[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2015 01:55 am Title: Unintentional Lies
Another tip. Why you do this!?!? I can't believe you. I didn't get to review earlier because my god sis came over, but damn it!
I don't care if it's nearly four in the morning. I need an update soon because I wanna know what's gonna happen after this. Just what the hell is going on! Delivery guy was creepy. "Who was that delivery guy anyway?"
Who the hell was the delivery guy?
I'm worried for Ria and Michael. Kenny's gonna show up and make my ass itch gravely. Dis sumbitch!
I'll try to be patient, but I won't lie to you. I need more soon
Author's Response:
Prepare for the ass itch of a life time Hunny. He's coming!!😊😊😊
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 07:33 pm Title: Unintentional Lies
Michael should have told Marley straight up. She had the right to know.... Damn and now he's in this mess. His cock all ready for some action and he ain't bout to get NONE.
I think Kenny was delivery guy!!
Continue soon though I need to find out if I'm right lol
Author's Response:
Nope that cock is not getting wet tonight. That's for sure. Lol. We'll see. That delivery guy was so suspect!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2015 04:25 pm Title: Unintentional Lies
Ooooh snap!
Author's Response:
Oh snap indeed! Lol <333
Date: Jun 07, 2015 03:33 pm Title: Unintentional Lies
Ugggg you left us hanging! Marley didn't even give him a chance to tell her! Even though he should've told her sooner! Another great update.
Author's Response:
Lol Dun Dun Dun!! He should have told her sooner. We'll see how she takes it! <333
Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:36 pm Title: The Interview...
Just realized I made some more typos. Excuse the stupid-ness of my tablet. This damn auto correction shit is bugging my nerves.
Author's Response:
It's all good bb <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:16 pm Title: Heart Of Gold
First off, I'm going start off by sayin in ny last review, I realized my typo. I meant to say goddaughter not granddaughter. Noting good and well im only 18 with no kids to give me any grand chillens. Kml.
Anyway, I love the flashback between him, Ria and Kenny. Kenny is just an unaltered mess always wanting to be bigger and better when when in reality Mike is. But I do love their friendship they have. Although something is telling me that Ria and Michael are going to take their friendship to another level. I do feel that she was his wife. I'm not sure. Anything is possible.
Now, as for Marley, I do think Michael has some feelings for her. Just a little something. And, hey, they might end up together. I'm just gonna sit back and read and see what happens. Hopefully what all I said is true if not. Ehhh! :/ I tried guessing, lol. But I'm sticking with my gut feelings. Hmmm
Author's Response:
Lol it's all good. I had figure you meant goddaughter. Kenny was constantly trying to out do Michael. It gets pretty serious. You're pretty close in your theories though. Keep reading lolll. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 12:09 pm Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
Michael is such an amazing father. Just pure amazement, I tell ya. And Baylee is so cute with her cute self. She reminds me of my granddaughter Arielle. She does the same thing and only 8 years old. But I'm just so curious as to how his wife passed. I guess I gotta finish reading the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Michael is an amazing father and little Baylee is just a sweet heart. You'll find out what happened to her mom as the story goes on. It's going to be an interesting ride. <333
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 11:53 am Title: The Interview...
Girl, the intro was great. Please don't be mad at me for taking so long to read this. I wasn't going to leave this behind and I'm really starting to love it already. I just can't believe our Mikey smokes, lord!!!!! I can't wait to read more of this story So you might see a bunch of damn reviews by me. So get ready. That's if my ass don't fall asleep. Had dance practice this morning at nine. But anyway, I will continue to read this. Such a great start. :):)
Author's Response:
Awr Thanknyou so much for reading this story too!! Lol Michael smoked in Inked too. He smokes in Inked over as well. Hope you get rest boo<333
Date: May 29, 2015 10:27 pm Title: Finally Found Out
I love how you dissected Kenny's personality and psyche! He has some serious issues! Jealousy has taken over him, and I am terrified! Jesus! It's so sad how insanely jealous someone can be. They really have underlying issues with themselves. Rhoda is another who is insanely jealous. I have a hunch that both of them will suffer greatly! I just hate that she told Kenny where Ria is.
Author's Response:
Yup. Kenny has a lot of issues. A lot if it caused by his twisted upbringing. I think he would have been worse off if he didn't have Ria and Michael in his life when he was younger. Rhoda grew up just like Kenny so that's why they share a similar psychosis. <333
Date: May 29, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
So these two finally did the do! It was very magical! THey seem very in sync with one another. Hope in the near future, they will be able to tell Baylee about their new relationship. I don't think it'll be tough as she already loves Marley like mother.
Author's Response:
They love for made finally. No little Baylee to step in. Lol. They are very in sync. They will eventually tell Bylee about them. So much is at play right now. <333
Date: May 27, 2015 10:53 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Wow! So Rhoda really was pregnant! Why do I have doubts that the baby probably wasn't his in the first place! Just an excuse to keep Michael in her life! I sure hope Rhoda is out of the picture because she was on my last nerve with her childishness!
Author's Response:
Yup she was really pregnant. She put a hole in the condom to assure that she was. Thinking a baby would get Michael to stay with her was just ridiculous. <333
Date: May 27, 2015 10:34 pm Title: A Touch, A Kiss, A Whisper Of Love
Great chapter! I'm glad these two were able to put that shocking incident on the back burner and get on with their budding relationship!
Author's Response:
It was a long time coming and they were not going to let anything stop them. Especilly since it was out of their hands anyway. <333
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2015 12:50 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Kenny is absolutely insane...I don't even want to know what he's going to do next...
Author's Response:
Kenny sure did lose it when he saw Michael and Ria where together. His father was an obstacle in the moment. He's headed for more of a down fall. <333
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2015 04:19 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Kenny is crazy!!! I can't believe he killed his father like that! So effortlessly... no remorse, no regrets... smh. That guy is twisted.
But let's talk about the BEGINNING of this chapter... Aughhh Michael and Ria make me just want to stare at my computer screen and smile like a nut. They are so beautiful together!! That intimate scene had me salivating!! Michael sure does know how to throw down!!
He truly does love her and I'm glad he wants to make it official and ask her to be his wife.
This chapter was jam-packed! Romance, suspense... HOMICIDE!!
I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
It sure did take a crazy turn there. The good lovin then Kenny's crazy self shows out. He was in the moment with killing his father. Trust me it did make an impact he's not quite feeling just yet.
Michael and Ria are perfection together and they're getting married. Happiness will find them. At least for a little while. <333
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2015 09:18 pm Title: Soft Then Vile
Well damn this chapter took a turn! You already know I adore Michael proposing on his birthday and I'm so happy she said yes! Now I'm ready for baby B to come along. I can only imagine how Michael will be.
Kenny, I still feel for him very very very very very slightly but that man has severe issues and has officially lost his damn mind. Killing your own father?? I mean, yes it happens, too often unfortunately but still! Ugh I'm worried about rias death coming soon now. I ain't ready for it, tut!!
Author's Response:
Yesss he proposed on his birthday. They're tying the knot.
This is the catalyst that sends Kenny into a nose dive of the cliffs of sanity. He's lost to us now. It's sad because he went through a lot to get where he is. It wasn't pretty I could only imagine. <333