao. Michael and his impressions. You wil see it's something he loves doing.
Its a very sad thing over all losing the baby. He or she could have been a light in their lives. I would only hope that Rhoda would have been humbled by the baby and not be so focused in Michael. It could go two ways. She would fall in love with the baby and forget all between her and Michael or she could resent the baby and use him or her as leverage to make Michael pay. I would hope for the former to be true. But alas we will never know. She's not done just yet but her last roll will be interesting. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 11:35 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Thanks for replying to my other reviews, I really respect it when an author does that! im happy ria is staying by his side! And omg i kinda felt bad for rhoda but i dont because i feel like from the start she has only wanted michael to love her so she can be set in life but michael has told her like i dont love u. I think its sad but thats life, omg i saw that picture and i knew i was like omg shes gunna lose the baby :( its a good thing that she wont be on mikes back anymore but its still very, very unfortunate for a life to be lost. Lovely as always
Author's Response:
No problem. I like interacting with my readers. I respond because I know it's what I would want myself. The picture was kind of telling Huh! Lol yes Ria is standing by him because She doesn't want to lose him again. I do feel bad for Rhoda too but in trying to get what she wanted she lost everything. It is life. Like you said. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 09:41 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
I'm torn on if I would do as Michael does in that situation (try to console her). I mean, it wasn't like Rhoda seemed to want the baby and it came from a deceptive act. At the same time, it was a loss of life. I'm glad Rhoda's desperation is taking a backseat. Now if we could just live wiht Michael and Marley lol. You are adding in extra suspense simply by switching back and forth, as I have to wait longer for the next M+M scene. That being said, knowing my fickle ass, soon I'll be asking for more M+R scenes than M+M.
Speaking of words: Tooned/tuned :P
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo. I reread the whole story only to realized the 'tooned' was in the end notes. Thank you for that. I changed it.
Michael was feeling a bit of guilt knowing it was his exchange with her that may have been party to her crashing so that's why he was being sensitive to her because he realized she could have died. That and it was like a punch in the gut loosing the baby.
Not to worry bb!!! Michael and Marley is up next. I know when it comes to the point where there's no more M+R I will miss writing about them. Lol. It's creeping up onto that time too. :((( <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 08:23 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Thanx 4 da update!
Author's Response:
You're welcome bb. Thanks for reading. :) <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 06:25 pm Title: The Interview...
"Yes he was a widower now, the love of his life ripped from his arms by a malevolent force that he once had true affectionate brotherly feelings for."
Damn. I felt that. Lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. <333
Date: Mar 22, 2015 08:41 am Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Aughhh how dare you stop the chapter so suddenly!! Cliffhangers *sniff, sniff* so mean and cruel to your faithful readers *SNIFF*
I so loved this chapter. Marl is such a good nanny to Baylee and I really like how Marl and Michael got the chance to truly know each other not just as employee/employer but potential lovers. I know the delay of lovemaking had more to do with their busy schedules and wasn't deliberate, but that delay has caused them to reallly enjoy each other. I SOOOO look forward to when they finally INTIMATELY enjoy each other. I need to go buy snacks for that particular chapter LOLL
As far as the questions you posed, yes, I do think Marley has the right to know what exactly happened to Ria. Marley is not involved in it too and it would not be right to keep her out of the loop.
I honesly don't think Michael will be that open with it. It is still painful for him, but I hope he overcomes and truly becomes honest with Marley
As far as the next episode... Rhoda is a PSYCHO! I have no doubt we haven't seen the last of her and I truly don't know how Michael will handle the ultimatum. I look forward to reading about what he does though.
Menen, this story is progressing wonderfully and I am totally into it!! Please update ASAP!
Author's Response:
Lmaoooo!! *sniff sniff.
Marl is great with Baylee. I love their relationship. Michael and Marl have so much to talk about.
We most def have not seen the last of Rhoda. I'll be updating tomorrow!! <333
Date: Mar 21, 2015 07:01 pm Title: The Interview...
Another great update! Michael took the plunge and let Marley know he loves her! Yes she needs to know about Ria and what happened in order for their life to move forward..
Author's Response:
Yes. Up until now neither of the had said I love you out right. Now it's out there on the table. They have lots to talk about!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 06:35 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
You dont understand like I read this story so quickly, im so sad but i couldnt stop because i love it. Like i couldnt get it out of my head. You're such a good writing and I am absolutely obessed with this story, it is literally perfection. Youre one of the reasons i even bother wirh mj fiction like stories like yours literally give me life. Love it, love it, love it!!!!!
Author's Response:
I can't say just how much I appreciate your reading everything and giving me your thoughts. I'm BEYOND appreciative for you taking the time. I'm humbled everytime some one new comes along and tells me they like my story. Thank you seriously!! Stick around with me for the ride. You won't be disappointed I promise you!!! Thank you thank you thank you!! <333
Date: Mar 20, 2015 06:17 pm Title: The Give That Takes
Rhonda is such a bitch like omg. First she pops a hole in the condom so she can get pregnant just to be like oh if u dont leave her ill abort it like omg what a bitch
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 05:38 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
Well obvi its kenny like who else could be behind all of this, he said so himself that he had created a new identity that couldve been other dead person in that explosion. Im sure it was all staged. Thats also the reason y michael could kinda remebrr the hand writing because its that of his friends. Truth be told I like marley & mike better because I think its more certain and like we already know Ria is going to get killed so it kinda puts a sad taste in your mouth because you cant get use to their relationship because you know it has a sad ending whereas m&m you are still wondering and questioning like this could have a sad ending with m&m too but we just havent reached that point yet.
Author's Response:
Dun dun dun!!! Lol this is where the nail biting comes in. <333
Date: Mar 20, 2015 05:17 pm Title: It's Understood
I'm reading this whole story and im so in love i would feel bad not commenting on all the chapters. Him & rias bonding was perfect, like i love seeing them together its like FINALLY haha but only i whats going to happen with roro
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 04:57 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
So the date was perfect and i got to admit i felt the sex was a little rushed but im a bit happy baylee interrupted hahah and omg i wonder who is stalking them but it was kinda stupid mesing up her apartment because now she moved in with michael and it has made them even closer so idk what this persons intentions are
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 04:36 pm Title: Reunited, How Does It Feel?
I love that youre telling his past and future, its almost like reading two different stories love it
Author's Response:
I like this aspect too. I try to create links between them whether it's a song or a scenario. I always make a little link so people don't forget it's bot two desperate stories while at the same time each era had its own drama. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 20, 2015 08:00 am Title: Looking Back And Moving Forward
Totally was up at 1am reading this and knocked out, now im back >:). I wanted her to open the box hah & i think it might be kenny watching them.I think u were foreshadowing when kenny said michael couldnt always win.
Date: Mar 20, 2015 01:40 am Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
I kinda like how u go between stories like it makes things interesting
Author's Response:
I've never read a story that straddled time lines before. It was risky but I'm glad it's coming out like it's happening in my mind. And I'm glad you guys appreciate that. <333