[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2015 11:25 pm Title: Finally Found Out
Dear Kenny
Okay one more!
Go the fuck to sleep! I can't stand this dude and I'll say it each time he shows up. Fuck you, Kenny. I hope there's always snow in his drive way. I hope he bites down on hard things in his food and it makes him lose his appetite. I hope the white crayon in his jumbo pack is ruined and he can't use it for anything. I hope the AC in his car don't work and his ass is musty by the time he gets to the corner store. Then I hope he doesn't find his usual deodorant. Ol ass smellin mothafucka
I hope Michael gives him a beat down if they cross paths. Please, let it happen. I would love it. Michael knows the full truth now and I think he's ready to bounce his ass. I hope he carries a brick with him where ever he goes. "What ya got in that bag, Mike?"
"A brick cuz ima turn this mothafucka into a wall."
Damage needs to be done. I want him to get his ass GOT.
as always, great chapter
you know how I get sorry
Author's Response:
LMAOOO when it comes time for some ass kicking for Kenny I'm coming to you to facilitate it. You know how to deal with the case!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2015 08:57 pm Title: Finally Found Out
Ugh... Kenny. I wish he would have just left these two alone!! He's going to be the end of Ria I just know it. I'm a fan of Marley, but Ria and Michael are my favorite together!
Thinking about her flinching with Michael raised his arms was heartbreaking. I can only imagine how Michael felt. It's going to be hard for me to let go of MichaelxRia when the time comes...
Sigh...
MORE SOON!!!
Author's Response:
Michael and Ria will be hard to relinquish. There's still a little left with them. It is heart wrenching with the flinching. It really got Michael to thinking. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Finally Found Out
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you dear!! <333
Date: Apr 19, 2015 07:29 pm Title: Finally Found Out
USHERRRRRRR AHHHHHHHHHH lolll I'm weakkkkkk okay okay back to the story *business mode**
So yeah dang I feel bad for Kenny but he a scrub lol "I dont want no scrub..." umhm he don't deserve ria and he better stawp calling my boo weak cuz my boo aint he a thug certified hood rich lolll and ria omg dangg all she went through with kenny glad she done with his srry tail
Lol Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Lol Kenny is relentless. He feels so entitled to Ria so he's going after her now that he found her. <333
Date: Apr 08, 2015 11:16 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
A part of me wants to feel sorry for Kenny b/c his actions and mentallity are somewhat products of his fathers doing but then I remember that he is still is his own person and he does make his own choices. Plus it's obvious that he has a strong hated and disdain hatred for Michael and for reasons that are quite pathetic.
I don't think they should tell Baylee yet. Especially since they're so new. I think the should wait a little longer. JMO.
is this the last installment?.... Darn it, it is. *sigh* Guess I'll just wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. :)
Author's Response:
Who and what Kenny has become is most def a result of his father. More will be revealed on that end for sure. As will his hatred for Michael . The Baylee situation is definitely a very delicate one. I'll be updating soon. In a few days hopefully!! <333
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:55 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Ria needs to tell Michael about Kenny. Not just b/c of their new and blossoming relationship but b/c Kenny was also one Michael's closest friends.
Glad to see that Michael finally told Rhonda straight up. I guess Rhonda really did love him? In a strange and manipulative way. I don't even know if that's to be honest. But they do say that love makes you do some stupid things, so... Idk.
Rhonda lost the baby. That's sad. I feel bad for both of them.
Looking forward to mas. :)
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:50 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Glad to read that Baylee is doing well in school.
Michael is definitely a helpless romantic.
And to answer a question you had a few chapters back, I don't mind either relationship. I'm fine with both to be honest.
Again looking forward to more.
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:44 pm Title: The Give That Takes
Rhonda and Kenny would be perfect for one another. Both are crazy and both are dillusional. Could be some sort of spin off or ish? Do what you want w/ the idea just don't forget to give me some credit when it makes it's debut on MJFiction or whatever other website you decide to put it on... Jk
It's late, I'm tired and now I'm rambling. On to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Lolllll. I will most assuredly credit you!!! Would be interesting! <333
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:37 pm Title: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity
At first I'm like "is Kenny officer Steven?" And now, especially how you ended things I don't know what to think... Unless... Is he is partner? I know you can't tell me but just blink twice if I'm getting this right. Or am I just completely off and should just shut my mouth and wait? Either way I'll still be reading.
Looking forward to mas. :)
Author's Response:
That's where the suspense lies my dear. Lol. Everyone is wondering whether they are tha same person. Stick around and you'll most definitely see. <333
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:29 pm Title: It's Understood
Look at that, the two love birds are united. Two thumbs up from me on that one.
Here comes trouble! It irks me how writers stop like that but then there would be no suspense, so I guess it's not too bad given the end results. Rambling, my bad.
Looking forward to more. :)
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:21 pm Title: Hurt In The Lost And Found Of My Mind
I think it was very sweet to read that Mama Kat was at the hospital with Ria.
Ria not pressing charges is a big mistake IMO. But of course it opens the door for more drama, and I like me some drama. Lol.
Mike still w/ Rhonda? That boy done goofed.
Really looking forward to the next installment given the way you left things. Great chapter btw.
Author's Response:
Mama Kat is like a secondary Mother for Ria. Being that she had a hand I. Taking care of her when she was little and was there for her when her own mother passed away. There will be drama. Lol. <333
Date: Apr 08, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Passion Overshadowed
Every time the box was mentioned it made me think about that movie with Brad Pitt and Nick Furry (I don't remember his actual name... Samuel Jackson?). I thought she was going to find some seriously disturbing things in it. Which she did but my mind is quite a bit more cynical.
The beginning was very sweet though. Lovely. Definitely an ideal first date.
looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response:
Lol yes the box. I knew everyone had the same thought about the Movie Se7en. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2015 09:11 am Title: Divinity In Motion
Ahhh finally Mar and Mike have consummated their relationship!! Mike went ALL OUT for his boo and I was up in HERE reading it. Aughh I love it! No Baylee, no interruptions-- no nothing!!
I'm kinda ready for Kenny to start trouble though... is that bad? I'm ready for the drama LOLLLL
Great read as always!!
Author's Response:
Yassss!! The loving has been had and damn if he didn't lay it down nice and proper. Don't worry my dear the drama is coming!!!<333
Date: Apr 06, 2015 12:43 am Title: The Chances We Take The Mistakes We Make
I knew I wouldn't like Kenny. Just happened sooner than I had expected. Yeah he might not have the life he wanted but that doesn't give him the right to put it out on Ria. And he even said so himself that Ria loves Michael, with that knoweledge I would have dropped her and gone and pursue someone else.
And Michael and Rhonda. Both are in it for the wrong reasons and him and Ria are obviously meant to be, so not a fan of that pairing.
I can see (well read) that stuff is about to go down, so looking forward to that and more. :)
Author's Response:
Lol now you're seeing his true colors. You'll see why he was so adamant on sticking around and possessing Ria so to speak. There will be ALOT going down so I hope your in for the ride!!! <333
Date: Apr 05, 2015 11:59 pm Title: Sad Math, Add And Subtract
Poor Mike. And poor Ria. It's obvious she feels an obligations to be with Kenny b/c of what he's done for her and it obvious she doesn't love him like she should and it must suck to be in a relationship that's not based on love.
And Kenny, I don't hate him but I don't love him either. I'm pretty sure he'll be causing more problems for Mike and Ria, so I'm sure naturally I'll grow to dislike him, or maybe not. To early to tell.
looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Michael and aria so clearly belonged together from the beginning of it all. Can't wait to see what you think of Kenny as time goes on lol. <333